A Broken Soul!

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He could hear everything, but dare not open his eyes... he'll just cover himself with a blanket and cover his ears. You might think he's afraid of ghost, but it's not.. his reality is scarier than ghost.

When his mom and dad are quarreling in the next room. This scenario always happens, mostly late at night because he's dad always comes home late.

Jacob is still young but he already understood that there's something wrong with his mom and dad as he always hears them quarrelling with each other, although in front him they don't quarrel but they don't talk much as well.

Whenever Jacob was at school he always envy some of his classmates that was sent by their parents, mom or dad because he didn't experience it. His mom is also working so they're only maid will be the one to sent him at school.

He also envy some of his classmates that had their lunch box prepared by their mom. He has his lunchbox too but it was prepared by his nanny. His nanny was good to him but he always craves attention from his parents as they are always busy.

Whenever both of his parents are home they don't do bonding as well because they are also busy with their laptop or gadgest and when he wants to play with them, they'll gonna say they have unfinished works to do.

But what saddened Jacob most is when he hears both of his parents always quarreling at night. Sometimes his dad comes home late and he'll hear his mom saying,

“Where we're you again this time? Over time at work? Come on, why don't you just admit that you had another woman!”

“Cynthia stop it! I'm so tired of your naggings almost every night! I can't take it anymore! Why don't we have divorse instead?!”

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Poor Jacob, he doesn't understand what divorce means. He's still young, innocent and vulnerable.. his childhood was filled with fears from hearing his parents fights. He had parents but it seems love isn't in their vocabulary. He has roof over his head, a pleasant food to eat, and good clothing but he is broken inside.. he is a broken soul.

This is a fictional story derived from reality, mostly broken family are always producing broken souls.. souls of their child that they didn't manage to nurture as they are busy fighting with each other and does not think about their children sakes.

Jacob symbolizes the products of broken family, what they really wants and insecure with..to have a loving and complete family.


Maybe you're wondering why the story was short and seems it was cut, it's because I did it via The Most Dangerous Prompt Generator.

This is the prompt that I chose, I wrote for 5 minutes.. and that's where the time ended after Jacob's dad asking his mom to have divorse. The start again appeared, so I stopped writing and that was the end. The site will give you prompt, you just choose what you can pull off.

You can try this too, it's too cool. It will exercise your brain to think of your plot and type faster. Show your creative imagination with time limits.

This was given by @meitanteikudo and I read this from @Yen..

What are you waiting for? Write now..and enjoy!

I like it, I just finished this whole damn article in less than 25 minutes.. including wrapping up everything haha! Kbye.

Image: Pixabay.com

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Date Published: March 22, 2022

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hehe pretty convenient app diba? It helps us focus and not procrastinate in writing. :) Win-win!

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2 years ago

Kapag nag aaway yung parents, unang naapektuhan talaga is yung mga anak. They should be considered as irresponsible parents because their actions unknowlingly makes their children suffer!

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2 years ago

This story hurt me a lot, Due to the mistake of parents, the world of children is shattered like glass. The children later became mentally insane.

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2 years ago

That is sad reality. We are creating a bad example for our kids so we can't blame what our society has become.

Pag rested na siguro ko try ko ang prompt na yan hehe.

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2 years ago

Nakakaiyak ang thought na pag ang mag asawa ng hiwalay iiwan ang anak din sa panibago nilang pamilya si more on ideal family which masakit sa part ng unang anak. Ang anak talaga ang sasalo sa desisyon ng mag asawa.

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2 years ago

the children are oftentimes the ones suffering so much because of the parent's decisions.. it is so pitiful

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2 years ago

Many thanks to Almighty that I grew up in such a family where my parents lived in peace & love.

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2 years ago

Living with parents who are quarrelsome since then also be made me feel like a broken soul, I faintly feel any love or trust for my family because of this.

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2 years ago

Oh, that's sad.. we are actually the same that's why it's easy to write this one as I can relate to it, we don't have a choice but to stay stronger.. I hope you'll heal sooner.

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2 years ago

Bata talaga ang kawawa kahit sino pa ang mali sa nag asawa. Lalakeng sira ang pamilya

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2 years ago

Kaya nga eh, kawawa talaga parang wasak yung pagkatao pag wasak din pamilya.

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2 years ago

Kaya kung maari wag sana mangayari na maghiwalay yung parents.

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2 years ago

Kakalungkot pero nangyayari talaga tu in real life no. Ang mas nagbsasuffer talaga is yong bata aigooi.

Anyways lahat kayo nakagawa na ng ganitooo ako'y walang maisip oa hahahanep

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2 years ago

Oo nga eh kaya dapat mga parents talaga e consider dapat mga anak bago magka sira sira pamilya..

Hahaa gawa ka na rin kaya mo yan haha

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2 years ago

Kakareadbko lng dn kat ate pachuchay..ito try ko next jaha.. I bet this article of happyboy will be helpful to Jacob...let him listen to music 🤣🤣 https://read.cash/@HappyBoy/music-to-the-soul-9ce093ea

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2 years ago

Haha nabasa ko na, kung real yung character aba e suggest ko makinig sya music ahaha.. gawa na rin nakakatuwa pabilisan mag isip at magtype

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2 years ago

When book?

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2 years ago

Haha should I make a book? 😂

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2 years ago

Why not... I have about 12

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2 years ago

Ainubukan ko yan prompt na yan kanina kaso di ko kinaya, nabira agad kaya hanap naman ako ng iba, hehehe.. Ganito din article ko ngayon..

Anyway, about sa broken family, mga anak talaga ang nagsasuffer. Ako I came from a broken family ay kahit pa may lola ako na nag alaga sa amin eh iba pa din kasi talaga kapag kumpleto ang pamilya..

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2 years ago

Haha kailangan talaga mabilisan mag type noh nakaka pressure nga isulat haha.

Ako din sis pag ang parents talaga di bou mga anak nag suffer.. haay tapos patibayan na lang nang loob mga anak noh kawawa.

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2 years ago

Kaya nga kanina andaming typo, inayos ko na lang nun natapos ko na..

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2 years ago

The conversations are realistic.

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2 years ago

Yeah, sad truth.

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