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A journey back to the good old days.

Eighteen years old Estella; stood In front of her parents grave, reminiscing on lovely memories from years she was younger. Estella had been the only child her parents birthed.

She sobbed as she remembered how elated she had always been in anticipating dad's return from work or travel. That overwhelming excitement that emerges from within her whenever she saw her mum and dad.

Estella ecstatically jumped off the school bus and ran into the embrace of her beloved parents; whose arms were lovingly stretched out. She cried out in cheer excitement.

Mummy! Daddy!!

Daddy carried her and placed her on his shoulders, walking into the house with mummy by his side. Mummy had prepared lunch, but from the expression on Estella's face, one could tell that she dreaded "beans." Mummy definitely knew how well to cajole her daughter. She dipped her hands into her shirt pocket and brought out some candies. Immediately Estella sighted this, the excitement that grew more in her was unhidden as she tried yanking it off her mom's hands, but her mum slightly pushed her hands back, signalling to her little Estella and pointing to the beans; deliciously placed in front of her.

Mummy: Eat your meal first and the candy is all yours. (Mummy teased).

Estella slightly twitched her lips as she munched down the food.

Every night, before sleep steals her away, mummy and daddy never forgot to snuggle her into their arms, filling her cheeks with kisses of love; which made her giggle or chuckle as a reciprocation to their overwhelming affection.

Not a school day passed without five years old Estella telling Mom of everything that transpired in school. She never for once; denied her mother of the details.

How she always waited for the jingle of the closing bell, so she could rush back to the embrace of her loving parents.

At age six, little Estella did the house chores with so much joy and love, running errands for Mama without murmuring or complaining.

Streams of tears rolled down her cheeks as she looked on at their graves with pains and regrets, if she could turn back the hands of time, she might prolly get one last chance to tell them how much she cares.

Ten years old Estella was already a big girl. Twelve years old Estella became an adolescent. Mama taught her how to clean herself up when stained, how to properly place her sanitary pad and so much more.

She grew and kept growing.

Sixteen years old Estella had a developed body, started making more friends, and worst; started craving for her space.

The changes were glaring.

Her once loving mother, became a nagging woman.

Her super, duper cool father, became a parcel filled with boredom.

The presence of her parents which her younger self had enthusiastically craved for, became a sordid irritation.

Mum: (yells) Estella!!! I sent you to get me fish from Mummy Dora's shop, since morning and you're still lying down there.

Estella: (grumbles) Oooh!! Arrggh, you've started oh, someone can't have peace in this house again.

She fell on her kneels, as her mind wandered to the very last moment she had with her caring and loving parents.

Dad: Estella, I called you and your mother here, to talk to you. Why are you treating us this way? Did your mom and I do something wrong?

Estella: (bellows) Just let me be please!, You're going to the mall right?, Go already! And stop bugging my life.

(She could remember mummy's teary eyes, the hurt, the pains...) "Why was she behaving this way to her parents?" She had questioned herself... "But they can be so unbearable at times." She had hastily defended herself.

She hadn't said a word of apology to them that morning, even when she had felt the nudge to, she stiffed her tongue and kept growling more hurtful words to her parents.

They had gone to the mall that day, but unfortunately; they never returned.

Estella finally found her words, she screamed out loud:

I'm sorry Mum!!!?, I'm sorry Dad!!!. Oh!, I should have said sorry! My conscience would have been happier; knowing that you both died with the thought that i love you. I should have apologized! Oh no!, Why didn't I?. I should have told you how much I love you!!

No! No!! Noooooooooo!!!!!!.

She screamed, hitting the sand so hard; with her hands.

A saying:

We don't really know the value of what we have until we loose it.

To our parents, loved ones, friends and families, and sometimes; even to strangers, let's make them feel loved.

To birth and nurture a child till the stage when the child can stand on his/her own, isn't child's play.

  • So let's make peace with everyone, because we know not what tomorrow holds in store for us.

Disclaimer:

This story is partly fictional and partly non-fictional, it doesn't happen in most homes, but it does happen in some homes...remember, I write mostly from experience, this literally means that "experience" is the source.

Also, this has initially been written on my Facebook page. It was written months ago, I only decided to transfer it down here.

"Honor thy father and thy mother" is the greatest commandment with a promise.

Till we meet again in my next article and in yours.

Thanks for reading.

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This is so sad for Estella and she won't forgive herself for such attitude. Well, I would say both parents knew she loved them but she was acting as she grows up and wants to associate with her peers.

As children grows up, they develop a sense of identify from the outside world as they want to have their own privacy and world but what they didn't realize is that they should have a way not to jeopardize their relationship with their parents. I hope children keeps learning about this realization as they are being exposed to it.

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1 year ago

This is true, the parents would definitely know that their daughter loves them.

🥺So sad, you're right dear Princess, but just as you said; if only they could be with the outside world, without jeopardizing their relationship with their parents, it would have been better.

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1 year ago

Most people think that mom's advice is like orders but it is not true in most cases sometimes we do not have the right decision or the right repairs in our life.

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1 year ago

The life without parents is like life without the world. Especially those people who lost their parents before adulthood faces so many problems in life. Definitely it is true that we understand the importance of a person more after leaving her.

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1 year ago

Yes! I love your first sentence more... Life without parents is really hard. That's why it's best to value them when they are still here with us. Seeing you here for the first time, thanks for stopping by.

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1 year ago

So true👉We don't really appreciate what we have until we lose it.😢😢

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1 year ago

So sad, we really don't, so let me also appreciate you; I'm seeing you here for the first time, thanks for stopping by here.

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1 year ago

yes dear i am almost new

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1 year ago

Yes that's true we should spread love and value each and every person in our life.

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1 year ago

Yes dear friend, we should always spread love

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1 year ago

That's why holding grudges is bad... One never knows what will happen in the next minute. And when It happens, the scales will fall off one's eyes then one eould realised how unreasonable they had been

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1 year ago

So true Bil, really true. Holding grudges is really bad.

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1 year ago

Oh it was too late for her Estella. This is a big lesson, that we should honour and respect the people in our lives, and value every moment we're having together, because nobody knows what the next hand of time will bring.

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1 year ago

Yes! Exactly! It's always best if we value every moment spent with people and free ourselves from grudges

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1 year ago

You can feel the importancr of the person when they were already gone.

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1 year ago

Yeah, this always happens in most cases.

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1 year ago

This is really pathetic. It may be fictional but they are a lot of stories point to the same direction albeit with a different story line. We don't know the value of what we have until we lose them. God will not allow us live a life of regrets. Amen.

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1 year ago

Thanks Chief, yes Chief, may he not allow us live such life. Amen.

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1 year ago

My dear Ella, this story was very inspiring. Exactly my dear, we don't know the value of what we have. And after we lose them, we realized how much they were precious in our lives.

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1 year ago

Thanks sweet Ellen, I just hope we don't have to loose something before knowing its' worth

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1 year ago

So sad, life does teach us to humble ourselves and not to hold grudges because we don't know what will happen next, life is long but some people's own are cut short, no one knows what will happen next 💔

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1 year ago

Oh! Right Coga, we don't know what will happen next, so it's always best if we do what's right and be free from any kind of grudge.

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1 year ago

It's really sad. We never know what we have until we lose it most times. I'm pretty sure she'll regret it her whole life.

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1 year ago

True dear, really true. She'll never forgive herself.

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1 year ago

Hmm...poor Estella. I guess she had to learn the hard way. Teenagers and their wahala sef, they are just something else. I wonder why that phase is always so terrible for most.

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1 year ago

Yes dear, she had to learn the hard way. Lol, Asin ehn... Some teenagers are something else.

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1 year ago

Hmmm. What can I say, there is that time when adolescents feel they are now adults and grown ups and can do as they like.

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1 year ago

That's true dear, then they become rude to their parents and start feeling too big to apologise cause they feel they are always right.

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1 year ago

Oooh, such an emotional story. I have learned from this to make every moment count and do things at the right time so my story won't be like Estella's

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1 year ago

Thanks dear Bisolammy, it's always good to do things at the right time.

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1 year ago

I understand how she will be feeling after all that happened, it is always better to do the right thing at the right time before it becomes too late. Our parents are our small God, we should adore them dearly and so well.

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1 year ago

Sighs... You're right dear, it's always better to do what's right, when the time is right.

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1 year ago

i am about to cry coz i am not feeling well due to some personal issue. i can't write more.sorry ! your words touched me. love your words.

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1 year ago

Ouch! Dear Tanian, hope you're feeling better now?

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1 year ago

Yup thanks for concern 😘

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1 year ago

Hmm... That's an emotional tale. It was especially sad that Estella couldn't apologise to her parents when she had the chance to. Indeed, we do not know the value of what we have, until we loose it.

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1 year ago

Yes Vince, it's so sad. She couldn't do what's right when she had the time to. Thanks for engaging Vince.

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1 year ago

Of course, Elle. You're welcome.

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1 year ago

Some things are too late to do anything about it...this is why we need to cherish every moment and stop taking moments, things or people for granted. It's important to stop deferring the things we should have said.

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1 year ago

Oh! Yes! Mr Ola, this is so true, such a great contribution dear Sir. It's always best if we don't take things or people for granted. It's always best if we apologise, and speak up while there's still time. Thanks for stopping by Sir.

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1 year ago

I'm always more than happy to stop by. You write so good.

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