Bon voyage, bitin or is it

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6th August 2021 2021

Happy weekend all you awesome Readers. Well the break is over, Archie is back! I hope it is still Bitin!

Paris is one of my favourite cities and I have had the opportunity to visit it many times. The history, the architecture, the people and the cuisine I just love all of it, and if you ever have the chance I really would recommend you visit and explore Paris.

Paris is about to be seen through the eyes of young lovers Archie and Moira a few years ago. All places are real but the pictures are from Pixabay though.

This is the next chapter in the book Ben MacDuff - Homecoming

Chapter 6

Archie and Moira started their last school year, with Archie back at boarding school at Gordonstoun and Moira studying at Glen Urquhart High School.

Although they did not see each other during term time, they wrote to each other and were always on the phone to each other. Every vacation time they would be inseparable and they made plans to go to Paris in the summer as soon as Archie's birthday came and he passed his driving lesson.

They were very meticulous in their planning and Moira was really pushing Archie. Whenever he got the chance he would practice driving his Jaguar XJSC convertible burgundy with cream interior around the family estate in preparation for sitting his driving test. Moira had even booked the ferry to Paris for the day after Archie's driving test, so the pressure was on him and he had to pass, no excuses.

The school year flew fast as they were so excited about their hoped for romantic trip.

Then in a flash the day of the driving test was here, and of course Archie being Archie he easily passed and it was official he now had his driving license and could insure the car which meant they could drive to Paris the next day!

Archie's parents were very protective of their first son, and always wanted him to be happy, so had no problems with letting Moira stay whenever she wanted.

Moira was to wake first, having hardly slept during most of the night.

"Archie come on, time to get up" she said at four in the morning as she tickled him in the ribs.

"Away you go bonnie lassie, the birds aren't even up yet" replied a sleepy Archie as he jumped out of bed.

They both shared a hot steamy shower and left to go downstairs to get breakfast a little later than planned.

As they entered the kitchen, Nanay Ate was there with a wagging finger.

"Where have you two been, I made breakfast, it is here on the table and is getting cold na! Hurry up and eat so you can be on your way." said an exicted Nanay Ate, whilst Uncle Po just rolled his eyes and shrugged his shoulders.

Moira and Archie sat down and tucked into a plate of rice hot dogs and fried eggs.

"Why do Filipinos eat so much for breakfast Nanay Ate?" asked Moira of Nanay Ate.

Nanay Ate glared at Moira and said "You should be thankful you have food to eat, you have a big day ahead of and need food to take care of my boy Archie, so eat it up now."

Moira was going red with embarrassment and Archie could help himself but laugh to which Moira aimed a sharp kick on his shins.

"Don't you think you are having another time like this morning again anytime soon" she hissed at Archie.

Archie was in hysterics now and retorted back "That's what you think haha"

Breakfast over, they got up and headed to the car. Nanay Ate being Nanay Ate had packed loads and loads of food. There was lechon, pansit, pandesal and so much more. It looked like she was feeding an army not just Archie and Moira for 24 hours.

Everyone was at the gates to wave them off, and they had a great time. The weather was glorious, so of course they had the roof down and flew through the countryside with music blaring. Happy tunes, happy times.

They had left at 7am and had to drive 601 miles to get to Portsmouth to catch the ferry to Cherbourg in France. The ferry was due to depart at midnight so they had plenty of time.

Archie did all the driving, they had a few pitstops to eat and drink, and arrived at Portsmouth ferry terminal at 8pm. They even managed to catch the earlier 11pm ferry. Archie's mother always said that Archie made his own luck. Moira was radiating and Archie thought that she seemed. The ferry would arrive at 8am in the morning and Archie had booked a First Class cabin for them to spend the night.

Riding the Waves

Archie was quite tired, but was determined to enjoy the dinner he had reserved in the first class restaurant. Moira put on a little makeup and slid into a wee gorgeous black satin dress, that accentuated the curves of her delightful breasts. Every lassie needs a wee black dress thought Archie, if only to look like Moira looked like now.

Archie had dressed in blue trousers and a burgundy blazer that Moira had chosen for him. They looked quite the elegant and beautiful couple as they entered the restaurant and were met by the maître d'.

"Table for two in the name Archie Cameron" said Archie to the maître d'.

"Ah yes, follow me please" replied the maître d' and led them to a quiet spot with a porthole overlooking the sea.

Archie had prebooked their meal and while they were waiting, the sommelier who would be in charge of their drinks brought them both a woo woo. This would become an effective drink in Archie's repertoire to loosen the tongue of many a lassie.

"This is so romantic Archie, the candles and the moonlight glistening of the waves in the sea, I wish I could stay like this forever" said Moira.

The waiter arrived with their starter which was Bouillabaisse, a sumptuous French fish soup that being the seafood lover that he was, Archie loved.

Bouillabaisse - Archie loves seafood

This awesome food was accompanied with a bottle of Pouilly-Fumé from the Loire Valley a classic white wine to compliment the seafood. By the time they got to the main course of steak and chips, Moira was getting tipsy, and already rubbing Archie's thighs with her bare feet under the table.

The the sommelier brought them a Edouard Delaunay Nuits Saint Georges, which was one of Archie's favourite red wines, but at close to a hundred pounds a bottle was only for special occasions. Rather than taste it, he let Moira do the tasting.

He was chuckling to himself, as her cheeks were matching the colour of the wine.

"Yes, that is braw!" said Moira to the sommelier, who had a look of bewilderment on his face.

"The young lady means the wine is fine thank you." intervened Archie.

The meal was finished with a delicious Raspberry Paris Brest another of Archies's favourites that Nanay Ate had learnt to make.

Raspberry Paris Brest - Archie loves his raspberries

"Let's go for a wee walk before bed, and get you some fresh air Moira" said Archie as he maneuvered them to the outside deck.

The fresh air sobered up Moira a wee bit, and she steered them towards their cabin.

Once inside Moira took off her high heels and said in a soft sexy voice "We need to christen the new bed Archie!"

Archie had a hold of her and whispered in her ear "I knew there was no way you would resist me you minx".

"You really are a rascal Archie Cameron!" said Moira as she undressed Archie.

Two hours later, the young lovers were in a deep exhausted sleep.

They woke at seven had breakfast and started the 188 miles to Paris. With both of them being fluent in French, they easily navigated the route to Paris and arrived at just past two in the afternoon.

The arc de triomph in Paris

"Oh Archie, it is magnificent, look at the detail on the stone work" exclaimed an excited Moira.

"It is Moira, but we can see that tomorrow, now let's find the hotel and have a naughty wee siesta" laughed Archie in a devilish sounding voice.

TO BE CONTINUED

If you missed it, the Previous chapters are :

Ben MacDuff - Homecoming

Nanay Ate and Uncle Po - Say What!

Woo Woo ~ I know you!

The badass naked chef

The Gang of FOUR

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Thank you for reading you awesome beautiful people.

Please do leave any feedback whether it be good or not so good.

Copyright @TengoLoTodo 2021 and yes All Rights Reserved. All images and words are from the author unless source mentioned.

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I wonder what will happen next! Their wee moment with one another is popping every time and every place. 😂

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3 years ago

waaaaah road trip to Paris (or anywhere) in a top-down with someone like archie please! Can "braw" be used like for "i'm fine. thank you?" or is there another way of saying that phrase in scots?

ehehe bitin it is uncle..! They so so so sound in love.

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3 years ago

Why so bitin, uncle Ed? haha

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3 years ago

I hope so MRs P:)

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3 years ago

Happy Sunday, uncle Ed!

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3 years ago

Happy Sunday Mrs P 🎉

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3 years ago

Salamat po! About to sleep na hehe

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3 years ago

Haha no you aren't, this is early for you !

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3 years ago

hehe gonna be up early have to get my covid shot, uncle ed

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3 years ago

Oh woohoo enjoy it Mrs P 😁

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3 years ago

I was happy to read some Filipino terms in here. And about the breakfast, yeah we do eat a lot during that time. I don't know but it's just make me keep going to start my day if I had a nice and satisfying breakfast. Breakfast without rice is a no for me too. Hehe

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3 years ago

I know has to be rice with whatever you have with breakfast. Me I just don't get it a cup of coffee is fine for me 🤣 Well oo, I like to put a few wee filipino terms in my stories.

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3 years ago

I am new, just finding you, and it is nice to read you here. I like the Scottish Filipino mix of flavours.

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3 years ago

hehe thank you, I like to spice it up here and have a Scottish Filipino mix hehe

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3 years ago

Paris has been one of the places that I wanted to visit 🤗

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3 years ago

Go if you can, gorgeous city it is.

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3 years ago

Ahhhh. We, Filipinos eat a lot for breakfast to prepare for the long day and oh, not to mention our love for rice and the food in general.

I love to eat the seafood, how do I pronounce that? 😅

And oh, Paris, it is the place to be,😍😍

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3 years ago

hehe seafood is delicious, and yes I know you love food and eating and eating and did I say eating and chismis of course 🤣🤣🤣

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3 years ago

Of course, everything with chismis is better!😅

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3 years ago

Haha yes chismis all the time

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3 years ago

And there they went to Paris! Bonjour! May I now ask tito Ed, is this perhaps your true-to-life story? 😊

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3 years ago

Yes you may ask, doesn't mean I will answer though 😂😂😂

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3 years ago

You're cunning🤣

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3 years ago

haha very cunning 🤣

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3 years ago

At least you ain't denying it :D

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3 years ago

Paris is such a wonderful place I hope to visit someday

Nice article man

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3 years ago

I appreciate that, thank you

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3 years ago

Paris is also one of my dream place. Well we eat heavy breakfast because we don't want to get hungry easily. Its hard to pronounce the foods that archie's love. Hehez. It is bitin again 😄

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3 years ago

Glad you think still bitin wee one, it gets much more bitin later haha. I know you love your big breakfasts, but you keep eating all the time I see🤣🤣🤣

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3 years ago

Hahaha i love to eat po but my body seems not cooperating to me. I easily digest the food thats why im still petite

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3 years ago

Hehe well keep enjoying it wee one 😁

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3 years ago

Bouillabaisse, im like archie we both love seafoods. 🦐 . And the Raspberry Paris Brest is so perfect for dessert❤️😍🍰

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3 years ago

Yes the seafood is awesome and a great dessert hehe I know your tastes now😁

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3 years ago

"Why do Filipinos eat so much for breakfast Nanay Ate?"

bcuz rice is lyf xd

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3 years ago

hehe rice is life for you guys!

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3 years ago

I guess I have to back read :) I remember Bouillabaisse when I watched Master Chief professionals, it was a part of a skill test.

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It is a wonderful dish when cooked right, but you can make a mess of it 🤣🤣😂😂

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3 years ago

Wahhh... I now you're making me crave, especially the seafoods bro!🥲 hihi..

Paris!😍One of my dream destination.

Can you just tell me now bro? Are you that Archie? and Moira? Is she your girl? hahaha☺️

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Yes I love seafoods and raspberries sis, Me Archie hehe that would be telling 🤣🤣🤣

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hahaha.. Excited lang bro!✌️😅

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Paris the place of love ❣️

Oh it's chapter 6, I need to track back and read the very beginning of this one 🤧 lol

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hehe backtrack that would be fun. Yes I publish them here every so often.

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Food is indeed life!

I think i’ll have to go back to the previous chapters to keep track of them :)

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hehe food is life, I hope you read, I think they are quite bitin!

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3 years ago

Finally, Archie is back and with some romance. Moira, Moira mon amour! I guess with Read censorship, haha. I hope someday to read the uncensored version. LOL

Now, I'm craving Bouillabaisse. I haven't eaten one in years! Still Bitin! Looking for the Paris adventure. ;)

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haha yes I have had to censor for Read 🤣🤣🤣 Yes a good Bouillabaisse is just heaven in a bowl!

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3 years ago

Bitin po. What did they do in wee siesta? Lol. I really love Paris too and would love to go there if not so expensive haha! I love the history.

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3 years ago

Yes it is a wonderful city, but this is a family platform, so I had to censor it for here 🤣🤣🤣

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3 years ago

The wine is bitin, the food is bitin, the story is bitin lol! I so love Nany Ate, very typical Pinay :D Food is life!

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hehe I have tried to make Nanay Ate totally relatable to Pinoys :)

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3 years ago

And you did, good job, kuya!

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3 years ago

Thank you kuya, I appreciate that :)

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3 years ago

Wow.... I am just reading the 6th part and it is this juicy? Imagine what the previous and subsequent ones will be

You have a notch for details... Gosh, I have to come sit at your table for writing lessons

Oh by the way, I love the naughty wee night Moira and Archie had after their dinner 🙈🙈🙈

Nicely pen sir.... I will be looking forward to the next part

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Yes the details are fun to add to help set the scene. I might publish the next part on Monday, I will see. I am glad you like it!

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3 years ago

I'll be waiting, sir

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3 years ago

why is it so bitin???? and that dessert Raspberry Paris Brest makes me drool I wanna learn it too :) by the way, Do you like to adopt the three of us? @bloghound @pichi28 and me? LOL promise we will be good hahahaha

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Yes the raspberry Paris Brest really is heaven, adopt the terrible wee sisters haha oh no 😂

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3 years ago

I was amazed seeing the Tagalog words such as Nanay Ate and Bitin. lol

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oo, Nanay Ate is a big character in the book, I do try to mix it up and use Tagalog words :)

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3 years ago

Looking forward for more Tagalog words in your posts.

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3 years ago

Still bitin. Well it looks like they are having a grand time in Paris. The food made me hungry. One day it will be Paris for me. The eiffel tower seems like romantic place to see.

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Am glad is still bitin, yes the Eiffel tower is very romantic, more so at night :)

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3 years ago

Woah..Paris is a great place to visit.😊 I hope I can someday.. It's like that this is going to be a book sir.😊..Thank you for the sponsorship sir.😊

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Yes it is a book I am writing, and my pleasure for the sponosorship!

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3 years ago

I wonder how to pronounce those Words of food and wine. Paris is really grandiose.

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Yes Paris is a wonderful place, the words are tricky to pronounce, you need to learn French 😂

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3 years ago

I wish I could visit Paris too, puhon ❤ fingerscrossed How to find an Archie? haha, help me find one, master 😁 he's so sweet and romantic 💗

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3 years ago

Archie is unique and a mad Scotsman my wee BC 😁🤣

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3 years ago

I enjoyed your story wish you could continue immediately anyway I will look out for your next publication.

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I appreciate that, thank you

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3 years ago

You were able to visit Paris a lot of times? Awee. Lucky you. Paris is my dream place to visit, too. I just want to see the Eiffel Tower and also, I want to see the lights there and want to experience the city of Love. :D :)

You wrote this book? I don't want to read this chapter just yet. I want to start at Chapter 1. HAHA :D

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Haha yes it is the book I am writing 🤣 based on my life experience with changes of course. Yes I have been to Paris many times , love it

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Oh wow! Really? That's awesome! I will start reading chapter 1 before reading this. :D :) I really want to start from the beginning so I'd know the story. haha :D

Awee. Lucky. I only have a tour book of Paris. But, haven't actually been there. :D Hopefully, one day.

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hehe Well I hope you read from chapter one hehe you might like it, there is some bits of filipino in there !

Well make Paris your goal, and learn French, when you are there and speak French, they are so so much friendlier to you!

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really? that's cool! Now, you're making me excited to read it. But, I have to sleep soon. Haha :D It is already 4:23AM here and we'll be leaving to the beach with my cousins and aunts by 7:00AM. Goosh, sleep isn't really in my vocabulary anymore. :D

I tried to learn French when I was in college. Learned few words but now, I forgot them already. HAHA :D

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haha oo sleep na, it is very late there and you will be sleeping all day on the beach 🤣🤣🤣

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Nah, no sleeping. :D I will swim. I mean, dip in the water. hahahaha :D :D :D

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well enjoy the wee dip in the water, but you should swim, or try it in waist high water.

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