Escape

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3 years ago

Hello read-ers! Taking a break from the usual and peeping in. Just have to tap this real quick else it will be whole day in my head. Sorry not a travel post.. hahah


The scene starts with the view hovering over a sepia-toned day in the woods. You can hear the panting of someone running, the rustle of the wind, the padded sound of bare foot hitting dry ground, bare foot crunching on leaves.

The scene changes view to following the running kid - a girl around ten years old or so. The focus was on the path she is running on. The dirt path already had the memory of the vehicles that passed it. The trail already had bald lines of brown bare ground and this is what she is following. Following to where? She does not even know. All she knows she has to run. Far. Tall trees line up the sides of the trail following each bend. The trees only have few leaves on it mostly dried. Some greens but barely hanging on its tried branch.

You can see the strides she is taking.

Left foot.

Right foot.

Left foot.

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In rapid alternate succession. You can still hear her heavy breathing. You can hear something else in every heave : Fear? Panic? Confusion? . . Fear.

[scene change: top view]

"Ugh!"

The muffled scream of pain from the girl was slightly audible and the thump of her small body as it hit the ground. She tripped on a stone barely visible. She did not dare scream out the pain she feels on her now throbbing toe.

Staggeringly, she got up again and almost stumbling again but finally got up and started again for another sprint with a painful limp on her right leg.

What is she running away from?

Where is she going?

Not too far, she hears the roar of water falling from a high place and hitting rocks on its way down. That sounds refreshing.

She mustered up the courage to run farther and quickly. She does feel parched and would like to drink some. No she would want to dive into the deep water of wherever that sound is coming from.

not really the falls i have in mind .. but will do hahahah

She stopped a while. She looked down at her soiled dress. It has lots of brown - dust, dirt and what's that? Red? There is red. Blood? Dried. Where did it come from?

Shaking, she looked at her hands. It was bloodied too. She can't remember getting herself cut or anything when she fell earlier. Where did that come from? Then scenes from few hours ago that morning.

[flash back]

She woke up in a dark room with only a ray of faint sunrise light coming from the solo window of a cabin she cannot remember how she got in. She was out of breath. She has pain all over her small body. As her eyes adjusted a crumpled lump of something was near her foot. She staggered to to move back as she realizes it was a body. There was a pool of blood around it and she saw something sticking out from the middle of the lump. A dagger handle it seems. With something gold inscribed on it. It looks very familiar but she cannot recall any.

[regain back to the run scene]

She gasped. Did she do that? What did happen? Who was that? No answers. Painfully and with her vision blurring from the realization. She gathered up her strength and started running again. She wanted to scream but she does not want to disturb the morning peace of the woods. Besides, everything seems calm and harmonious -except for her.

Run.

Run.

just for visual. the water there is the ocean so not the falls too nor the cliff that I imagined.. hahah

Then she finds herself on a cliff. She can see the huge waterfall on the other side. The large pool of water and a river stretching right below her. Is it deep? She does not know. But in all her being, that huge monster in her was more than willing to feel the cold, refreshing water below. She moved back a little. Made a run for it towards the edge of the cliff and pushed herself off it.

What is she doing?

She made a good jump - arms out, dive and plunged into the deep water safe.

How did she even know how to dive right? What in the world?

Slowly feeling the refreshing water wash all the dirt and stain of the dried blood. She surfaced on the cool water. Treading. Turned into a back float. Looked up the white sky. And for that time, the confusion, fear and the anger that came with her turned to a sob. But with her in the water, the sound of the loud drop of water from the falls, the current slowly pushing her downstream, she feels safe, comforted and free. She allows the stream to carry her to nowhere. She feels recharged every minute. She is alive and she will live. That horrific scene worthy of the nightmare prize, she decides to tuck deep.

Nothing happened.

Fin.


Breathe...

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Very well written. 😉 I hope I can also make a story as good as this. I am not so good in making short novels.

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3 years ago

La ka pa new post ah

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3 years ago

Lols ate wala pa. 😐 .. in a bit ..in a while.. or baka.... Bukas..

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3 years ago

peer pressure ba? haha. cge bukas. muah!!!!

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3 years ago

lols.. .oops.. eh may napost hahahaha ... see ya in a bit mwah!

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3 years ago

Woahh, it's creative one, I felt like I'm reading a story about depression, it's good actually keep on writing.

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3 years ago

thank you Darkandtwisty143 .. i kinda like your name! haha darkandtwisty143. It is similar to depression yeah? Some things you'd want to run away from, something confusing.. and yet, you'd rather consider it just a nightmare and not tell anyone.

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3 years ago

Seemed like a novel intro, lots of potential here. And so we wait for a prequel or sequel.😊

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3 years ago

Hello ichiiicarps! Thank you. Im not sure yet for this piece. Haha it was type down whatever is in your head thing else it will be there for a long time. So after typing it in.. im now.. blank hahahaha

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3 years ago

Really? I have lots of questions😅 That can't be the end right? I loved reading this piece. Very interesting and imaginative. I still hope there's more to it.

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3 years ago

Haha thanks the.Ada! . . . Let us see if more can come.

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3 years ago

I love your picture captions always ;) And of course I am imagining you running wee pp ;)

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3 years ago

Thank you uncle ed! haha.

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3 years ago

Always my pleasure wee pp!

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3 years ago

Hala! Ang galing na din nya mag fiction 😍 sana ol 😂

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3 years ago

ahaha thanks sis! Pag nasa isip kasi kelangan ko talaga sulat kung hindi lagi ko lang maiisip ng paulit ulit.

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3 years ago

Sana magawa ko din one of these days

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3 years ago

Frenny, bat naman kasi ang ganda. Kaso bat lagi ganito ending ng nababasa ko. May kadugsong ga areh. Cheret, pero never pa aki mandin nagka nightmare. Buti nalang talaga no.

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3 years ago

Frenny are ay masyado kasing natakbo sa isip ko. Kelangan ko isulat kung hindi uulit ulit ulit ulit sya sa isip ko. Haha.. Nga lang hanggang jan lang sya sa isip ko. Pero tignan natin kung magtutuloy or madudugtong...

Ay uu masaya at never ka pa nag nightmare ;)

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3 years ago

Ayt kaya pala ee, aus ka pala pag magulo takbo ng utak mo frenny abahaha. Nakaka likha ka ng nagandang storya. Wait nalang namin yan.

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3 years ago

Ay salamat frenny .. nakakataba ng puso.. ;)

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3 years ago

Kakaheart attack na ha.. Ako kaya tatalon sa cliff wahhh d ko keri😅 kahit dream pa yan wahhh

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3 years ago

Masarap tumalon basta malalim yung maddropan... Pero wag sobrang taas hahah.. kakilabot pa din naman ..

Nagkaron na po ba kayo ng dream na nakakalula.. nagigising ka na lang bigla?

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3 years ago

Alam mo ferris wheel taz pagpababa na di ba parang naiiwan mga kalob looban mo wah di ako tatalon hahaha

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3 years ago

Hahaha... Ferris wheel is fine .. roller coaster is not. Pero sa ferris wheel ramdam pa din nga yung lula.. haha.. naiimagine ko tuloy

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3 years ago

yun pataas no prob.. yun pababa ang maiiwan lahat ng balunbalunan e hahah

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3 years ago

dati nasakay pa ako sa ferris wheel ng perya perya.. yung open tapos naswing swing pa nga. .. . nung medyo tumanda tanda na hindi ko na kaya sumakay dun hahaha.. feeling ko hindi safe haha

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3 years ago

dati dito pagsummer my mga perya perya haha

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3 years ago

This has a second part, right? There must be. There should be. Gang sa kwento ba mabibitin pa din ako? haha! Galing mo talaga!

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3 years ago

Thank you sir bestie! Wah. Kahit ako nabitin eh. But rest assured andun lang sha sa river .. floating hahahahah.. lets see if madudugtungan

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3 years ago

Sabagay okay na din ganyan. kanya kanyang ending :)

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3 years ago

kaya ayaw ko nang suspense eh huhuhhu di talaga kerebels nang fragile heart ko..but it came to me as a message to..parang yung mga taong may depression din..they keep on escaping and crying is the only thing na nakakapag pa wala nang mga iniisip nila.. ewan ko lang

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3 years ago

haha sencia na mommy kim ahahahah

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3 years ago

ok lang baby hhihihi

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3 years ago

Pero bet ko yun nakuha mo yun escaping and crying is the only thing na makakapag pawala ng iniisip nila... ;)

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3 years ago

akala ko nga yun yung pinapaabot mo na message eh hihihihi sorry

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3 years ago

ahaha no sorry actually accurate ka. she was escaping and crying .. ;) and yung dulo.. itatago na lang niya as if walang nangyari.. which is kinda like us din minsan pag may traumas tayong hindi nating gusto pang maintindihan, alalahanin or intindihin..

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3 years ago

yan nangyari sakin last week ...and I actually made an article about that jejeje

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3 years ago

revisiting your stories :D

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3 years ago

tell me what can you say after then

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3 years ago

Yung after a week ba yun mamsh?

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3 years ago

yep yun hhhehehehe

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3 years ago

inulit ko basahin ng tatlong beses to kasi medyo nagulhan ako tas ending nightmare lang pala HAHAHAHA

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3 years ago

lols.. ;)

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3 years ago

So bitin 😅 and unclear vision of the flashback.. Panu sya napunta dun? Haha .

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3 years ago

unclear din imagination ko ahahhahahahaha ..

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3 years ago

Haha I lurrrv i so much!!!!

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3 years ago

Thanks ate supppperrrr.. .mwah

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3 years ago

muahhhhhh

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3 years ago

What? Where's the end? "Fin." is not the end! And "nothing happened" does not cut it. I braved my fainting spell to read to the end. I almost passed out from seeing blood. I'm real squeamish. Can you go back to sleep and finish dreaming the story? Then quickly come back to finish this. Bwhahahaha...

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3 years ago

Nyahahahahaha

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3 years ago

well let us see if my imagination will go past her floating downstream. lols.. if my dream in my sleep connects with this one in my wakened state.. that would be fun.. woohoo.. let me see what I can touch up and add. LOLs Thanks dood!

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3 years ago

Pichi reading with an imagination I am. Hehee it's a nightmare. You're such a great writer. I love it so much.☺️

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3 years ago

awww thank you Ramona that's sweet and nice! makes my heart warm!

God bless!

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3 years ago

sample story

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3 years ago

thank you for dropping by and reading!

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3 years ago

grabe ung basa ko ..pati ako bumibilis ang tibok ng puso.. tapos nightmare lang pala...

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3 years ago

peace po! :D

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3 years ago

My imagination just function haha, the falls above is not the one I imagined too haha, but the scene...I love ittttt 😁 I feel like I'm the one running haha

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3 years ago

haha halu! wala ako makitang mas mataas pang falls sa gallery ko .. kaya yan na lang hahaha. kaloka. if only may picture nga nung nasa utak ko ang saya sana. Thank you sis!

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3 years ago

Very nice story. While reading, my imagination also works.◉‿◉

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3 years ago

Yey for that Yzza! Thank you for dropping by and reading :D

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3 years ago

Welcome po☺️😊

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3 years ago

I can see myself from this. I also experienced having nightmares like this, where I was running in the woods but I have no idea what and who I've been running to. It's kinda bit a traumatic experience for me

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3 years ago

Halu Jinifer? Does it always occur?

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3 years ago