The Flash Fiction Challenge - The winning piece and good submissions.

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The primary goal of the Flash fiction challenge is to give Read.cash writers a regular opportunity to write, a prompt to create something weekly, to help break their writer's block, and to encourage the practice of editing and refining our work.

The goal was achieved as the literary world had a lot of astonishing creative works to read from great writers from read.cash.

THE WINNING ENTRY THAT GETS THE $2 UPVOTE

Congratulations @Ozzyy with the entry below

https://read.cash/@Ozzyy/silver-lining-flash-fiction-challenge-6a68c6bb

Silver Lining

>He sat on the pavement, looking at the door of her apartment. The bowler hat in front of him was full of crumpled dollar notes dropped by benevolent passers-by who sympathized with his condition.

He knew he was taking a big risk, and he would pay a price far greater than what was in the hat if his disguise was seen through.

But that was just one of the things on his mind: the clouds were gathering, and he didn't have anything on except rags.

However, he had stopped caring about that.

The rain didn't matter anymore, it was no more different from the tears falling from his eyes each time he came here.

Even the sky shared his sorrow.

"The moment you join the CIA, you sell your soul, family, freedom, and safety to the organization." A voice in his head said, recalling his superior's words when he was first appointed seven years ago.

"You have no identity, no family and no safety", it echoed.

Then, it didn't mean anything to him. He hadn't met her. He didn't have a three-year-old daughter who'd never set her eyes on her father.

For the past three years, he was investigating a drug cartel which also had their sights set on ending his life. No matter what, he couldn't visit his family or be seen with them.

The price for their safety was his absence.

Only at this moment every Friday, dressed like a homeless vagabond, could he see his daughter being brought back from school by his wife and watch them both enter the apartment.

Moments like this cut through his heart like a knife, and it was a difficult price to pay.

But his clouds had their silver lining as long as he could see them here everyday.

Your submission had great imagery, character development and pure emotions of a father's love beautifuly portrayed. Thank you for your submission and Congratulations once again.

Some other great submissions can be found in the links below

Rejection by @Hanzell

https://read.cash/@Hanzell/rejection-f38ffd44

The knock by @CrazyInsane

https://read.cash/@CrazyInsane/the-knock-flash-fiction-challenge-f10ad02a

Happenstance by @Iremori

https://read.cash/@Iremori/happenstance-flash-fiction-challenge-ee02831e

A sleeping genius by @Eybyoung https://read.cash/@Eybyoung/a-sleeping-genius-flash-fiction-challenge-cd217c6f

Clouds by @marcmire

https://read.cash/@marcmire/clouds-3092e01e

Same sky by @nicdre09

https://read.cash/@nicdre09/same-sky-flash-fiction-challenge-cdaa4ccb

She can see the sky By @Dolores

https://read.cash/@Dolores/she-can-see-the-sky-flash-fiction-challenge-adc5a6a0

Popsicle smile by @lethlieann

https://read.cash/@lethlieann/popsicle-smiles-flash-fiction-challenge-720a35be

Thank you again to all participants. Your work is always a joy to read!

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Congratulations @Ozzzy :") and to all the participants

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4 years ago

Thanks! Your story was really nice!

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4 years ago

But yours was so intense though! I liked that :")

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4 years ago

Much appreciation!

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4 years ago

Congrats @Ozzyy you are really a good writer, I am happy that I sponsored you.

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4 years ago

Thanks. I'm really grateful for your support!

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4 years ago

Congratulations and @Ozzyy and also congrats to other winners

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4 years ago

Thanks a lot!

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4 years ago

Thanks @feebie and @Winoba for the opportunity to do all this! I'm grateful for your support and I'm happy to be a winner. Thanks!

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4 years ago

Thank you for organizing challenges like this @feebie and @Winona. Looking forward to more. Congratulations @Ozzyy, you deserve it and I really really loved your story.

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4 years ago

Thanks a lot 😃 God Bless

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4 years ago

Congrats @Ozzyy!

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4 years ago

Thanks a lot!

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4 years ago

Congrats @Ozzyy!

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4 years ago

Thank you😃

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