I have 4hours to spend on Earth: Story version

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2 years ago
Topics: Story, Time, Love

When the news of me having 4hours left to live on earth was told to me, I felt so bad cause I have so many things I have promised, my mom, I wanted to get her, but now my left has been cut short and I just 4hours left, I tried to run out of the shine but the barrier placed around the shine by the priest kept me in. I was born a special child, my mom never told me of my birth or how I got my powers, my powers aren’t that of the superheroes you see on tv, I have the power to see a little into the future via my dreams. She never wanted to tell me I would die at the age of 20, but I kept having the dream of seeing myself dead, she took me to the priest and ask him to explain what was wrong with her son, he's already 20, I wasn’t sick, so why does her son keep having the dream of seeing himself dead.

Up on hearing the news

He told her since she especially got the child and that was the condition given to her, currently, he only has 4hours to live. Immediately I heard that I was broken, I’m so young, why bring me into this world just to shorten my life, I have so much I want to do for you mom, after all, was said, all on my mind was how to spend the remaining hours left.

I went straight to my best friend's home, he was glad to have me around, all he wanted to talk about was his new ps5 and how I promise to beat him in the football game, as he was talking I was just smiling, he was surprise cause he knew I would have talk back but I didn’t, he asked me what was wrong, I told him nothing, I had a game with him, I won 7 to 4 goals, he wanted another game but I told him I had somewhere else to because I already spend 1hour at his side, I left and started walking.

Walking around

I spend 30minute on the walkway, all that was running through my mind was the thought of Abigail, my first love, I have been in love with her since I was little, I couldn’t tell her because of the fear that she wouldn’t feel the same way, but this time around, I know I have nothing to lose by telling her my feelings, I went straight to her house, luckily for me, she was outside like she was waiting for me, she wore a yellow gown, as the breeze blew, it moved her long hair backward and I could see the smile on her face again, I walked up to her and said, Abigail, I have something I have been meaning to tell you, I saw she was shocked but I went on.

I’m in love with you, no I have been in love with you for a very long time and I didn’t dare to tell you, but I will today, I love you, Abigail, you make everything beautiful, your smile, your…….

Before I could finish my statement, she hugged me and planted a kiss on my lips, and said, what took you so long, after much discussion, I realized I had 1hour left, I told her goodbye and said my final words to her, if I would come back again to this world, I would fall in love with you again, she smiles without understanding what I meant, and I ran home.

crying mom

I got home to see my mom on the floor crying bitterly, I ran towards her, help her up and she sat down on her favorite blue chair, I made a cup of coffee for her and assured her I won't die, I called my cousins and other family members but made it a short call, I sat beside her legs, and rested my head on her laps, she used the palm of her hands to rub my hair as she told me the story behind my birth, at a point, I was feeling sleepy, I couldn’t see anymore but I could hear her voice, I couldn’t tell what she was saying, I was drifting away in my slumber, I could hear her calling my name, but I couldn't respond, I tried all my possible best but could, the next thing that happy was that I saw my mom crying over my body as I ascend from the earth. The End.

First, come across this article on @Princessbusayo it was so interesting and many a sense of humor in it and things you could learn from, you can check it here, I always love reading her article, then I saw @FarmGirl article too, it was shocking, the way she wrote it, it was so real, when you read it, you would understand, so interesting and touching, click to read

Well left to me, if I had 4hours left, I would just watch anime.

To All my readers, upvoters, commenter, tippers, sponsorers, which one haven't I mention, I say a very big bang thank you to you all, you have been wonderful and such a lovely people.

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Comments

You have really tried. I love the story 💞

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2 years ago

😊😊, I'm glad you did

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2 years ago

LoL, Thank God it´s just an imagination because I really felt the way you wrote it and how mom was crying. Also this is not the time because Abigail want you at this moment. At least you confessed to her and she had been waiting too.

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2 years ago

Yeah, I'm glad you enjoyed it.. But it was so sad cause 4hours looks long when waiting but in this kind of writing, its such a short time

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2 years ago

I really enjoyed reading this. I am amazed by such brilliance that I felt weakness all over me even though I knew it wasn't real. Lol... I'm really happy when I see my friends developing rapidly in writing skills 😁

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2 years ago

😁😁thanks bilqees, I really appreciate this words.. I'm glad you enjoyed the story

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2 years ago

Aw, I felt sad upon reading this. Just last night I dreamed I was ill and dying and now I read this. Made me think what if this will happened to me in reality?

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2 years ago

Naaah, it can't happen, I heard if you have a bad dream, and you have a strong heart, it only a dream of something you will over come.. Trust me.. 😊💯❤

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2 years ago

Yeah , I am sure as I know I will live longer😀

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2 years ago

😂😂😂.

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2 years ago

I got goosebumps! living in the present is something we should do even knowing that we have thousands of days left, that's why the message you give is beautiful

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2 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it.... Much love from my side

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2 years ago

I read this with all my heart wanting to know how it would end🤣

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2 years ago

Sad yet sweet story right?

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2 years ago

Your mum try oh 😥

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2 years ago

I know right...its a sad story

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2 years ago

Thank God this is fictional, I actually felt it... I also felt for Abigail; who doesn't even know that you're dying. Please stay longer so mum and Abigail would be happier.

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2 years ago

Yeah, thanks for the comment, I asked you to comment cause there was a time your comment was showing low score, so I was scared you got spammed😭😭😭, I'm glad it wasn't what I thought

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2 years ago

Aaah Really? Oh! Thank goodness it wasn't me... Thanks alot for your show of concern

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2 years ago

You're welcome.. 💯❤

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2 years ago

It wasn't you, the name look so a like so I thought it was you... Now I can breathe well

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2 years ago

Haha, prompts like this makes writing challenging yet fun :D

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2 years ago

I really enjoyed your entry too.. I was so convinced that it was real at some point and I was feeling sad, then I remembered it was a prompt.. It was a beautiful write up❤💯❤

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