Sunset

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4 years ago

Your day seems too gloomy,

you got tired and weary,

many times you falter

yet manage to stand after.

At times you stumble,

your world seems to crumble,

your strength and spirit

is all you got to beat it.

You watch the sun sets

your day and your bets

would surely set down with it

and yourself you can't beat.

Just as dawn is a ray of hope,

sunset at twilight is dope

to rest and revitalise

for tomorrow to neutralise.

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Such an amazing poem dear. You are a good poet. Keep writing more poems. Waiting for your new poems โค

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4 years ago

not really, just try to write those random thoughts.thanks

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4 years ago

You're always welcome dear โค

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4 years ago

Beautiful poem... Keep it up

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4 years ago

Good work dear๐Ÿ’“

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4 years ago

Beautiful poem.

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4 years ago

wow...realistic poetry.... especially when i was going through the first para it gave me real feel.....

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4 years ago

geeez.. thanks for reading and I more grateful that you understand it

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4 years ago

Nice poem

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4 years ago

Nice poem. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

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4 years ago

The photo cought my attention. Your poem poem is pretty good ๐ŸŒ„

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4 years ago

ow am grateful for that

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4 years ago

Cool ma'am, love the poem โค๏ธ

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4 years ago

Subscribe done.subscribe me

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4 years ago

Yie! No doubt you won in the poem writing contest. Keep writing poems. The emotion can be always found.

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4 years ago

salamat sa mga taong nkakaintindi sa mga sinusulat nting tula. boring ksi xa sa iba

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4 years ago

It's amazing.keep writing poems.i liked it

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4 years ago

Nice rhymes๐Ÿ‘

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4 years ago

You have expressed the feeling wonderfully. Sunsets are meaningful the other way around as others may think its the end rather its the sign of tomorrows new beginning. ๐Ÿ˜Š Keep up again!

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4 years ago

๐Ÿ˜‡a time to rest for strength to fight another day by the morrow

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4 years ago

That was beautiful. And the type that gives off a clear image in my head. Though i have a question, what did it mean by neutralize at the end. What did you mean by that line

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4 years ago

am open and welcome questions,and/corrections๐Ÿ˜

I used Neutralise/neuTralize to rhyme with revitalize,I mean something like to correct or compensate or make up todays misfortune ๐Ÿ˜Š

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4 years ago

Ohh i see. So that's what you meant by that

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4 years ago

yep it talks about misfortunes,disappointments and ones unfailing will to pursue whatever was not achieved today. it may be sad to know that the day would soon end but a sunset should not be seen as an end

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4 years ago

I like this thought pattern of yours. I can see why most of your poems are really emotionally vivid

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