Another mistake...

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Fred was separated from his parent as an infant; his pregnancy came as a mistake. His mom, Tonia wasn’t ready to have a child since she was a student but unprotected sex lead to the pregnancy. Her family didn’t know about it, she hid all through the pregnancy and the delivery; they could have made a difference in Fred’s life.

She gave him out a few weeks after delivery; his mother took a huge sum of money in exchange for him and left the country.


She went abroad to study and started a new life; she graduated with a good degree as a doctor. Her disappearance caused lots of issues because no one could tell her whereabouts but happiness was restored to the family after she chatted with her siblings online and she eventually did a video call with the family after her graduation.

She got a good job and was happy, pressure started coming from her family at some point and she decided to visit Nigeria again.


It’s been 10 years, lots of development has happened in the country and she could barely remember some road as she journeyed from the airport to her hometown.

It was a great reunion for the family, the lost Tonia returned home. The news spread like wildfire, many elders in the community came to celebrate with the family and she returned to the state a few days after.


The couples who got Fred were able to make their babies after 20 years of marriage, Fred was 10 already. The family shifted all care to their new child and it was the beginning of Fred’s problem, they found it hard to spare 10% of their time for him.

With Tonia's experience during her visit, she wasn’t happy with the medical situation in the country and made up her mind to set up her hospital. She worked towards that for another 10 years and finally returned to Nigeria to make her dreams become reality but during those 10 years, a lot happened.

She got married twice; her husband’s left her for another woman because she couldn’t conceive. She gave up on that and decided to build her career after she returned to Nigeria.

Things went well on her arrival; she was able to get approval to own a hospital in the country. Meanwhile, Fred got the biggest shock of his life on his 20th birthday.

His adopted parent made it clear that they weren’t his parent; they gave him every information they had about his mother, gave him money to go and start his life elsewhere. It was a big shock for him and it made his life miserable, his education was affected and he dropped out due to psychological issues, he became an alcohol addict while trying to let go of everything from the past.

Tonia hospital was flourishing while Fred's world was crashing, life can be unfair. The young man deserves a better life than he is living, he couldn’t endure the changes in his life for long and opted in for suicide.


On this fateful day, Tonia got a call from her lawyer abroad that she needed to be in the states due to some reasons attached to her properties. It was an unplanned journey so she gathered the staff and told them she will be away for a few weeks, the meeting went well and she left for the airport from there.

She was to catch the night flight but had to leave early because she had to travel two towns before reaching the airport, her driver was speeding past the highway in the second town when something bumped into the road. He reversed the car because they weren’t sure of what bumped into them; he zoomed off immediately he saw blood and a lifeless body on the road.


Tonia was shivering, she didn’t believe her eyes. She kept screaming in the back seat, the driver was telling her that they can’t stop because people will attack them for what happened.

He sped off...


To be continued...

Thanks for reading, the concluding part of the story will be posted tomorrow.

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Hmmm .......... I am doubtful hope is not what am thinking. Anyway lets me wait for the concluding part before jumping to the conclusion

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2 years ago

Oh boy, why do I have a feeling that the person they bumped into was Fred 😢 let me not keep assuming sha, I will just wait for the continuation

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2 years ago

Awww this is very touching story I love reading and I suggest in this situation as it's that Tonia would be the solution to her only child's problem, I would really love to go through some other part of the story again.

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2 years ago

Oh no. That sounds like tragedy in the making.

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2 years ago

OMG!, So many questions are trooping into my head right now, I know that person is her son. I just hope she recognizes him and hopefully he's alive for a reunion. Nice story. I love the suspense.

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2 years ago

She definitely won't be able to recognize him after 20 years, remember she gave him out at 2 weeks old.

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2 years ago

Ohhh!! I hope the driver doesn’t speed up and save Fred life ohh Tonia made mistakes in her decision and other way round she didn’t I’ll be will to read the second part. But how did you come with such thoughts? It’s amazing.

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2 years ago

I just write when inspired to do so. Not helping Fred would be a great mistake Tonia won't forgive herself for making, let's hope someone saves his life.

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2 years ago

Hummn. Whats would happen next like this oo. What would happen to the great hospital. Maybe she would be the one to save her only child..

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2 years ago

She could be the one if she waited but it doesn't look like that, he might be dead in no time with the way he was losing blood.

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2 years ago

I still Dey wait for the next episode

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2 years ago

Gengen (just like the sound in a movie when something is about to happen or has happened. Lol) What will now happen? Tonia didn´t know it is her son who was knocked down by her own driver. I need to know what´s next.

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2 years ago

I wish she knew, she would have strangled the driver immediately. Let's see how it goes because I am also looking forward to the next episode.

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2 years ago

Omg, hope it's not Fred!

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2 years ago

It was Fred, he already wanted to take his life since he didn't understand the things that were going on in his life anymore.

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2 years ago

Seems it's gonna be a heartbreaking story George

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2 years ago

It's too early to say that, just relax and let's see out things ends.

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2 years ago

will definitely wait for the next part, I was intrigue.

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2 years ago

Good story writing brother. Tonia should have at least searched for his son. Tonia ignored his son. Fred was miserable. Pity on young boy.

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2 years ago

Searching for him would have been a proud thing to do if she didn't collect money in exchange for him.

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