Revenge is best served cold.

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Vera had just recieved a call from her younger brother that their mother had slumped again in the kitchen. This would be the second time in less than two months that their mom would collapse. Without waiting for the next lecture, she boarded a taxi and told the driver to take her to the hospital that the Mom had been admitted.

The doctor informed her that her mother was still not out of the woods. Her blood pressure was still on a high since the last time she fell and this had worsened her condition.

While waiting at the hospital lounge, praying nothing terrible happens to her mother, her younger brother femi came to sit beside her. He again told her all that had been happening at home while she had been away at the University for the past three months.

Her father's new wife have been given their mother alot of troubles and their gentle mother was just so meek to comfront her tormentor and she continued to bear the heartaches. Ofcourse their dad didn't care, he never cared....They were still talking when the doctor came out of the ward and announced that her mother didn't survive.

Vera was simply unconsolable and she continued to scream. She screamed so loud that her voice reverberated through the hospital. She just couldn't believe that mother was gone. She was angry at her mother the last time they spoke over the phone. She was dissapointed that her mother wouldn't defend herself any time her father and the other woman made a fool of her. She had angrily cut the call and even on the following morning when her mother called her again, she was still angry that and didn't respond. Ofcourse she Knew her mother would only try to pacify her and make her forgive her father.

She thought no woman on earth could ever tolerate the humiliation that her mother had been passing through for months now. Vera couldn't understand how her mother could continue to love and and cover for this terrible man despite all the physical and emotional abuses.

Her father lived a licentious life. This was not the first time he had brought a strange woman home when he couldn't even feed his family. No need to mention that he had a company of girlfriends outside, some of whom were of Vera's age.

Two days later, Vera summoned her father in the sitting room. From the look on his face, Vera didn't need anyone to tell her that her father couldn't care less about the death of his wife. This caused hot anger to flow from her heart down to her legs. Without thinking, she told him to his face that he had killed her mother. Her father merely laughed and called her crazy.

He replied that her Mom became tired of life and decided to go. Vera couldn't contain her rage anymore and she began to scream insults at him. She came very close and almost stab her forefinger into his eyes as she screamed. At that moment, her stepmom came into the room and threaten to beat her up. She called Vera an idiot child whose mother didn't raise properly before her death. And that was the last straw, Vera turned towards the little woman and violently hit her across her face.

This really came as a rude shock to both husband and wife and they continued to stare at the young lady with mouth agape for some seconds. Vera' felt a flicker of pleasure and satisfaction. She had been wanting to do this for a long time now and she was somewhat grateful that her mother was no longer around to stop her. Vera was about launching another attack when her younger brother ran into the room and pulled her away.

Her father was so shaken that he began to call her names. Really awful names that a father wouldn't call his own daughter. Vera on the other hand, didn't care about her father's words. He had always been a "useless" father and would remain so .

On her way back to the university, Vera promised that she would make her father and his wife pay dearly for her mother's death. She would make them suffer, she would show them hell.... In such a bitter rage, She kept thinking about all the awful things she would do to hurt them.

Her boyfriend really felt sorry for her as she continued to cry on his shoulders. He gave her some of the hard drugs that Vera had vehemently frowned at ever since they started dating. But since she was already emotionally broken, she believed him when he said that the substance would help her calm down.

Vera was pleasantly surprised when she realized that the substance help ease her pains and warmed her heart she continued to take more.

This would inspire us with the ruthless determination and confidence we would need to carry out our revenge on your father and his wife in the coming days. Her boyfriend said.

The end...

The story above is merely a figment of the writer's imagination. Any inconvenience and incidence of name resembling that of the character are deeply regretted.

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I really hate receiving phone calls about trouble from family members...it gets me worked up and wholly distracted.

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2 years ago

I understand perfectly well. Same here too

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2 years ago

So you ended it just like that? This your cliffhanger no be here o 😩 abeg repalce that "The end..." With "to be continued..."

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2 years ago

Don't worry. Wait for it 😆

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2 years ago

Was hoping to see TO BE CONTINUED and not the end. It was that captivating, yes. Good writing.

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2 years ago

San q !

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2 years ago

ehn?

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2 years ago

I enjoyed this, I do feel for Vera though, I wish she could be like her mother, perhaps she would have seen love out of it all. Vera is just the opposite of her cool headed mum. This was a lovely story Bil.

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2 years ago

She couldn't have possibly been like her mom, she obviously hated her Mom for been weak

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2 years ago

You wrote the story so well that it felt I was watching things happen right before my eyes. Brilliant write-up B, but is there perhaps a continuation to it?

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2 years ago

Sure, definitely. Would do something about it.

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2 years ago

such an intriguing story, if it was in my place, I'd definitely beat the ones who have done harm to my mother, even if it's a so-called blood relative

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2 years ago

Ofcourse, no one could tolerate such disrespect against a parent

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2 years ago

I guess I'd be a ragtag person like Vera in such a situation, even though my parents love each other so much and my dad couldn't do that, anyway wouldn't there be a sequel to the story? 😁

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2 years ago

I shall Complete it someday, promise 😅

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2 years ago

Ooh! Please come back and tell us how the story ended. I wanna see how her step mother and father were paid back for all the wickedness they did to her mom, which led to her death. Please come and tell us.

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2 years ago

The end, oh no no I want to see what can happen next. This feels like an interval. While taking revenge some take extreme measures which later on bite them back.

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2 years ago

Oow i thought taking drugs will make her addictive to drugs, lol thanks nothing like that just happened. I felt the feeling of satisfaction too when she used her hand for attacking purpose. I would like to recommend basic martial arts for women, every single women should learn these so they can speak for themselves.

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2 years ago

Lol Bibi. Yea, it's recommendable for women and children to learn how to defend themselves

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2 years ago

Don't you dare end this. We need to see what she did you exert that revenge in the second part.

Revenge is sweet. Revenge is best served cold. In other words, revenge is ice cream.

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2 years ago

Lol, Sir. I shall Complete it someday..

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2 years ago

Some day 😂😂🤣😂.

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2 years ago

The story was shocking in some parts,but I'd to point out how did her mother sacrificed and take risk for loving the of man who doesn't able to reciprocate her love.

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2 years ago

That's what lov could do to a woman.

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2 years ago

I am inspired by your story writing ability, feeling sad for vera, unfortunately i have been a witness of incident much similar to the story that you wrote, one of our neighbour does the same with his family and when he cheated upon his wife and because of the bad and depressing environment one of their daughters eat sleeping pills but thank god she was admitted to hospital on time and after that the aunty moved on to her parents house with her childs, i hope she will be living a good life.

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2 years ago

It's always not easy in the children watching their dad tormenting their mom. It causes them emotional trauma

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2 years ago

Dear Bilqees, you have a very good writing and storytelling ability. I was very sad for Vera and her mother and brother. Unfortunately, the ignorance and deviance of one parent can destroy the whole family. I was upset that her boyfriend encouraged her to use substance in such a situation.

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2 years ago

And that's how she became a drug addict too.. thank you Ellen.

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