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[11] Parted [11th] of 100 Poems for me- The bleed of words Collection An hour and a half (Ph Time) and it'll be officially, September. It's coming so fast that I'm partially shocked that we'll be changing another month. Yet, there's nothing to be worried about. Let's welcome September with open arms! Wishing that this new month will offer us more Productivity and happiness!!! Good night everyone! I don't have much idea about what I'm writing right now. And why did I even write this? Hahaha. **Parted** Do me a favor and don't say the words, can you? Wish this is a driver's license to renew, yet you're not like that, as I see where you sat. A metric system will understand, the gap where I and you stand, Right now, as if you knew, or yes, you planned this too. For quite sometime of being together, Was it only me or you who rendered? of love, loyalty, and commitment, yes! say this is the same as your other investment. Ain't perfect for I had made mistakes, knew this relationship has always been at stake, But with you I've learned to gamble, Now, the truth I come to stumble. To cut ties or to let loose, Promises yet sweeteened shackles, Coated my heart to believe that, But why does the pain ain't that bad? I thought for the millionth time, as I look into your eyes right now, We're too young, yet too old not to know, We should have parted years ago. All rights reserved. Lead image-unsplash **You may wanna read my previous works:** Night is oddly Noisier https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/night-is-oddly-noisier-8992793c The silent noise https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/the-silent-noise-52e2599d Talk back and you're dead https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/talk-back-and-youre-dead-501f7585 Untitled, Unedited & Undone https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/untitled-unedited-undone-ad740d57 How much is a home? https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/how-much-is-a-home-71ce99be Worried https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/worried-a23e25c2 Can you hear me? https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/can-you-hear-me-d75ffb84 No one https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/no-one-96c7fdf0 Most of the time https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/most-of-the-time-dcde5d3c It's fine https://read.cash/@AmazingWorld/10-its-fine-24f63496
17 comments
This is as usual amazing to read hon, you should put all these in a book and publish it:)
heyyy thank you for stopping and reading it! Thank you! I am thinking about that. But you know, the budget will have to speak with me first hehehe
Don't worry about the budget, you will make good amount in read and noise and you can finance yourself in future :) Our future is bright hon
I agree with @Theblackdoll :)
take that in huge consid❤ thankk you!
Wowwwwww! This is really good! :D I love rhymes :D
yay good thing you like rhymes. Thank you! Tho, I am not into whole rhyming. It's fun even if it's not.
I love your poem. We can always relate when it's about love. 💗
wahaha naku patay🤦♀️ Hindi ako mahilig masyado sa topic na yarn e. Wala naman akong maisip.
Ang gandaaa nga eh. Keep on writing dear 💗
Uy thank yow
I love this. Hays namimiss ko na gumawa ng poem.
Gawa ka na para di ko feel na mag isa lang ako djk. hehehe
Love love lovee, I'll be sad if I'm going to read it when I'm single but I'm inlove till now so it can't affect me hahaha. But I wanna said that's a 9/10 poem for there's always a room for improvement!!!
yay that's great sanaols djk. thank you thank you! There are tons of room for me to improve. Hope so.
Yay! Amazingworld! haha agree with both bloghound and theblackdoll there!
Thank youuu maybe soon. Next next year baka po. I need to improve more before becoming more ambitious to bring it to actual paper .