Cinderella and the lost shoe

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Dancing on the floor with her long time crush, Ella forgets the time. When the bell rang, she remember what the fairy-god mother had said. "Go home before twelve midnight for everything will be returned". She rush to the stairs and forget to bid the prince a goodbye. As she came down the stairs she left her shoes but she has no time to return. So, she chose to leave the shoes rather than returning her old self infront of the prince.

On the other hand before the dance started the two step sister and her stepmother was there looking intently to the prince presenting her daughter. But when the dance had started the prince found a beautiful girl who came late and chose to dance with her instead.

The stepmother look at the girl and it's so familiar. She couldn't confirmed if it's really her because she forget her eye glasses. There is only one way to confirmed and that's when she got home. While her two daughters were busy eating the food in the table, she grab them and drag them outside to go home. The house was silent and no one is home. She checks all the work she assigned to Ella before they leave and it's all done. She went to the maids quarter to Cinderella's room but she's not there.

"Where is that little brat?" She mumbled to herself.

And she starts looking for her in the mansion. Since the house was so big, it took her hours to checked all the rooms and area in the house. She's almost done and it's midnight there is only one place she did not visit and that's at the back yard in the garbage area. She got suspicious if Ella wasn't there then it's confirmed it's her who wandered around the palace and dance with the prince.

When she came into the backyard she saw Ella humming like a bird and dancing happily along the garbage.

"There you are, you little brat!"

"Oh, mother! What are you doing here? I thought you were in the palace attending the ceremony?"

Confused if she would believe it or not. She wasn't able to reply immediately.

"Mother? Is there anything you would ask for me to be done?

"No. I wanted to ask if you where here the whole time?"

"Yes, off course mother. I finished all the task you have given."

"Good." "Get inside and go to your room now."

"Yes, mother"

Wew it was a close call. If isn't with the help of the fairy-godmother Ella would have get caught by her stepmother. She went to her bedroom and sleep happily.

When the morning came and the prince had announcement of visiting every maiden who came to her party to fit the lost shoe. And who ever would fit the shoe will be the one to marry the prince. Ella's stepmother get too excited and hurriedly woke up her daughters. But not Cinderella. She lock her up in her bedroom instead.

When the prince assistants arrive in the house, the horn was blown to announce their arrival. Hearing the horn Ella wanted to know what is happening but when she tried to open the door, she couldn't. It was lock. She called her fairy-godmother to asked for help. She immediately dialled her phone and asked her if she could come and freed her. The fairy-godmother agreed to help her.

Since it was morning she couldn't use her magic to fly to got to Ella's place. So, she decided to walk and plan to enter through the back door so that the stepmother would not notice her.

The assistants announce what the prince has to say. It was Anastasia's turn to fit the shoe but her feet is too small. It's Drizella's turn but her feet is too big. The frustrated mother help her daughters to fit the shoe but it won't. She commanded the assistants to help her daughters fit the shoe but it won't. The assistants retreated and asked if there is another maiden in the house who could try to fit the shoe. But the stepmother answered hurriedly that the is none other than them. The assistants were suspicious because the house is big and there is no one other than them.

"You have any helpers madam?"

"No, we have no helpers here."

Continued looking the assistant saw a maiden just pass by. Hurriedly the assistant called the maiden who sneaks into the maids quarter.

"Hi, there! can you come here and try to fit this shoe?"

She couldn't disagree because she seen how shocked and puzzled Ella's stepmother upon seeing her.

"Of course." Seeing the shoes she's shocked. She put it on and the assistants was joyful of seeing the shoe perfectly fitted on her. The search is over.

The assistants hurriedly assisted her into the carriage and send her to the palace. And the fairy-godmother married the prince and they live happily ever after.

"Did you like the story?" the fairy asks her daughters.

Fairywan: yes.

Fairytoe: no, mother.

Fairytree: I have so many questions mother.

"Yes. What is it? F*tree?

F*tree: why is fairy was called a maiden if she's already a god-mother?

"Because, last time I check fairy doesn't get old, F*tree."

F*tree: oh! I see.

F*toe: how about the shoe mother? Why does it fit to the god-mother when it was Ella who used it in the party?

"Because Ella just borrowed it from the god-mother".

F*toe: Was it? Oh, I didn't know that.

"Yes it is, F*toe"

F*wan: Mother I have question too.

"Yes, go on F*wan?"

F*wan: why did the stepmom got shock when she seen the god-mother.

"Off course, she is. Because they know each other."

3 daughters in unison " how come?"

"Because they are both mothers. Make sense?"

3 daughters: ohhhhh ! yes mother.

" Okay, now get some sleep. Bed time story is over. Good night everyone"

3 daughters: Good night Fairy mother


This story serves as an entry to the #promptfactory of @meitanteikudo . Sense I really wanted to write a story and I wanted to try if I can. Sorry if the story is quite a mess, my apologies. It's my first time writing a short story. So bare with me. I hope you enjoyed it.

@meitanteikudo sir idol ito Napo ang chismis na pinagpuyatan kong gawin. Pasensya na po kakasimula ko palang po gumawa Ng chismis. Sana po nagustuhan niyo. 😁😁😅😅 (P.s your comment is highly needed.)

To my readers if you have something to say to improved my writing I really love to hear it in the comments section below.

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Mao ni giingon nga don't borrow. Use your own, have your own. Para di ma irok hahHA

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2 years ago

Hala katagna lageh ka sa moral lesson aning storyaha John 🤣🤣🤣

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2 years ago

Ako pa hahahah

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2 years ago

Nagets Jud nimu Ang stroya sa paytera uyy 😂😂 idol kaayu bay Makontento lageh ug UNsay naa ug dli magsalig ni fairy-godmother permi 😅😅

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2 years ago

So mga niagi wa diay? Hahahaha

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2 years ago

Hahaha na misunderstood man nila 😂😂

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2 years ago

Everything is okay until the fairy God-mother try the shoes. Ahahahahaha.haneppp. nakalimang basa ata ako sa question and answer ng mga fairy Bago ko magetss. Kawawang Ell hahaha ginamit lang.

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2 years ago

Hahaha hindi Naman lesson learned Lang Kay Ella wag manghiram Ng gamit palagi .. 😂😂 sorry ha? Medyu messy Yung pagkagawa ko I couldn't end it well and write it very well. Struggle is real parang ayaw ko Ng gumawa ulit haha

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2 years ago

Lol.. Nung nabasa ko yung prompt ni Kudo. Cinderella dn una pumasok sa isip ko. Haha. Laptrip sa last part 🤣

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2 years ago

Haha salamat at naenjoy mo pakulo ko sis.. piniga kuno talaga lahat Yan Lang makayanan ko 😁😁 Gumawa ka Rin ba Ng storya patungkol sa prompt ni idol?

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2 years ago

Hahaha jusko c fairy godmother man diay ang modaog. Hahaha

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2 years ago

Hahaha ohm Kay iyaha man tong sapatos gud hinulam Raman tong Cinderella niya Kay mas giganahan man si Cinderella sa iya shoes kesa sa iya gimagic 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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2 years ago

Hahaha papha c Cinderella

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2 years ago

Hahaha merisi lageh dli man gud makontento ug UNsay naa niya awa lesson learn.. dli mag sig panghulam ug gamit 😂😂😂

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2 years ago

Hahaha mayra jod di ko sig panghuwam ug di pod ko ganahan magpahuwam

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2 years ago

Hahaha ohm labi na sa mga mega nga tulay2 kunohay murag si fairy-godmother ja siya diay mauyab 😂😂😂

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2 years ago

Traydor mem haha

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2 years ago

Hahahahaha ohm jusko Mao bantay2 ta anang mga fairy-godmother tahay memsh 🤣🤣🤣

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2 years ago

Hahaha na di nako manawag ana mem kay basin traydoron ko. Dghan na raba na ron

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2 years ago

Labaw memsh kalat na Jud na sila karun panahona mas maayu pa si stepmother Kay sure Jud Kang kontrabida siya pero so fairy-godmother dli ka kasabot sa iya tinuod na motive og nature

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2 years ago

Bwahahahaha hanep sa twist areh 😂😂😂, tapos dun sa they are mother hanep yan bwahahahahaha. Pero ang galinggggg, ung sakin naka draft pa rin wahahaha

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2 years ago

Hahahha salamat Naman at mukhang na enjoy mo Yung pakolo ko 😁😁 Ekasi Naman stepmother at god-mother magkumare sila sis 🤣🤣🤣 Malamang magkakilala talaga sila

Uyy bakit Naman? Tapusin mo Yan at babasahin ko 😁😁😁

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2 years ago

Wahahahaya, ung sakin diko pa sure. Mejo gusto ko sana kakaiba talagabwahahaha

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2 years ago

Luhhh siya!! chismis nga ito!!!! Hahhaha kawawa naman si Ella. hahaha Gumugusto pala itong si fairy godmother. ahaha may pa pun ka pa ah. hahha

Nakakatuwa lang ung 3 daughters, ung mga name nila. tapos biglang naging mura? Ftree. Ftoe. hahhahaha

Anyhow, good job. :)

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2 years ago

Ayeehhh.. hahahaha kinilig ako na natawa sa comment niyo po. Tapos sinearch ko pa talaga Kung anong meaning Ng "pun" Kasi diko Alam tapos nung nalaman ko natawa ako ulit. 😅😅

Sorry po sa pangalan Wala ako maisip na iba ehh.. Yun lng laman Ng isip ko 🤣 tsaka tinamad na ako magtype Maya sinoshort cut ko nalng promise Hindi ko po intention talaga na magmura 😁😁

Thanks po super for encouraging me to write. Though It's my first time writing such story it's not bad naman 😂 (nag alsa Ng sariling Bangko 😅😁) I hope I could write more 😊

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2 years ago

Hahaa totoo naman. It's not so bad. It's good. :)) keep it up!

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2 years ago

It's sincerely a loving story, that tells of how much love can take one to

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2 years ago

To what? Hehe I wonder what it is. 🤔

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2 years ago

Hahahaha kasiaw

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2 years ago

Hahaha pasayloa ko den nagkatag Lang agi naku. Naikag na bitaw kaayu ko sigeg basa ug mga writings nga short story mga writer na perting lihiroa manghimo. Frustrated writer here 🖐️🤣🤣🤣

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2 years ago

Hahah frustrated d ay?

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2 years ago

Ohm kaayu hehe

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