@Meher89
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Mysterious sky
*"The sky seems to have no end, This sky is infinite.* *Birds flutter their wings in the open sky, And the clouds float to the address of the sky.* *The mysterious colour of the sky sway in everyone's mind,* *That's why everyone wants to be a bird,* *They wants to fly in the sky like bird."*
Although I can't write nice poetry, but i try my best. One of the greatest creations of the creator is sky which is infinite. There is nothing left to compose the stories and poems of the poets and writers about this sky.Seeing the wings of birds flying in the sky, the desire to fly in the sky arose in the minds of the people. And from that desire, airplanes were made.
Everyone wants to get lost in the mystery of clouds. When clouds like cotton float in the sky, it looks really amazing. The twilight sky of the evening looks the most beautiful. The whole sky then fills with golden yellow colour. And at night when the sky is full, they see that the mind becomes better. The light of the moon then makes the house light.
And when it rains from the clouds, that rain is a blessing for us. Have you ever heard the sound of rain falling on the tin shade? The sound is wonderful. How much research scientists have done on this sky. The sky is as limitless as there is no end to knowing its secrets.
Although the mystery of the sky is not over, my writing is over here.Hahaha....😁 I hope everyone has enjoyed it.💞
Device: Redmi 4X Thanks @wakeupkitty @heartbeat1515 and @Isabellaa for their great initiative... I hope they like my photography...💞 Here's the link of their great initiative about smartphone photography... https://read.cash/@Isabellaa/photography-contest-9b7cc302
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Beautiful photographs ❤️ The sound of rain in the tin shade is just awesome. All the best dear 💕
Thanks sis
Nice photograpy sister😂😂I hope you will be much better in your next article 😊😊Thanks for sharing this😊
i liked the article as well as the photographs.....thanks for shairng
you're doing great in writing poem.. just feel it then let your pen write it.. the clouds look awesome
Being a photographer is not easy but you're captured well
Nice☺️
beautiful photography sister 😍
About your poem, I suggest that you do not use the bold letter for it. Italic is enough. I cannot relate your poem to your photography. > "The sky seems to have no end, This sky is infinite. Sounds like a photography of sky from the beach which does look like there is no end. > Birds flutter their wings in the open sky, And the clouds float to the address of the sky. Sky with birds perhaps? > The mysterious colour of the sky sway in everyone's mind, Maybe different colour of the sky that people don't usually see. > That's why everyone wants to be a bird, They wants to fly in the sky like bird." I don't think that people want to be a bird because of the beautiful sky. I think it is because the birds look free flying in the sky even though they are not totally free.
Thank you sir for your valuable feedback. I understand my mistakes now. I will try not to make these mistakes in the future.
Good luck with the contest and I wish for you to have fun. You could stop by the other participant's entry and give them a comment too. That would be a nice start for engaging.
Ivm scared of height.. I dont want to be a bird 😁. Im contented to look at the sky from here below😊
Text written in bold hurts the eyes and is annoying. I read your poem though. It's an original start. If you download Grammarly you have next to a tool for grammar synonyms at hand too. You can easily change your poem this way. Search/use different words and not only "sky". Always the same word makes a text boring. The second photo somehow reminds me of muddy footprints. The third photo is as if I am looking at a globe. A planet or a big ball of clouds. To me this is a great shot. Well done and good luck with the contest. P.s. you can edit the text if you like. 🍀👍
Thanks for your valuable feedback sir...Ok no problem i will edit some mistakes of this article