Alcohol

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4 years ago

Many love alcohol because it makes them high,

Forgetting much of it can leave them dry.

At first it gives you an ecstatic feeling

But soon it leaves you weak and probably sleeping.

Many run to it as a way out of pain, stress and challenges,

But the effects leaves them biting off the nails on their phalanges.

At first, its just like a broken vase put together again,

Later, you realize it's not the same, perhaps all in vain.

Little pain and emotional, for help you run to alcohol,

Perhaps counselling should be recommended, not alcohol.

True the effect may take your worries away. It's temporary

Because soon the pain, stress and worries return as the effect leaves you fast like Ferrari.

Take little alcohol if you must, but don't become an alcoholic.

It is addictive, leaving you in moments so pathetic.

Why not stop now, when you can,

It is a decision and action to take, only you can.

The end.


Hey @wakeupkitty does this qualify as poetry? If yes, then I will submit it as my entry. And I hope to make the top three.

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alcohol is goo for the body but there is a limit so my advice to all that are growing and all that are grown is that they should know their limit of alcohol intake as too much is what becomes harmful

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4 years ago

Too much of everything isn't good. As well as alcohol

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4 years ago

exactly and that was what I was trying to point out in my comment

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4 years ago

Nice

In chemistry, alcohol is an organic compound in which the hydroxyl functional group (-O H) is attached to a saturated carbon atom. [2] The general formula of alcohol is R-O H, ie the hydroxyl group O H, attached to the alkane, i.e. hydrocarbon chain. Carboxylic acids, which are obtained by oxidation of alcohol, have a similar structure. The hydroxyl group (functional group) consists of one hydrogen atom and one oxygen atom, therefore it is monovalent. Therefore, the chain to which the group is attached must be monovalent. Thus, e.g. the summarized structural formula of ethanol to be CH3-CH2-OH. The term alcohol originally referred to the primary alcohol ethyl alcohol (ethanol), which is the predominant alcohol in alcoholic beverages.

The suffix -ol occurs in the IUPAC chemical names [3] of all substances in which the hydroxyl group is the functional group with the highest priority; in substances where a higher priority group is present, the prefix hydroxy is used in IUPAC names. The suffix -ol in non-systematic names (such as paracetamol [4] [5] or cholesterol [6]) also typically indicates the presence of a hydroxyl group in the substance, and they can therefore be called alcohols. However, many substances, especially sugars (e.g. glucose [7] and sucrose [8], contain hydroxyl functional groups and the suffix is ​​not used. One important class of alcohols, whose simplest members are methanol and ethanol, are alcohols with a saturated unbranched chain. Their general formula is CnH2n + 1OH.

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4 years ago

Deep and yet a good piece of advise to younger generations to focused on most important things rather than drining alcohol.

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4 years ago

I agree. To be honest I take alcohol, occasionally. I can go weeks and months without having a drink. But I have friends that do it daily. Like their life depends on it.

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4 years ago

Yeah we are different about taking a drink,other people take it as their part of everyday lives

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4 years ago

And that's a wrong lifestyle

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4 years ago

It is wonderful

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4 years ago

Thanks.

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4 years ago

It's actually in the blood, but it can be controlled when we have discipline 👌

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4 years ago

Yes I can be. But we get to a stage where it will be difficult to. The earlier the better.

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4 years ago

You are absolutely right, the earlier the better

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4 years ago

True.

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4 years ago

Changes in the personality level of a person who has problems with alcohol inevitably reflect on his behavior, and thus on his attitude towards the environment. Therefore, the problem of alcohol dependence goes beyond the individual, great pressure and numerous symptoms of the disease are suffered by those closest to him, and over time the consequences are inevitably felt in the wider social environment due to various forms of risky behavior of alcoholics.

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4 years ago

Well said. The personality of an alcoholic is greatly influenced by the effects of the alcohol. I know a man who goes out every night, and ends up sleeping in gutters, on the streets and other wrong places. When he has a home.

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4 years ago

This definitely is one and you have my vote. What I like is that you write about the alcohol effects but thanks to the kind of poetry you choose it's so.ething which can make you smile to.

You know where to leave your link and do not forget to make a short post to promote the giveaway.

You need to post in the community Daily trends I believe.

Good luck👍

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4 years ago

Thank you. I already joined the community and sent this post there. Just left with the short post.

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4 years ago

Great you did. 👍💕

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4 years ago

I can't say I'm sober now. I will defineitely not say it tonight. 😆 But the reason was not because of escapism. It's just something I wanna do right now. It's just a feeling I look forward to right now.. And this does not make me less of a good citizen. 🤭

cheers!! 💜

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4 years ago

Cheers my not sober friend. For long on this thought and feelings, we linger.

When will you get sober and let your feelings bare?

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4 years ago

Hours later, maybe haha. But I still think it should all be kept between me and this bottle of beer. haha

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4 years ago

Sorry to infer, are you male or female?

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4 years ago

a lady.. 😊 born female, grew up as a lady. A woman physically, psychologically and mentally.

I don't mean to offend anyone, please.

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4 years ago

You just planted a thought in my mind. "A woman physically"

Now I begin to imagine, the physicality of your feminism

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4 years ago

😶 oooops that came out wrong. 😆 should I edit my comment? 😐

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4 years ago

Hahaha. Please don't. It's okay the way it is. So do you have a love in your life. Perhaps married?

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4 years ago

I am married. 😊 I have kids too. 😊 And you? 😊

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4 years ago

Not married, no kids.

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4 years ago

I see. You will eventually.. 😊 Get the gear up and start searching. 😊 or enjoy the freedom for now. haha

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4 years ago

Well, I will enjoy the free for the moment. And get the gear up when I'm ready.

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4 years ago