Don't look into journals My Submission to @Jdine 's Contest that should be posted in ****Thriller/Horror Stories (dc61)**** https://read.cash/@Jdine https://read.cash/c/thrillerhorror-stories-dc61 For the details on that contest, you could check here **https://read.cash/@Jdine/birth-month-giveaway-d289b904** I just wanted to write horror in all honesty XD **Include 3 or more word prompts in your article. (DREAM, TWISTED, SILENT, DARK, TERRIFY, COLD)** Starto! Visiting my grandparents' place was something I always hated, everything smelled like it was at the brink of death plus I hated my grandmother who had a habit of pinching my cheeks too hard. I think it got harder when my grandfather passed because it left a burning red mark after she removed her hand. I was told I could explore the house upon our arrival, so I did. I walked everywhere in the **silent** house but then one room caught my eye. It was my grandfather's study room. Looks like nobody came in here since he was found dead **cold**. I don't think anybody would be thrilled with the thought that someone died in a room too, if anything, it would **terrify** them. Anyways, I see his things were still there, same books, same pens, same **twisted** paintings. He had a talent of the arts, something I never got and I remember he always held a journal close but he never allowed us to look at it. Strangely, that said journal was on the desk. I flipped the page opened and was greeted with this image of the moon. Then I turned the page, it grew closer and beneath it stood a female figure. It gave me the chills but I pushed though with the pages, the more I turned the pages, the closer the woman got, the more details I saw. It was almost like in my **dreams**, she had a crooked smile and gleaming eyes, she looked thirsty for blood and ready to kill and the images made it look like she was moving, like she was almost laughing. Soon enough I thought she was, with how I heard shrill maniacal laughs echo in the room but I couldn't stop looking at the room. On the last page, however, The woman vanished. Everything went **dark** and little did I know, she was already right behind me, knife in hand, ready to slash me open. So now I know why my grandfather looked like he was sewn back together the last time I saw him at his funeral. I should have listened and never opened his journal. The next thing I new, a fresh layer of red coated what had already turned brown.
Let's say this is the journal image that I made for this XD https://read.cash/@Hanzell/playing-with-ink-pt-2-34ab8ad0 Same timer because I love beethoven hehehe https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJeNXd0SZNc&feature=emb_title used laptop to type time start: 4:40, ph time, end: 4:50, ph time. I didn't edit anymore, s highlighted the prompt words
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Regretted reading this now as I am alone in my room. Hahaha. I can imagine the woman coming closer and closer. And now I'm not sure if I can write a horror story for @Jdine contest. 😅
Was it scary??? OwO i tell my susters they'll die if they open my journals, i thought it would be a good idea 😂
what?! I have a habit to imagine what I'm reading if I really like the story. I did this in your story, I think I saw how you were terrified in that story. nice nice bravo!
Same same ^-^ though I only get those images now if it was so very detailed like how @marcmire writes
Same here. Hahaha. 😅 good one Hanzell! 👏👏👏
Wow very intense and thrilling read. Nicely written and very original. Keep sharing, would love to read more
Thank you ^-^ this is my love for the goosebumps series and Stephen king at work
Stephen king is a legend. But as I told you before I am not a fan of horror stories as I get scared quickly 😂
Ehh you never told me that before. But yes! Stephen king is a legend and i love his works so much :") probably where i got my writing style too
Well good luck to you and if you like it I hope you enjoy your passion. Too bad I am get scared 😂😂
My passion isn't in horror but I just enjoy scaring people. I make my sisters read sometimes just to make them paranoid
Lol. My sisters and nieces do this thing to each other and then try to scare them off when they are alone in the home 😂
It makes life fun! I'm still the best scarer in the house so far UwU and what's good is that they haven't scared me much yet
Hahaha I am sure you are, I hope you never scare me 😜😂😂
I probably won't? It would be hard to do so here
😂 that is good news for me
Now you can rest easy 😂😂😂 i still have one more entry to go so I hope that one scares you good too
Lol. Ok I will wait for the article and lets see if I can take it or notb😃
Maybe I'll do that tomorrow or later on at night
Sure. Good luck. I will also be writing about my watch collection as promised.
Ohhh >w< that's so exciting and really something to look forward to
Thanks 👍🏻
Really a creepy story. So detailed that you can vividly picture the whole scenario.
Thank you ^-^ i read a lot so it helps fuel my head. I hope you stay tuned for my last entry 😂
This is really wonderful I didn't tale my eyes off and I was so curious while reading this is really great I hope you win
I hope you give it a try too. I just did this because I'm a huge horror fan
Wah.. you're really great in narrative writing.. i think you always have a good grade on your writing exams. 😁
Not really. I don't write this well on my academic papers and usually my papers are required to be third person so i can't insert my views in those papers like i can here
Well true..i always have a topic to be discussed.. But you're really great
Thank you, but i rarely feel like writing literary pieces because i still think people won't appreciate it much
Nope, i like it more
more than my usual science and art stuff XD
I like art too. 😁
Wow..... Awesome writing. You are one of the great writter..... I think you will better in future. 😍
Aww thank you. I hope you check out the rest of my articles, see if you'll think the same about the rest
Whoa! I felt goosebumps as I read your article.
Thank you ^-^ I just did my final entry. I've used up all my contest lifelines now so tomorrow I'll be back to science and art
What an intense story. A thrilling at the same time give creepy vibes
I'm glad you found the story thrilling, i hope you saw my other entries for this contest
Oh. Sorry I didn't, cause I started here only yesterday but surely I'll check it out later
Ohh a new user, welcome here! I hope you're enjoying your stay so far? You take your time looking
Thank you for welcoming me here. Yes, I'm enjoying so far. I was shock when I wake up, my points gone higher. Hoping to do more. I love trilling stories. I engage more to this community. Keep writing good entries
Well they reset around 8am since i see you're also a filipino XD i usually don't write thriller here, i mostly do science and art so I'm glad you appreciate the few exceptions i make
Oh. Is it. But I'll check your art later.
https://read.cash/@Hanzell/an-index-of-all-the-article-written-so-far-09a31fba This will make things easier XD
Thanks for this
Of course, it makes things a lot easier, really
This is why I always obey instructions. The idea of a scary painting that keeps on coming closer is terrible; after the first three pages, I'll just close the journal, pack my stuff and leave. I do not like trouble.
You know kids, curiosity really gets to them so if something moves it makes them curious. I think the same things happen with adults too. You're probably a good kid for obeying the rules 😂
Heh Heh
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