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June 13 has come and all of them are already in the bus terminal except for Fatima who didn't manage to come due to the fact that her parents are strict. Since they booked it already, they have no choice but to proceed in their destination even without Fatima. There also other people in the bus. All of them wears black which they found weird.

It takes 8 hours before they reach the island. When they are finally there they immediately enter in Barnabas Hotel where they are going to stay for a week. On the other side, Fatima is experiencing a sleep paralysis. In her dreams, she thought she was in very creepy island filled with bones and annoying smell. She can't help but to get fear. Her knees are shaking as she continue to walk in silence and she is hoping for someone to save her.

She can feel that her body is like tearing apart. She screamed because of the excruciating pain. Her blood started to flow and in just a snap, she saw her friends on the other side. They are emotionless. She saw that Alex' neck was broken, Barbie's eyes are missing, Carl's hand are twisted and splintered, Dianne's leg is on the floor and Erold's stomach is being enjoyed by flies and other insects on the ground. She felt a burning sensation in her chest and then she vomit. That time, she is now awake. She slap her face to confirm that what she saw are purely dream. She felt that her face is aching. She immediately grab her phone and she saw that the time is 3:00 am. She dialed Alex number but he was out of reach. She called Barbie but her phone is just ringing. She also dialed the number of Carl, Dianne and Erold but all of them are cannot be reached.

She started to feel nervous. It's as if time has frozen. She can feel how cold her hands are. Then the television in her room was opened in its own. A black and white footage is currently playing. At first, she thought that it is just an illusion, but when she saw her friends in the tv, she started to feel trembled. You can see in her eyes how frightened she is. She don't want to look at it anymore, but she can't turn his head nor close her eyes. Her friends are being massacred in the hotel by horrifying individuals. Their eyes are red and they are holding chainsaws. She saw how brutal they are. Their blood scattered everywhere. Her friends are slowly dying. She can't stop herself from screaming, but no sound was coming out to her mouth. After that, she lose her conciousness.

The next morning, a news on tv was flashed. The headline was "5 people were found dead on the road of Barnabas." Fatima can't believe what happened. She started crying and then she heard a defeaning grin. The voice was horrifying. It's only her who can hear the sound. She is using her hands to cover her ears, but it seems that the grin becomes louder and louder. Her ear drums started to break and she can feel nothing but pain. Her parents notice it and they bring her in the nearest hospital. The doctor finds out that she is experiencing a mental disorder. Her parents decided to bring her in asylum. Then she grinned like a monster. Until now, she is still there. Still facing a great nightmare she never wanted to experience.

Word prompts used: Dream, Twisted, Silent, Terrify, Cold.

I was inspired to make this content because of @Jdine it is also my second entry in her giveaway and writing contest. To know about this thing read this post. To read more like this, just join this community - Thriller/Horror Stories(dc61)

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The story itself is frightening. Good job👏

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