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4 years ago
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My life is full of gamble,

Along the journey I stumbled.

Reaching the name of the game,

Kaleidoscope of either fame or shame.

Zero to ten, I'll count again.

One more try,

Two more while i cry.

Two more until I fly.

Zero to ten, I'll count again

Seven fails, I'll stand up eight

Walk towards the place where the trophy awaits.

As requested by @Mark012207. I hope you like it😳 I'll accept constructive criticism🤗

I made a little experiment of using your user name as a guide😁

Thank you for reading!

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Here I am. I was about to ask regarding your relationship with Mark before I read the last part. I haven't been writing this kind of poem for a very long time. I think I wrote one for my daughter but forgotten where I put it.

I think whoever who have fallen and stumble but manage to get up over and over again will directly understand the message inside this poem.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

I don't have specific relationship with him/her, he commented in one of my poems and asked if i could write a poem about failure, so did I. Receiving a request is quite an achievement for me so as a little token i used his username as a guide and dedicated it to him since he requested it.

Indeed, and i guess almost all people experienced failure and this is a reminder that they have to stand up even how many time they stumbled.

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

I am glad to be tag under your article. I enjoy reading your poem.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Oh thank you it means a lot to me🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

I understand that feeling.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Wow. I like it. You create a poem using my name. That's amazing. You came up with such a quick poem. Perfect 💞💞! Thank you very much, dear 💞💞 !

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User's avatar Mark012207
4 years ago

I'm glad you like it❤ thank you🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Always challenge yourself because you have a future💞💞

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User's avatar Mark012207
4 years ago

Awesome 👍😊. Iike wow 😍

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User's avatar salma24
4 years ago

Thank you I appreciate your comment❤

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

You have the talent

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User's avatar Wawa
4 years ago

Oh thank you for recognizing my work❤

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

You are a talented girl. I like your poem very much...I think if you practice more you can write more quality poem. Best wishes for you

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User's avatar Meher89
4 years ago

Thank you, i will do my best to grow more in writing🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Wow it's nice!! The theme is beautiful. In the way towards success failure may come but we can not stop there we have to try again and again untill success comes

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User's avatar Ohi
4 years ago

Thanks🤗 never stop trying until we reach our goals

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Nice poem😇

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User's avatar Yahoo
4 years ago

Keep sharing

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User's avatar Mansoor
4 years ago

Your skill is a promise. Great work!

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User's avatar ladyhanabi
4 years ago

Thank you🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Hahaha, love the creativity. I thought it was MARKZOTTZS for a sec.

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User's avatar marcmire
4 years ago

Hahaha it's weird to add as in numbers so i used words, thanks btw🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

You have a amazing talent in constructing poem. I hope their is a kaleidoscope that will reflect the fame and shame as one in a infinite views. 😆

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User's avatar MisterWrite
4 years ago

Thank you😊 We'll make one haha

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Nice poem

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User's avatar Mayor
4 years ago

Thanks🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Such a wonderful poem indeed. Thank you so much for sharing it. ❤

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User's avatar EYERISH687
4 years ago

Thank you for recognizing it😁

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

🥰🥰🥰🥰

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User's avatar EYERISH687
4 years ago

I think @heartbeat1515 might like this one. So far I believe you are the first who used this type of poetry. Well done a big 👍 for you.

P.s. I wonder why you added the block with sponsors twice. It is very dominant and takes all the attention away from what is written.

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

Thank you for the compliment🤗

I tried using the $ sign that's why it happened to be like that, but I'll remove it thank you for saying something about it🤗

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago
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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago
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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

And oh i actually don't know how to remove it hahaha

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago
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