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Sunset
***Y***our day seems too gloomy, you got tired and weary, many times you falter yet manage to stand after. ***A***t times you stumble, your world seems to crumble, your strength and spirit is all you got to beat it. ***Y***ou watch the sun sets your day and your bets would surely set down with it and yourself you can't beat. ***J***ust as dawn is a ray of hope, sunset at twilight is dope to rest and revitalise for tomorrow to neutralise. #Sad_Vibes
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18 comments
Beautiful poem... Keep it up
That was beautiful. And the type that gives off a clear image in my head. Though i have a question, what did it mean by neutralize at the end. What did you mean by that line
am open and welcome questions,and/corrections😁 I used Neutralise/neuTralize to rhyme with revitalize,I mean something like to correct or compensate or make up todays misfortune 😊
Ohh i see. So that's what you meant by that
yep it talks about misfortunes,disappointments and ones unfailing will to pursue whatever was not achieved today. it may be sad to know that the day would soon end but a sunset should not be seen as an end
I like this thought pattern of yours. I can see why most of your poems are really emotionally vivid
Beautiful poem.
wow...realistic poetry.... especially when i was going through the first para it gave me real feel.....
geeez.. thanks for reading and I more grateful that you understand it
Nice poem. 😊👍
The photo cought my attention. Your poem poem is pretty good 🌄
ow am grateful for that
Yie! No doubt you won in the poem writing contest. Keep writing poems. The emotion can be always found.
salamat sa mga taong nkakaintindi sa mga sinusulat nting tula. boring ksi xa sa iba
It's amazing.keep writing poems.i liked it
Nice rhymes👍
You have expressed the feeling wonderfully. Sunsets are meaningful the other way around as others may think its the end rather its the sign of tomorrows new beginning. 😊 Keep up again!
😇a time to rest for strength to fight another day by the morrow