The treasure was found!

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He was so affectionate and hardworking, they would always throw him some of what they ate in secret from the cooks, since this kitten was not supposed to eat leftover food, but rather succulent dishes at his mealtime.

Pelusín would go out to the yard to watch the gardeners work and that is how he made friends with them, everyone loved him and even more when they saw that he went after the horrible mice that in the past used to kill the vegetables they planted.

He won the love of everyone, except for Mimosín. He hated him more and more. He never played with him, he always treated him as a snuggler in that house where he would reign forever, make no mistake about it, that little furry one, but he would never let him near him, he came to occupy a place in the house that he shouldn't have.

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Mimosín was not worried that he would meet with those gentlemen in the kitchen and garden, the only thing he did not want was for him to get close to him.

This is how Pelusín grew up with the affection of everyone in the mansion, for being so cooperative and mischievous.

One day Pelusín was looking down the path that led to the road when he saw someone he knew, so he ran and approached the furry cat that was so familiar to him. What a thrill! It was his mother who on the other hand recognized him immediately, licking him as much as she could. She recognized her little lost son, lost right in the same place where she was now.

Some years ago she was walking with her babies and teaching them the ways of life, but separated from them as she hunted for something for everyone. When she approached to pick up her little ones one was missing, it was Pelusin. She hugged him as much as she could and Pelusin cried with excitement to see his mother and his siblings appeared.

He recognized them, and they all left together… but the mother watched the road from afar and looked as if searching for something else.

It so happens that many years ago she had also lost another of her sons, such is life for street cats, she never missed an opportunity to pass by and see if she could find him, but she never saw him again but at least life gave her back the youngest one.

Meanwhile, from the window of the mansion, Mimosín at first managed to see Pelusín as he was leaving the house, without knowing why he felt so elated. At last! He thought, That miserable occupant was leaving.

But when he saw how he was hugging a beautiful furry cat, his eyes lit up, he thought to discover in her an old memory, until she approached looking straight towards the mansion and he could recognize his mother.

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He had never forgotten her, it was her, his sweet mother who was now looking with those beautiful blue eyes along the road as if searching for him and the one who had been hugging the little intruder cat, Pelusin. Now he understood, it was his little brother, the one he had been mistreating for so long.

He ran out to meet his mother, to explain his life to her, to apologize to his little brother. He ran, tripping over everything he could on the way, he was so fat. The way he took his brother's food and his sedentary lifestyle made him so fat that he couldn't run fast enough.

By the time he reached the garden and tried to get to the end of the path it was too long. No one was there anymore, his mother was gone and with her also his little brother.

He cried, there he cried a lot, but his meows were not heard by anyone. Already, his mother was running far away through the undergrowth together with her little lost son to bring him back home.

Now he understood, he had asked for so long for a companion to pass the days and when he arrived he treated him so badly. Just as they had sent him company they had given him his younger brother, who never gave him a chance to introduce himself and get to know him, it was a chance to see his mother again and he had lost her, perhaps forever.

I hope you liked the story, draw your own conclusions dear readers, sometimes we dare to judge people without giving them a chance to show us what they have inside. Let us not discriminate anyone under any aspect, we don’t know the great treasure they may have in their hearts.

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Wow, what an unexpected ending, but you're right, many people discriminate without thinking that this world goes around a lot.

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2 years ago

We do not know of the mysterious ways God uses to bless us and we despise Him simply out of stubbornness.

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2 years ago

It's a small world and the Life's very fickle ma'am. What we sow, we'd definitely reap in one form or the other. When I was much more younger, sometimes I'd avoid some people because of some unpleasant stuff I have heard about them even without getting to check wether the info given to me was right or not. At the end of the day, I'd become restless and uncomfortable whenever I needed a little help for them.. so, I have learnt how to accept every one just the way they are so long as they don't deliberately put me in harm's way.

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2 years ago

It's a good attitude you take. You always have to know both sides of a problem with people.

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2 years ago

Exactly ma'am

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2 years ago

How sad it has ended, I felt a little bad, I understand that Mimosín was bad, but now it makes me a little sad that he was left alone and couldn't greet his mother....

Today I saw a video on facebook that reminded me of the first part of your story, but I really lost the link.

There are two cats, one big and one small. The big cat had already been in the house for a while and the little cat had just been adopted, so they filmed the first week. On day 1 and 2 the cats didn't get along, on day 3 and 4 the little cat tried to get close but the big cat growled at him, and the last 3 days of that week they started to play and sleep together as if they had always loved each other.

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2 years ago

Yes, sometimes it happens.I left you my number in response to a comment you made to me earlier.

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2 years ago

Well! That’s our big mistake that we don’t give chance to others or feel that they will not do anything. Btw, how can we judge that, if we give a chance to them, they will not again betray us?

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2 years ago

When you are going to forgive you must do it from your heart. You give another person the opportunity to not feel resentment for him but without forgetting that you must act in a cautious way because the way of being of that other person only depends on him and not on you.

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2 years ago

Right 💯.

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2 years ago

What a beautiful story that leaves me with a great lesson. Sometimes it is difficult for me to look beyond, thank you.

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2 years ago

Ok. You're welcome.

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2 years ago

This made me so emotional. Huhu. That is an unexpected twist. Now he's left all alone. He missed the opportunity to be with them - his family.

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2 years ago

You found one of the treasures and that's how you say it.

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2 years ago

good advice for many people, when a person performs an action and then we see it in a view that may differ from the purpose of the action he is doing it may make us feel that it is a dishonorable act, but after the action it gives meaning and purpose positive then we will realize that the person is good. Don't always judge people by the first action they take because the end goal may be kindness.

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2 years ago

It's like a game of tongue twister but I get your point. One of the hidden treasures is to try to understand, not to judge and frame people different from ourselves.

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2 years ago

I smiled reading it, I realize now that you are a smart person and can translate and analyze something telling. accuracy in assessing and analyzing the purpose of a topic is my way of providing useful replies.

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2 years ago

as always nice story! most of the time people come into our life for a purpose but because there are times that we are being judgmental that we don't see why they came in our life.. only to find out when the person is long gone already

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2 years ago

Sometimes we have to lose to win.

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2 years ago

Two thumbs up for this story. I thought the first part was left hanging... hahaha. Sometimes, even when we feel strongly against someone, we should still give them a chance to prove they are better than what we think.

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2 years ago

We all deserve opportunities to interact without being discriminated against.

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2 years ago

Same as the people with tattoos, they are called as criminals or trash individuals when in fact they are doing good in life. Judge at first sight.

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2 years ago

We love that, being judges, but when it's our turn to be judged, that's when life gets dramatic.

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2 years ago

I accept constructive criticism but judgment where someone puts you in embarrassment, then I don't think it's okay.

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2 years ago

Your story made me think that offentimes we took advantange some people in our life. Only realized their worth when they are gone. Missing chances.

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2 years ago

That's right, you're right.

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2 years ago

This is a great story story sis. Reading it, i have learn many lessons

  • Once we let jealousy and hatred control our self, we will never know how to appreciate the people or things around

  • We will only know the value of a person or thing once we lost it already

  • Never judge a person or thing on the first sight, open our hearts and discover why God had put them in our life. As what they say, every person that comes in our life has a purpose and lesson to tell.

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2 years ago

I love all the hidden treasures in this story and you found several of them. thank you.

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2 years ago

Thanks for this story of yours sis. This is a great reminder to me as well to learn to appreciate all the things that I have at the moment

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2 years ago

Give thanks to God for all that we have.

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2 years ago

You are right friend all kindness is open to the eyes of our Lord for him to accept

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2 years ago

Thank you for reading.

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2 years ago

such is life, he never knew that he was maltreating his younger brother.

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2 years ago

It's true.

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2 years ago

Wow, such a beautiful turn in the story. It's true that we shouldn't just judge people carelessly especially if we never knew what they've gone through. How sad Mimosín is now. If only he had treated Pelusín right.

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2 years ago

These are the gifts that God sends to his children, but our selfishness does not allow us to see them.

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2 years ago

Very true my friend. May God open our eyes to see and appreciate these gifts.

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2 years ago

That's the kind of life the street life offers and it's very harsh to humans let alone animals as well and I can't disbelief that she keeps losing her sons in the street

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2 years ago

Too many children and too much work can happen to anyone. I've seen it happen to people.

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