The farewell.

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They reached the counter and were served by the apothecary. Jim left the bags in the right place and went to look for the shelf he had left outside. Meanwhile the girl was talking to the apothecary about the purchases she had made.

When Jim came back in with the shelf he placed it where the apothecary asked for it and thanked him for the good service.

Just as he finished handing over his shelf and was about to leave, Carol was also leaving so he asked her if he could escort her to her destination, to which she nodded.

And so they chatted animatedly along the way. Jim invited her to an ice cream, she accepted, they were talking and walking little by little so that they would not run out of steps.

They arrived at the front of the grocery store and Carol said goodbye, but not before showing him the best of her smiles, Jim shook her hand and took the opportunity to ask....

"Can I see you again tomorrow?"

To which the young woman replied... "I can’t tomorrow… I have other things to do that I had planned before but we can meet in two days right here and we'll go for another walk and ice cream."

Jim smiled and said...

"That's fine with me, in two days I'll be here at 2pm" and started to leave, he ran to get his wagon to head home.

His heart was galloping like a wild horse in the mountains. He ran in the wagon as if he was trying to get off the ground, his joy was such that he did not measure the consequences, his cart dislodged a wheel and went tumbling dizzily to the ground. His body bounced off the ground and hit his head on a tree… He lost consciousness.

At home at dinner time they were already worried because he was missing. Then someone arrived and told them that they found the wagon lying on the road and the young man was unconscious, it was then that they took him to the nearest hospital and as they identified him, they went to notify his family.

The father and mother rushed out to see their son, they took what they needed for their son and in case they needed to stay at the hospital with him for a while. In the meantime, John was to stay at home and take care of everything, and so it was.

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John was to go into town to pick up some orders to work on the farm. He passed by several places and suddenly stopped at the grocery store to see the girl who had captivated him, he entered silently, searching with his eyes until his eyes caught sight of her.

There she was, with those wide black eyes and giving instructions about something, he approached her and now he knew what he would have to say.

He said to her "Hi! Do you remember me?" She looked at him and with those cheerful eyes replied. "Of course I do, you're the honey boy! With or without honey, what did you decide in the end?"

"It's not me, it's my mother who gives me the directions, and she decided I could take the one you have, and I'm coming for it."

She handed him his order and as she was giving it to him, he asked her...

"Are you new in town? I've always been around the place and never saw you here before.”

She replied that she was spending time with her aunts, uncles and cousins and she was taking the opportunity to put everything in order.

John brings her a flower he had tucked away in his shirt and offers it to her.

"This is not something meaningful in the face of your kindness but it goes as an offering to offer you my friendship and I hope you will accept it."

She took the flower and smelled it, at the same time thanking him for the detail. She told him he had about 15 minutes of time before she got busy again and if he wished they could go for ice cream, to which John gladly offered to accompany her.

Thus began a series of questions and answers from both sides and at the end of their time, they were to meet again, they would meet the next day at 2pm, right there in front of her uncle's store.

And so time went by and in a week they had already had several dates and the relationship was getting serious for both of them.

John told her about his family, he also told her that he has a younger brother. That he was in an accident and sustained a blow to the head that keeps him unconscious but with positive responses, the doctors tell his parents that soon the swelling in his brain will go down and he will wake up.

After 15 days, Jim awakens from his sleep. He opens his eyes and looks at his parents and looks at himself.

He asks the only question in his mind. "What happened? What am I doing here?"

His parents look at him and hug him in tears and tell him everything that happened. He can't believe it, how has it been 15 days, he had just left town to go to their farm...? This can't happen!

And his family encourages him to calm down and keep giving him details of his accident and hospital stay.

Jim only remembers the girl he just met who has his heart racing, he has to get out of there quickly and go to the appointment.

But it dawns on him that he has already been in the hospital for 20 days, thanks to the doctors checking him to make sure nothing was wrong, and now he has to start over with the girl, he’s discharged and goes home.

 John is waiting for him. They both embrace, crying with emotion and Jim then tells everyone that he came running in the wagon to tell them that he had met the most beautiful girl his eyes had ever seen and he had agreed to meet her in two days but fate had it that the accident happened and now he had to go to town to make things right.

John tells him the same thing, “I was looking forward to you coming home that afternoon because I had met the perfect girl! In fact, we are dating and tomorrow I’ll bring her home for you all to meet.”

But it’s then that Jim tells him that his girl is the most beautiful he had ever seen, with pink lips and a perfect smile, her name is Carol.

Then, John felt like a slap in the face and his countenance suddenly changed. He said...

“What's the name of the girl? Carol, you say? That's the name of my girl in town.”

She's the grocer's niece.

“No way” says Jim. “It can't be, we fell in love with the same girl… But she accepted you? Are you two sweethearts? No way! What's going on?”

Jim was disturbed but so was John. How do we get out of this situation? John wonders, he love her, they both love each other… But he also loves his brother and just can’t bring himself to break his heart.

Jim is heartbroken. The accident happened just to come with all the excitement of a runaway horse to tell of his love affair and then fate played this practical joke on him.

"Tomorrow we'll go into town. We'll see the same girl and make up with her about the situation." John says to his brother, to which Jim agrees.

John doesn't want his brother to be filled with false hope, the girl has told him she accepts him as a boyfriend, so how devastated is Jim going to be?

“But I've been with her for 20 days, dating and I love her and... I think she loves me too…” He says to himself.

The boys couldn't sleep that night, they both had anguish in their hearts. The morning came after an eternity and later on so did the time for the scheduled appointment with the girl.

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In the morning they both went about their business and then John took Jim in the wagon and both they went over to the grocery store together.

They saw the store owner and greeted each other, with John then asking for Carol.

“Carol? She left on the morning train, she came to stay here with me for a month to help me with some things… oh and she also tried to to pick up some things she needed for her marriage.”

"What?" says John. “Carol is getting married in the city? But how, when?"

“She just told me to tell you that it was nice to meet you but she had to leave now because her time here was over.”

John and Jim looked at each other's faces and left the premises.

Both had fallen in love with the same girl and both had been equally disappointed.

On the way back they walked in silence, with their thoughts, and with the feeling of having gone to a funeral. To the funeral of the love of their lives. They both understood and respected his pain.

The unfortunate matter was never spoken of again and their lives continued with the same brotherly love they had for each other.

Thank you for reading, I know for some this is not the ending they were hoping for but this is as far as my imagination took me.

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I mean what the fudge, why Carol give them a false hope and what she's already getting married. Why Carol is a piece of **** 🥺🤧🤧.

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2 years ago

Hahaha hahaha that's what I could imagine. Don't tell me that swear word, it's all imagination. Hahaha hahaha hahaha.

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2 years ago

It's like a beginning of a series. Some things are not meant to be.
I'd say somewhere in time, their paths will cross again. She may fall in love with one and then the other but all things will end well still to whoever wins her heart the most :D

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2 years ago

That's the wonderful thing about being a dreamer's mind. We can imagine any number of things we can think of and find a happy ending.

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2 years ago

I really liked the ending, maybe the best thing that could have happened.

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2 years ago

My mind was not in disarray to post scenes of blood. I went the other way and resolved in peace.

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2 years ago

I got carried away with your post. What happens between Jim and John can break the bond between family members but thanks for the brotherly love they shared with one another

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2 years ago

All ended well for their sibling love.

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2 years ago

Nice story maam but Carol is bit naughty also. Why she need to be hook to others if soon she will be married. Well its better she leave the brothers or else it can create a big problem.

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2 years ago

Yesh, she is a Evil girl. Jejeje.

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2 years ago

woooww so sad continuation of this story from the last post .. also sorry for jhon and jim. unrequited love. but I have experienced this story but the chronology is different. indeed the pain persists. maybe the message of this story. Don't expect too much from someone because you don't know that he is your soul mate.

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2 years ago

Or the message could be... don't exchange the sincere love for the fleeting love of another person.

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2 years ago

The story gave a lesson. It's too bad they both met the girl undeserving for their love. I just felt sad for Jim when he met an accident just because of her over emotion yet the hapinness he felt isn't worth it.

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2 years ago

That fleeting love only strengthened their brotherhood.

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2 years ago

That is the best part of it and I love though.

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2 years ago

I love the ending of the story, ma'am why? It's because John and Jim are brothers and they love the same girl that even Jim accepted that carol and his brother love it's other but we can't deny the fact that it is awkward because john still loves carol, so good thing happened that no one of them involved with that girl so that their relationship as siblings are unchanged.

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2 years ago

Yes. It was better for the girl to destroy their hearts than for them to destroy each other.

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2 years ago

Yes! That is good as I had initially though she would case a whole lot of problems between the two brothers but it really ended just the same way I had taught of it.

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2 years ago

She wasn't very honest with the kids.

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2 years ago

So Carol knew what she was doing! My greatest lesson was the understanding between the two brothers.. thanks for this @gertu13

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2 years ago

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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2 years ago

Yes no cheating leaving the both of them is really good 👍. I am just thinking of the wonderful love the two brothers share together ❤️💗

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2 years ago

It was the best thing for them. She herself decided to leave.

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2 years ago

If she had chosen one of the two brothers, things will never go well between the two brothers again. Leaving the both of them is the best. They will go over it sooner

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2 years ago

For both their sakes it was better for her to leave.

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2 years ago

What a story with a grand finale hahahaha. Very sad and well turned around in such a way that at least the girl left them at the end even after trying to put a big vacuum between the two brothers with so much love for each other. Hmmn! Good one

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2 years ago

It occurred to me that it was the best thing for them. She should have another destiny.

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2 years ago

Well done ma'am . I am happy the story ended the way it did. Its quite unpleasant you see a woman putting a wedge between two brothers

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2 years ago

Thank You for your commemt.

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2 years ago

I like the twist in the story at the end and the girl leaving both of them. No happy ending but this way the girl didn't choose either of them.

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2 years ago

Then they would recover from their pain but not end their brotherly love.

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2 years ago

Really sad ending

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2 years ago

Thank You.

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