@Winona
Aloof Hearts Are Left Unscathed
Our ribs are cages To keep our hearts in prison At what cost it rest for ages? To guard itself from treason Bitter truths came haunting us To devour the hope that love will last For the doubts set afire, we can't surpass Stained our faith and burned our trust We are vagabonds who lost their trail To find the love that was set to fail Had to numb the heart- it is the bail, Blazed bouquet, latter the veil Entangled souls I watched afar "Not again", it left a scar. Our ribs are cages To keep our hearts protected Loving too deep is to be prevented I've learned from the ache when it all ended Let me be a distant fool That knows no love but the heart is pure Unapologetic but for now I had to rule Tell me you love me when you know you're sure.
26 comments
Wow! Nice piece 💛 Deep.
Thank you:)
Always welcome
Wow. I dont know what happened but your emotions in this piece are overflowing. So pretty and deep
Thank you:)
I hope I am as good as you 😁 Keep writing! ❤️
Write poems, give it a try. You dont have to be very good at it in order to start, but you need to start writing and practicing in order to be good at it. I'm not that good at it either😅 but knowing that some people give time to read my poem makes me happy. Thank you
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The last line tho. Nice poem. I hope to read more poems like this. Did you wrote this poem for someone?
I guess we all want what the last line says haha. I did not wrote it for someone, I wrote it for everyone who suffered from a broken heart from a one sided love, that then chose not to love again for a while. Do you know someone?
I didn't know who's that someone. Hahaha. How thoughtful you are writing these poem to everyone. I hope everyone will read this.
Yeah, I hope so too haha
The last line sums it all up really. Great poem
Thanks. Been practicing the rhyming lately .
Good for you.
This piece is deep, and nice rhyming.. Good job!
That last line though, very remarkable😊
I agree with the other commenter, that last line is lit.
The poems you wrote are really good! Keep it up
This one hits too close to home. Even though I've never been in a relationship before, it still hurts.
If I tell you that I Love You, Should we be together until we grow old, even not till death do us part
It's now easy for most of the people to say "I Love you". But knowing that these 3 words can absolutely change a person, it became suicidal.
Oh that's very tragic if someone gets to be suicidal because of that.
I've read several articles about this topic. That's why sometimes, I'm afraid to love.
You'll never know if it's true if you're not going to take the risk. Some hearts tho becomes numb for a while to heal from the ache and chooses not to love for a while and give themselves some time to breath and wait for something that is real.
Indeed. That's why, I still choose to love. We will never find the right one of we're mot going to take the risk.