Off to University for Archie and Moira, will it be bitin! 8th September 2021 2323 Hello all you awesome readers. Well, they are back, it has been too long .... **I hope it is still bitin ;)** This is the next chapter in the book ****Ben MacDuff - Homecoming**** https://read.cash/@TengoLoTodo/ben-macduff-homecoming-f60cd139 **Chapter 7** Paris and the summer over, Archie and Moira both went back to complete their final year of school, still madly in love with each other. Archie aced his A levels and had the pick of Universities; Moira did her Scottish Higher exams and did good enough to get accepted to a few Universities and choose to go to Glasgow University to read History of Arts. Archie was a bit baffled, both by the choice of University and the choice of subject, however, he never breathed a word of his doubt to Moira. And so it was that Moira gave Archie the Delia Smith Cookery book the day he left for Uni. Moira left the next day by train for Glasgow. The first two terms at University went smoothly and they managed to see each other every other weekend, either Archie driving through to Glasgow, or Maria jumping on the train and coming through to Edinburgh. Occasionally Archie would surprise her during the week and drive through to Glasgow. He stopped doing that in the third term though, as on two occasions he could not reach her on her mobile phone and she was not in her flat, so after even going to the Students Union and not finding her he drove back along the M8 motorway to Edinburgh. She had fobbed him off with an “oh I was on a ‘girls night out’ “ line once too many times. They both spent the summer working abroad, Archie in Madrid whilst Moira went to work in Venice, but they both managed to visit each other once. They started their second year at University and it seemed to be back to normal, but things gradually cooled off and the visits became less frequent. Somedays she would call / text and email 24/7 and other days nothing, no nothing, no emails no texts no replies, no acknowledgement of his existence! Then a day later back to the over gushing Moira, as if nothing had ever happened, he just couldn’t work her out anymore. He blamed it totally on Jeanette her Filipina grandmother who blew hot and cold *mainit at malamig* on a daily basis, and now Moira had seemingly copied her behaviour, whether it was intended behaviour or not Archie didn’t know. When he came back from Madrid, Archie tried unsuccessfully to get in touch with Maria.
On his twentieth birthday he was having a quiet lunch with his parents, Nanay Ate and Uncle Po, when the front door bell rang. Uncle Po went to answer the door, and murmured voices could be heard, then Uncle Po appeared in the doorway followed by Moira and a strange looking older redheaded guy with a beard. “Hi Archie, ehm Happy Birthday, can we have a word” directed Moira towards Archie. “Thanks and of course, great to see you Moira, let’s go through to the drawing room shall we?” Archie replied and led them into the left drawing room. “Please sit down and I am Archie” he said and went to shake the man’s hand. “The names McGrain and I know who you are, we won’t keep you long” said the ginger man ignoring Archie’s outstretched hand, in a decidedly peasanty East Glaswegian accent, a Celtic fan if I ever heard or seen one mused Archie. “Oh Archie, Fergus has said we have to stop communicating, and you must **NEVER EVER** get in touch with me, coz me and Fergus are getting married and I am having his baby” she rubbed her stomach. Somewhat taken aback he said “**coz Moira, COZ** since f***** when did you say coz, now you, you ginger haired f***** Celtic supporting unwashed scum, get the f*** out of my house, and you too Moira, god you have fallen girl, the Queen really has fallen! Now piss off the pair off you, before I kick yer arse oot the door”. With that Archie stormed out of the drawing room, went to the smaller dining room, picked up his jacket, kissed his mother, rubbed his father’s hair, kissed Nanay Ate and high fived Uncle Po. “Well, what a f***** surprise, Moira and I are finished, that scum you saw got her pregnant. I need some fresh air and I love you all” and with that he turned and walked out of the dining room, slamming the front door as he left the house. He got in his Jag and drove and drove and drove, before he knew it he was crossing the Forth Road Bridge and he was back at his flat in Edinburgh. Moira had just made him her goto he realized in hindsight. Her goto dish of spaghetti carbonara being an example, and she used to call him her goto guy, as Archie was able to listen and vanquish her worries and fears with a whoosh of his magic wand. Well that was all bollocks, thought Archie, I was her ‘Last Resort’ guy. Only to be contacted when there was absolutely no one left to talk to and magical Moira was bored. Her rock, she would describe Archie, well now he knew what a rock was, something to be talked to, ignored and then picked and discarded. She might not be on drugs now, but she was still a user. Well fuck that, Archie vowed never to return to Easter Bonit or contact Moira again. For over twenty years he had kept this vow, but now he had to come back one more time, and that time was now. TO BE CONTINUED **Thank you for reading you awesome beautiful people.** **Please do leave any feedback whether it be good or not so good.** **Copyright** ****@TengoLoTodo**** **2021 and yes All Rights Reserved. All images and words are from the author unless source mentioned.** https://read.cash/@TengoLoTodo **Haste ye back.**
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What the heck, Archie deserve someone and better than Moira tho. I just laughed with his reaction when Moira said "coz" lol 🤣 and wait, was that building the Royal Scottish Academy? I've seen that before haha
I think that was it. It says so in one of the posters hanging outside RSA Open. I'm pretty sure that was it :D :D
hehe clever kuya, oo it is the RSA Royal Scottish Academy, a place I have to many times, they have awesome collections there.
hehe Archie has the last laugh :) Yes it was the correct building :) Thank you for reading the caption!
Aw i feel sorry for Archie. Why Moira suddenly change, I thought he really loves Archie but maybe because of the distance of their place. I don't know the name of the building po hehez. I want how Archie told them to get out or else he might kick their arses haha.
well Moira is not the good girl we thought I think! hehe I thought you might like the kick their arses wee one haha
HaysI thought moira is the right girl for archie. Anyway it's still bitin po.
Hehe don't worry Archie does better than Moira 😁
Ouccchhh! What the hell Moira!😂 it's sooo bitin but oh well, we can wait :D
ah Moira seems like an evil witch!
The fudge Moira! I can see Archie's angry face on my cell phone screen right now hahaha. He deserves someone loyal like me, charrottt.
Hahaha! That made me laugh :D
Hahaha, annyeonggg Kuya Lee. Diba tama po ako? Haha
Haha! Di ko lam. Need ko proof na loyal ka nga lol! San na si MissJo magpapatunay? :D :D
Hahaha loyal ako kuya. Trust me haha.
Hehe I trust you my wee BC
haha and me too !
haha the fudge Moira, haha you are loyal my wee BC, his angry face on your cellphone, now that really made me laugh 🤣🤣🤣 No charrottt he does
Yes, I'm proud and loud that I am a loyal one, he deserves someone like me haha. Right master?
It is bitin sir. I feel sorry for archie his love is betrayed by moira. I see that building and i think it is the royal scottish academy. So when will be the next episode be published😊
salamat but don't worry, Archie has a better life than Moira! Yes well done it is the Royal Scottish Academy, a building I have been to many many times. The next episode will be published within an hour!
So Archie was hurt by the girl, and he went to travel the world, um. I wonder if he will see her again on his return home. And what he will feel. Because apparently, he hasn't been able to completely get her out of his mind from what the first chapters tell. And now my curious self wonders how much of this is fiction. ;) The building has already been answered, but it is the Royal Scottish Academy.
haha your curious self 🤣🤣🤣 How many of your nine lives have you used! Yes that is the building. Well the facts and function collide, I call it faction, what is real you have to guess....
Faction, ah? Very clever of you to evade an answer. So I have to guess. Let's see how the story progresses, haha. And how much I guess;) You know I'm curious, so I'll try to find out, LOL.
Yes faction I Ike that word haha, yes see how it goes , and I know you try to find the facts 😉
I wonder what do you like that word so much! ;)
Haha my lips are sealed 🤣😂😂
Haha, I won't insist ;)
you have me laughing !
I don't know whether to read the next chapter today or tomorrow. So as not to try to keep guessing.😂😂
haha whenever you read , you will be guessing, definitely facts in the next one haha oh boy I am laughing again
Definitely facts, um. That sounds tempting. I think I won't hold out until tomorrow. LOL
oh poor archie!!!! you bad moira!
oh trust me Archie has the last laugh Mrs P:)
She isn't just the right girl for Archie. Obviously she just used her. Well Archie will bounce back. Maybe he came back to get a closure with Moira. The building was the Royal Scottish Academy.
No she isn't at all the right girl for Archie. Yes I Wonder what closure will bring ... OO the building is indeed the Royal Scottish Academy and one of my favourite buildings, I used to pass twice a day going to school , and used to run in there to escape the rain hehe
Yay did the feeling of Moira changed? Well feelings do change everyday. Archie should make a move about it.
Moira changed big time, we don't know why yet ;) Archie moved on and had a fun life you will find out ...
HUWHAAAT 😳😱, she got pregnant! what a heartbreaking moment for Archie, tssk she stopped communicating him because she was cheating on him pala. This is literally getting into my nerves😑
hehe Moira was not a good girl or woman, haha Archie has fun soon don't worry hehe
Omgggg. The Moira I know is a conservative and 'no boyfriend since birth'. Thr name doesn't suits her. And yes, I like how Archie pay respect to his family even angry before storming out of the house. Imagine the different tricks he would have to do to each family member.
hehe Moira is a common Scottish name for girls. Hehe Archie does have good manners so yes said good bye
Pregnant???? Yeeeeeh. So Archie hasn't found the right girl yet. So now that he stormed out of the house how he survive, so he really avoided her for 20 good years. Wow!!! Next please.
hehe yes he avoided her on purpose, let's see what happens when they meet again...
Why so bitin naman tuuuuuu.
hehe I hope it stays bitin
Moira you dumped a diamond! Archie, move on bro!
hehe Archie moved on don't worry , he has all the fun
Omg this is so heartbreaking for Archie. Please say it's just a nightmare and he wakes up from slumber. 😨
hehe this is Archie, he is a superstar, don't worry about him :)
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