Can we kiss forever?

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Shortest Song I've known 😂😅 hope you like it...

I tried to reach you, I can't hide

How strong's the feeling when we dive

I crossed the ocean of my mind

My wounds are healing with the salt

All my senses intensified

Whenever you and I, we dive

I crossed the ocean of my mind

But in the end I drown

You push me down, down

All the shame

When you called my name

I felt pain

When you came.

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kissing someone makes us feel oblivion , nice article post some more

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User's avatar aries25
3 years ago

Thankyou i will your work too😘😘

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

sure hope you could critic my articles also if you have time hehehe

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User's avatar aries25
3 years ago

Yeaah sure☺

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

I crossed the ocean of my mind.But in the end I drown.You push me down, down

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User's avatar alifa0987
3 years ago

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User's avatar Badhon88
3 years ago

beautiful articles.

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User's avatar Foysolraj
3 years ago

This is so romantic

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User's avatar Commycool
3 years ago

I have subscribed you Now plz subscribe me

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User's avatar Rikta
3 years ago

great love it .

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User's avatar Ishwor
3 years ago

Thanks again

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User's avatar ChrisJohnson
3 years ago

So deep. I like it dear. Show us more

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User's avatar FelmarAlmighty
3 years ago

Sure i will make more.. Right now im busy doing that😍

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

Yey good to know. Take your time then

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User's avatar FelmarAlmighty
3 years ago

Wow, this is greatly written like the rhymes of this is great.

S.u.b.s.c.r.i.b.e back and visit me.

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User's avatar Alison50
3 years ago

Thankyou dear

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

You're welcome as usual

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User's avatar Alison50
3 years ago

oo pde mo sya ikiss forever,gang sa magsawa ka.pakasal na kayu agad.Magdate kau palagi kung san nyo gusto.sabay na rin kau maligo kung gusto mu.HAHAHA😛✌️✌️

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User's avatar ECHO22
3 years ago

Hahaha please speak in english i dont understand😂😂😂😂

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

Great article . Keep it

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User's avatar Rokey
3 years ago

Your title was catch my attention. I want it.. hehehe good composition by the way. 😊

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User's avatar Jthan
3 years ago

Just like "clickbait". 😂😂 . i am thinkin about song lyrics

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

oh.. hahaha nice try.

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User's avatar Jthan
3 years ago

nice article dear s,,,plz subscribe me then i feel proud

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User's avatar mr.mondal
3 years ago

Am kind of imagine the sounds.

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User's avatar Jadeliyi
3 years ago

Am imagine literally the sound nice one dear.

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User's avatar Jadeliyi
3 years ago

if you want then we kiss forever. jist joking😁

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User's avatar RI-Robin
3 years ago

Hahahaha. I in reality i dont want kiss😂😂

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

why you don’t want kiss in reality

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User's avatar RI-Robin
3 years ago

This is extremely great, the rhymes and iambic meters in this poem, the flow are all perfect

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User's avatar Jossy40
3 years ago

I love it. Nice one

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User's avatar Daniboy
3 years ago

Love it, great🥦🧅🧅🙃

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User's avatar rasedul1234
3 years ago

Beautiful poem and message, longer relationship can be treasured

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User's avatar Pluma
3 years ago

This is a song lyrics😅

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

Our saliva will run out🤣🤣💋💋💋💋

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User's avatar ADPM0811
3 years ago

LoL😂😂😂 you make me laugh hahaha

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago

great article... keep it up.. i will support you.

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User's avatar mostanzid.123-
3 years ago

Love it, great

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User's avatar zyrich
3 years ago

Singer kna pala👏😁

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User's avatar Cy-cy
3 years ago

Praktis baga😅

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User's avatar Pretyjhen
3 years ago
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