A very predictable one

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A lot of different ideas of different stories entering my mind since last week but I didn't know what to pick of or maybe I still don't have this thing for me to start making them and publishing. Different ideas like sci-fi, horror, romantic, Tragic (I love tragic stories) etc but yeahh I chosed not to do them yet maybe next week or next month or never in my life.

But for now what I'm going to do is this crazy story o very predictable one. Things that I know all of us think of. I bet you did it, because if not then that means your childhood is not complete yet. So without further ado let's start the story.


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A Very Predictable One

John rick Aka "ricky" is a 12 years old child, he is the son of marilyn and rogelio, and a siblings of Roy john. John is a responsible kids, he always follow what his parents always tell. He's an achiever in school and always in a dean's lister. He's friendly, and lovable. To be exact he's one perfect example of a perfect kid. However, his parents is not always in their house, their parents is always working 24/7 because they're not that rich but they can eat 3 times a day. It's only him and his rude older brother Roy in the house.

One afternoon, after doing the house chores, ricky went to the computer shop to do his assignment. After an hour and a half of doing it he came back to hir house and found out a mess in their houses with a broken window. He has an idea who do it (it was his brother and his friends) but decided not to make it a big problem. While cleaning the house his parents come with his brother who's smirking. He saw a rage in the face of his mother. Without anything else, his father immediately grab his belt and beat him badly. He doesn't even have a time to explain he just cry in pain that day.

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After that beating, he realized that his parents really doesn't love him at all, and it's all his brother's fault. He then have a flashback when he's showing his medals and certificate to his parents yet they didn't gave a care about it. But, when it comes to his brother's small achievement they will celebrate it for a night. Ricky's realization put him to a plan.

Ricky, with his 20$ money decided to run from his home. He waited for his parents to sleep so he can sneak easily. Ricky doesn't know where to go, he plan to went to his auntie yet realized he will only be beat again when he's parents know he run. So he changed plan to never let anyone know where he is. The first 4 days of running is okay with Ricky. He's budgeting he's money as hard as he can. But he's money run out. He then, tried to beg I'm strangers but people just get disgust on him. He then went to a garbage can and look for a foods but a group of thug kids kick him out because he's stepping in their territory.

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Ricky was helpless. He doesn't know where to go, he's hungry and thirsty. He's stomach is aching in pain and the God of luck is still sleeping that time because it rains very hard. Ricky, looking for a place to shelter, but he can't find one, he's cold that time. Ricky continuously walking for almost 5 hours it was past 11:00 pm that time. He stopped as a mansion and stare at it he then regret running away from his house. He then lost consciousness and passed out a glimpse of a car who stopped is the last thing he saw.

Ricky, then wake up in a white room, he thought he is in the heaven but it's not. At his side is an old man wearing a vest. After ricky's recovery from chilling he then talk to the old man. Ricky didn't tell any lie and the old man get touched by his story and decided to adopt him because the old man is also alone and only his made is with him. Ricky study hard in a great school until he graduated in college he's with his old man. He treat the old man as his parents and so the old man look at him as his child. Ricky become the heir of all the property of the old man when he died. He also become the owner of the company.

All is well on Ricky, he forgot about his old family. He's happy on his achievement and he know it's because of his hardwork and choice in life. Ricky is still a genuine ricky before. He's love by his employees that's why their company become the leading company in their country.

In a month of may, there's a lot of applicant and some of his staffs take a leave. Because of his free time he decided to be the one to interview the applicant. He first look at their resume and to his shocked that he found the resume of his older brother Roy applying to be a Janitor. Everything was flashback in his mind feels like real he said. He interview everyone first and decided to take his brother as last interviewee. Ricky's grudge on his brother came up and he wanted to have a revenge. He then introduced himself to his brother and left him frozen in the seat.

After that they, Ricky ask his assistant to gather information about his brother on where do he live and where his parents are. He then went straight to his parents and show how successful he is. He saw his parents crying while in shocked at the same time. They want to hug Ricky but his bodyguard stop them. Ricky told all he wanted to say from the start and how hurt he is every time they're doing that to him and told them not to chased him and try to take him back because he will not gonna come back. Ricky then go back to his office, he cry for real but he will not gonna forget what they did. Ricky then asked his assistance once again but this time he told them to leave a 10,000 dollar in front of his parents house.

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Hello hello to all of you. It's is predictable right??? Wanna know why I know it's predictable? Because I know all of you, after beaten by your parents has this things in your mind. We all think of this one about running away and showing them what we become. Atleast in this story I make our dreams/imagination achieve and done.

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Ang kulit ko din dati at naalala ko din yang mga sinturon at pamalo haha. Naalala ko na bali pa nga ung isang pamalo eh. 😹 Pero madalas naman naayos agad ang issue na ganito sa bahay noon.

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3 years ago

Sarap maging bats ano po? Pag naalala mo yung mga dahilan king bakit tati napalo eh matatawa nalang tayo, tapos Pag matapos paluin eh tatawagin Nila tayoo mula sa kuwarto para kumain. Kakain habang naiyak pa

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3 years ago

good read ! thanks for sharing.. i do hope he get to forgive his family, after all, he was already successful. he could show grace to his brother.

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3 years ago

I think ricky is on his was already in the process of forgiving his parents but not his brother who made things like that to him

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3 years ago

Well done the old man, and well done Ricky. I got beaten but I deserved it and never thought about running away.

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3 years ago

You haven't? Really? I guess it's only me and few people's here think of that way before lol. We get what we deserve as the proverbs says

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3 years ago

I did get sent to boarding school when I was 11, so no real place to run away to hahaha

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3 years ago

I can't remember the number of times I actually considered running away from home as a child after getting whooped by my parents πŸ˜… I'm glad I never did, because I'm pretty sure I wouldn't end up the same way Ricky did

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3 years ago

The parents who truly love their childrens would never behave in this way but Ricky's parents were so heartless, but I am glad to hear the status he achieved being with the old man.He was truly kind hearted person.

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3 years ago

What a nice story. Hindi mo talaga malalaman ang tadhana ng isang tao. Dati pagnapapagalitan ako, yan din ang naiisip ko. Ang maglayas. Pero naisip ko rin na wala naman akong mapupuntahan kung gagawin ko yun.hihi

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3 years ago

I think he's adopted cause his family don't care on him, I don't know what to say what he did is the best decision and in the end he never came back back his family, maybe I'll agree with it and say that he do the right thing, if someone hurt you so bad in the past,cwhy you should back again if you know you'll be hurt again?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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3 years ago

No one in this world with a right mind will hurt or gonna make an enemy of a rick people and an owner of a company hahaha. Simple story lang yan tol. Ung pag pinalo tayoo dati yan na agad mga naiisip natin mag lalayas hahanap ng mayaman para mag paampon tapos gaganti sa kanila haahhaah

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3 years ago

sana ako din mahimatay tapos may makapulot sakeng bilyonaryo para sko narin magmana hahaha.

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3 years ago

Kung ganon nga lang kadali dati ko pa pinukpok ulo ko ng kahoy hahahs

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3 years ago

Sa totoo lang naisip ko din talaga mag layas noon kaso diko magawa. Kasi, inisip ko ung mga nagawa na sakin for me ng parents ko. And, I really have the dream to finish my studies kaya nag tiis din ako. Di naman sila yong sobrang bait na magulang still, I'm thankful kasi may nakakain ako, nalalamnan ko ng pagkain ang tiyan ko 3 times a day. May malinis akong damit, may tirahan ako ung mga ganyan na simple lang pero napakalaking bagay. I'm happy for him because he achieve what he really want in his life pero sana, matuto din syang mag patawad. Wag naman sanang ganon na papatagalin ang galit sa dibdib. Maiba din ang ganyan. .

Galing oi πŸ‘

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3 years ago

Magaling po? Hahahaha salamat pooo, I thought madaming naboring KAsi predictable po ang story. Na lahatt tayoo eh inisip pong mag layas nung pinalo tayoo ng malakas hahaha. Naalala ko lang KAsi pinalo kapitbahay Namin kanina kaya nagawa ko po yannn. Pero I'm so happy po for you ate ruffa! Na Ikaw na dating inaapi(joke lang) na napalaki ka pong maayos ng parents mo. You're independent na po base on what you said po. And look at you here po napaka famous naaa. Love parin namann po ni ricky yon kaya nag bigay sya ng pera KAsi concern at may feelings pa po sya sa family niyaa.

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3 years ago

Ricky was lucky, but it isn't always like that when a boy decides to run away from home.

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3 years ago

Many run away children stay in the street until they grow up and even exposed to the harsh and dark environment that what most thing happen. But as I said that's just a things we're imagining after being beaten by our parents

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3 years ago

Life is a cycle. As a parents we should shows love and care to their child. Don't be a bias or having favoritism because we didn't know what will happen to the future. In the situation of Ricky, yes still it's his parents but we cannot blame too because of what he's experience from his parents, the wounds still there. The bad memories flashing back when he saw his brother. Parents should be aware for this.

This is nice article snail. Good evening.❀️

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3 years ago

Yes po ateee. Some parents KAsi iniisip lang Nila ay ang tanging responsibilities lang Nila ay pakainin bigyan ng tutulugan at paaralim ang kanilang mga anak.meron po sa kanila na hindi iniisip na emotional help and needs ang gusto ng mga anak. Kaya madami pong naddepress na mga bata at nag lalayas po ehhh. Salamat ate Jrrrr!!!!! Good evening poooo☺️

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3 years ago

Yes snail. Ang lungkot isipin ang bigat2 nun sa part ng mga anak kaya minsan nag rerebelda talaga at Yung iba nag suisuicide. Ang daming cases na ganito...πŸ₯Ί

You're welcome snail..❀️

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3 years ago

Opoo, I know some people po na ganyann kaya need natin SIla icheer up ate. Para ma feel nilang di SIla mag isa

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3 years ago

Kaya nga snail yung iba hindi nag shishare kaya hindi natin malalaman kinikimkim lang nila yung sakit snail...

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3 years ago

Once in a life time we all had got beaten up like that one & we decided to leave house like Ricky. Better I didn’t do.

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3 years ago

It's all in our mind. Also we know we love our family that much and there's a reason why they're beaten us most of the time.

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3 years ago

I had a lot of those until the belt breaks into 2 :D

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3 years ago

I haven't experienced a belt being break In to two, can't even imagine how hard the beating is

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3 years ago

Hehe, only happens like that in stories, normally he would have died but this is also a lesson that parents should love their kids equally!

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3 years ago

We all want equal love and fair treatment. We want our achievement to be congratulates by them

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