Why Can't You Smile? — @Jabs on read.cash

@Jabs 12 July 2020

Why Can't You Smile?

***The first time I saw you,*** ***I know there is something in you,*** ***You look warm,*** ***That I can't feel no harm.*** ***I was mesmerize by you eyes,*** ***Your eyes that cold as an ice,*** ***That drowning me in paradise,*** ***A paradise full cries.*** ***You keep appearing in my dream,*** ***Looking lonely at it seem,*** ***Loneliness fills your presence,*** ***Trying to find your essence.*** ***I don't even see you smile,*** ***And you're always looking in a distant mile,*** ***Aloof with your environment,*** ***Avoiding an encounter moment.*** ***I always look at you,*** ***And trying to observe you,*** ***Asking myself why,*** ***"Why can't you smile?"***

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12 comments

@Lejay28 12 July 2020

Waoooooohhhh. Nice poem poo. More more!!
- @Jabs 12 July 2020
  
  Thank you! 😊 Isa-isa lang, di kaya ng brain ko. 😂
  - @Lejay28 12 July 2020
    
    Sana ol poetic hahaha 😂😂
    - @Jabs 12 July 2020
      
      Kaya mo din gumawa.
@luffytaro 12 July 2020

galing talaga ni madam.... keep it up po iba talaga brain ng mga sensei hehe naging hapon bigla eh no
- @Jabs 12 July 2020
  
  Hahaha grabe naman po sa papuri. 😂 pero salamat😊
@aquariyoursxx 12 July 2020

Wow. Nice poeeem👌
- @Jabs 12 July 2020
  
  Thank you.
@Winona 16 July 2020

Does it describe someone you used to know as a happy person? But then turned sad and gloomy?
- @Jabs 16 July 2020
  
  Its just from mere imagination😊
  - @Winona 16 July 2020
    
    Wow. You managed to write that nice poem from just imagining the situation. That's great!
    - @Jabs 16 July 2020
      
      All the poems that I made is all based on my imagination. 😊 hope you read my other poems. 😊