One
You feel your tears run
Two
There's no one but you
Three
You try to break free
Four
You struggle some more
Five
Try to keep yourself alive
Six
You fall on leaves and sticks
Seven
You feel your pain worsen
Eight
It already too late
Nine
You know you'll never be fine
Ten
You died in vain
Then you wake up in the cabin
And you're tied up again
One of the best poems I read so far here. This is clear poetry, a poem most people will understand and who knows they might even like reading and writing it.
It reminds me of the schoolyard. ..
I think @heartbeat1515 and @marblely might like this too.
If you like to post in a community you might consider Freewriting or Poems.
SYT: Poems https://read.cash/c/syt-poems-bd19
Freewriting https://read.cash/c/freewriting-c99e