In The Gutters.. (2nd Entry)
In the Gutters We find waste and trash alike You'd never expect to see man in it So when you find one in it People laugh while watching him snore They say; He's a **charming** drunk In the gutters So many things that are incomprehensible are found So after waking up to see a used condom by her side Abena dumps it in the gutters She was raped, with no stress How? She was soft like a **worm** Thanks to three bottles of beer In the gutters We expect to find dirty water flow through So when we see a man's documents by the pub We pick it up But we are **perplexed;** The front page had gotten torn. How did it get there? The owner drank to stupor while celebrating last night. In the Gutters We've seen dreams destroyed So if you can save a life We seek your **support**. I used a phone's clock while writing with my phone.
28 comments
This is a freewrite I won't easily forget. I could try to say a lot of words but I think I would only spoil something unique. 👍🍀
You have said it all. I can't say no more.
My heart melts at this comment of yours..thanks a lot..
You know I would still love to hear it..your comments are one amazing reason I only get better.
wakeupkitty is definitely right. This was a very unique way of free writing and mentioning the effects of alcohol. Good luck on the contest. 🍀
Thank you so much..
This is indeed a strike to our current situation relying to alcoholism. Kudos!
Yeah, very true..
This is a poetic entry so nice, I should've made one like this but it's too late 😁 keep it up nice ideas and way of writing the alcohol effects.
Thank you so much, I just wanted to stand out..
I wish I have thoughts like this 😂 Congrats you made it 😊
Definitely, you do..
your writing style's unique. No doubt it was included in top 10
I don't just top 10..thanks for the kind words tho, it goes far to say there are great people out there...
So far this article is so unique, and I got some ideas too. No doubt that you will be one of the candidates or winner of this free writing contest .Good luck and good job.
Thank you so much!!!
I like the way you write this article. It's very unique. Looking forward for your new articles.
Thank you for appreciating my free write..
Cool. Kinda like a poem but free. I don't know. It's great you can tear down a little.
Oh, thanks for noticing that...
At this point I'm surprised to see something this good here. You really did well with this one. By the way, are you Ghanaian?
Explore and you'd find so much more.. I'm Nigerian..
Nice. Me too
Oh great to know..
This is my first time to see an entry like this, what a nice entry, I don't know but it is like free poetry.
Thanks for this beautiful comment.. I think I like that; free poetry..😘
Wow. This is one of the coolest entry I've read so far. A free poetry? Iza bomb! Very nice.
Thanks Winona, you are far too kind..