Scar ☹

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4 years ago

I saw a series movie, the lead female had a big scar on her face. That scar was accidentally hit by sharp steel caused by her friend. Her little friend was being bullied by older boys, that friend of her is a lonesome little boy who is always alone, that made the boys bully him. That little boy is fatherless, his mom only takes care of him and she was already sick, that made the little boy so lonely and aloof. His father is not around, he left his mom when she got pregnant.

On the other side, this little girl is so charming and lively, she is well-loved by her family. She pities the little boy when being bullied, one time she saw that the little boy was bullied because his bag is old and rotten. She defended him and they became friends, she also gives him an extra bag, because she is a girl the bag she gave was color pink. One afternoon the boy was bullied again because he had a bag that supposed to be for girls because of its color and style. She approaches the bullies and tells them to stop, the attention of the bullies turn into her, she was hit by the boys. The little boy got the courage to fight back trying to defend the girl, he picked up a sharp thing and wave it horrifically to the bullies due to ranging emotions. The little girl was behind him when he raised that sharp thing it accidentally landed to the face of the little girl and that made her face injured. Seeing so much blood spilling from her face made them both terrified and got traumatized.

That accident leaves a scar on the girl's face and that scar changes the girl's life, as she was bullied because of it. That made her parents quarrel all the time, blaming one another and ended up in divorce. After that incident, they never met again in their childhood.

Device: Mobile Phone

Timer: Mobile Phone

Grammarly: Running

Edited: After the 10 minutes for the glitches

Prompt: In bold letters.

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Nice article

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4 years ago

Nice article

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4 years ago

Nice article dear

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4 years ago

I felt a little bad after reading the story of the movie you saw but I liked the story a little differently. Thanks for writing an article on a very instructive topic

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4 years ago

Actually, this is only a synopsis 😁😊 The story is nice because it talks about emotional and psychological issues.

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4 years ago

Emotional scar is more than painful and unheallable. Even heart wound go dry it will live a scar. :( Just sharing. Haha

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4 years ago

Yeah, but that literal scar is the reason of her emotional scar..

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4 years ago

What is the moral of this story..so pathetic..

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4 years ago

You mean the story is pathetic? well the moral is, there is no permanent situation, just like how the girl had a joyful life then in just a blink of an eye her life situation changes.

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4 years ago

Yeah..whom she supports all the time get a scar because of him.. that's why I found it pathetic.In real life to whom we love the most, sometimes they give us the deepest scar..

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4 years ago

Yeah sometimes things are really pathetic, the people you care the most sometimes will be the reason of your sorrows.

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4 years ago

It was really nice jownrhey stood up for each other, but it's sad the way the story ended.

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4 years ago

Actually, this is only a synopsis I guess I have to write the full story 😁😊

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4 years ago

Oh! I can't wait to read it then.

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4 years ago

There Alwys not happy ending

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4 years ago

Hehe hmm di nmn sis. Cut ko lang kase yung story 😂

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4 years ago

so sad how story ended

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4 years ago

I haven't seen this film or episode. Strange how those who help each other are harmed even if they find the courage to defend each other. It feels as if there's no justice and bullies are always right. ☹

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4 years ago

Yeah, the world is full of bullies and the weak always being taken advantage of. No justice for the bullied and bullies always get away with it.

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