While the clouds are still Orange: Memories will never be forgotten

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Hello everyone! The sky here is still cloudy maybe it will rain later but nevermind because we still have a peaceful morning for this Easter Sunday. I supposed to published an article in the past midnight but I fall asleep and so, here I am again typing this at around, 9 am in the morning while eating my breakfast which is egg.

Anyways, For today's blog, I will just published the continuation of the story that I published last last day ago. We are at the ending of this story now and I am nervous because what if, my readers will not like the ending of the story that I write? But whatever the feedbacks is, I'm still willing to accept it and become a better writer in the next story.

Wait! As a warning, before you continue to read this one, you should read these first:

Part l: While the clouds are still Orange

Part ll: While the clouds are still Orange: Ferris Wheel

And if you are done reading the first parts, you can continue to read the Farewell story now. Happy reading!

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Year 2019

"Mrs. Quentin."

I heared the Doctor called my name. I am at the hospital right now. I'm just alone and Sky is at his work. We both Graduated to College and after we graduated we decided to get married and we are 3 years married now.

I'm at the hospital because I experienced fatigue and tiredness everyday. I even coughed and i'm so tired of it. So I decided to consult to the doctor and even Sky said this to me as an advice. May be he is busy to his work but he cared me a lot and you can look to his eyes and face that he is worried.

The Doctor sat in his chair in front of me. I am smiling because I am positive that it is just a simple cold but when I look to him, my smile fades away because he is serious.

"Hey, I know that you just wanted to be professional because we known each other since you are Sky's bestie but why you are so serious right now Miguel?" I said to make the mood change a little bit because it's worries and scared me too.

But he look at me with a sad look and then his eyes started to become watery and his tears fall "I...Didn't become a Doctor..." he is still crying and he lean to his chair "...to witness this." He said while crying and look at me.

"W-what?" I am nervous already "Yah! Miguel Palaez! Give me the result now."

He slowly give me the white envelope and I grab it and when I opened and read what in the coupon band said, I feel like my World started to fell. I haired Miguel cries echoed the whole room and so I cried too. I have a lot of questions inside of my mind but I decided to neglect it because if the feeling. I slap my face and even pinch my cheeks if this is just a dream but no. I feel the pain.

I look at Miguel who is still crying, "So...I only have 1 year left?" He slowly nod as an answer "Then, Do not tell this to Sky." I looked down and wiped my tears "I..." I can't speak properly "Should be the one who will tell this about him." and look again at Miguel with a sad face and he nod.

After that, I left to his room.

Who would know that our Friend become a Doctor and he is also the first one who will know about my condition. He is just a Doctor of a people who experiences cough and cold but didn't know that he will ended up knowing another reason why I have those.

I didn't know where to go right now. Should I visit my parents? No. Not on the time like this. Should I go to my husband office? But I think he is busy and I don't like to disturb him. I look around and found a small park. There's no people there so I decided to sat in the swing and after hours of thinking, I decided to go to the Beach near to where Sky is working while it's still early.

And when I arrived to the place, the Sun is near to be set again and I can see the colored orange clouds already so I called Sky. Glad that After a ring he picked up and answered my call.

"Hey! How are you love?" Hearing his voice and asking me if how I was became the reason why my tears are started to fall and so I bite my lips so that he can't hear my cry "Love? Are you there?"

"Yeah, I just...love hearing your voice." I looked at the Sun "Where are you right now? Are you busy?"

"No. I was about to go home but you called. Where are you?" I heared his car's door closed.

"I am...at the beach near to your working place. Come here the sun is beautiful!"

I heared his car started the engine "Okay. Wait me." And after hearing those words I ended the call.

I composed and relax my self my self. I even put a face powder so that he can't noticed that I cried. Because I don't like him to worry. I looked to my wedding ring at it makes me sad so smiled bitterly.

After how many minutes, finally, He arrived. He is running towards where I am and looking at him wearing a simple polo uniform and pants , made me smile and so he smiled too and when I looked down, I laughed when he is not wearing his shoes.

When he arrived in front of me he looked side by side and catching his breath and he looked at me "What are you doing here at this kind of hour? I thought you are just at home." He survey what I am wearing right now and amused "You're pretty. My wife is pretty, gorgeous, and sexy and I love you!" After he said that he kissed and hugged me. Hearing such a beautiful compliment from him makes me smile and cry again.

"Oh!" He smiled and looked at me "Look!" I looked to the sunset too and I just noticed to my peripheral vision that he moved and stand at my back then hugged me and we watched the sunset

I grab my phone and hold his hand where his wedding ring and put our hands in front of us where the sunset is and take a picture.

"I know." He said to my right ear and a simple words but made me cry "Miguel called me after you left to his office and explain everything. Don't be mad to him he is just worried because he is our friend." I heared his sniff and I know that he doesn't like to see him cry so I just pretend that I didn't know that he is crying right now. We are both crying in that kind of position.

His hug became thight "Dameun, no matter what happens, Always remember that, I will be right here and I will never leave you just like the colored orange Clouds did right now."

There's nothing that we can be heared but our both cries and the waves of the sea.

December 2019

I was lying on my bed with a lot of things that plugged to my body. I feel weak but remain strong for Sky. The year is about to end and I know that this is also my last month of staying alive.

"M-Mom." I called my Mom who is fixing the fruits on my side table

"Mmm? Yes baby?" My Mom leaned a little so that he can hear my voice because my voice are weak and It's hard for me to speak

I gulped a little and told her "C-Can...we unplugged...th..those thi...ngs now?" My Mom looked worried and she wipes her tear and pretend that she is not crying and so I smiled a little "L..let me see t..he sunset with Sky. Pl..ease gra..nt my wish."

I wanted to see the colored clouds again with Sky. Because I know... I can feel now that this is the one last day of my life. I can feel it because I started to become weak and my breath is also weak. I know that the Sun was ready to be set again because, I can see it on my peripheral vision my room has a wide door which is became a window too.

"O-okay darling. Wait a minute and I will ask The Doctor for permission and then call Sky to go here already okay?" After that, I am left alone.

My Doctor and even Miguel entered the room together with the Nurses. They Unplagged everything that was plugged to me and the nurses gentle accompany me to sit a little and I smiled and mouted thank you. The Nurses left. We are all shocked when the Door opened forcely and there I saw my Friends during High School to College. Do you remember my Friends that I am with when Sky is at the outside of my new School? They became my besties 'till we graduated.

"OMG! DAMMY GIRL! I'M SORRY FOR BARGING IN! WE MISSED YOU!"

I looked at Miguel who looked disgusted to how Ela acted and I smiled they are really meant to be.

"Girls, Calm down." My Doctor said and so Ela behave and I just look at Zia who's just at the side and look to my Doctor with an amused. I know that he like him back then because he is Miguel and Sky's Friend too during College.

They started ti chit chat and like a happy moment and just neglected the sad reality to make me smile and laughed. I understand because they just wanted to be strong and have this moment as a happy life.

I told my Mom that i need to be alone with Sky later and so she agreed. We also talked to each other while waiting to Sky. I know it's painful for My Mom to let go of me but she ramained strong because that is what I wanted and my wish to her.

The Door opened and there I saw Sky. He smiled while walking towards me and he kissed me to my forehead.

Now Playing: I'll see you again By Westlife

"They visited?" And I nod "You want to see the sunset?" and I nod too he know that I am weak to speak now and I don't have much energy so he also nods and hold my hand and guide me to the veranda of this room he also guide me to sit at the bench and he also sat beside me. I leaned my head to his shoulder while looking at the sunset.

"Hey love, The sunset looks beautiful right?" Sky started "Just like you." he never stopped making me smile

"Y-you...make..my..w-world c-olorful Sky." I said with a soft and weak voice "Thank you." i gulped because "Y-you m-ake..." I can't say the words perfectly "me sp-ecial." '...Until my last breath.'

"I know and you also did the same. Being in love with the person I love the most in this kind of world is the best gift that I recieved from above..." he paused "Thank you for the love that you give and I was became a special man."

After a long minutes of not talking and crying he speak again

"I want you to rest now Dameun not because I want you to let go but..." i know that it is hard for him to say that "Everytime I saw you being weak and suffered, it's hurts me and I know that you like to rest now too." my tears never stoped from falling "You know, it's okay to rest. I know that you will also wait for me there. Wait for me okay? Even if it's long, we will be together again. I will make sure of that."

"I know Sky.. I know." Finally I can speak well but I feel like my eyes are ready to close "Sky.." i called him and I heared him 'Hmm?' "I Love you."

and after that... I left the world.

But wait, Why I still see Sky and myself in front of me?

"I Love you too love. R-rest now."

"Mrs. Samantha Dameun Alevarez-Quentin?"

I heared someone's voice calling my name and so I look at my back

"Born: April 23, 1996, Died: December 22, 2019 Time of Death: 6:30 PM. We will scort you to the after life." He bowed and turned his back

"W-who are you?"

He turned again and look at me with a smiled look and he looked creepy of doing that, "I am the one and only handsome, sexy, and Hot Grim Reaper scorting a souls like you. Now, if you please." He smiled and his hand guesture leading a way.

45 years later

And that is how I started my new life in heaven. I didn't know how but they just said that I should also work as Grim reaper. Scorting a lof of souls is making me sad and I admit that it was a though work as that Grim Reaper.

"Someone is coming tomorrow Dameun." He told me while we are walking. We just arrived back in heaven after scorting some souls.

"Who?" I asked but He just shrugged.

He is like that everytime when he scorted my Family members who have just died. My Mom, some of my Relatives and so on. I also Escorted Miguel who just died in a Car accident during the year of 2030.

And the day that he mentioned was today

I am staring outside of the window of my office when I heared 3 knock on the door of my office.

"Miss Dameun" I heared my Secretary's voice "He's arrived."

I sigh and smiled bitterly "Okay. Come in." I ordered and heared the door opened but I didn't turned around. I just wanted to look outside because this is what I really like every day. Looking outside of the window because of the beautiful scenery. Every ending of the daylight and the sunset and the clouds become colored orange,

"What a beautiful gift from God." I said and 'tsk' silently.

I heared my secretary 'cough' and I almost forgot that i have things to handle so I turned around to them without looking at them. I grab my eyeglasses and put it into my eyes and sat down to my chair. My secretary give me an white folder and I opened it

"Mr. Sky Aldrin Quentin, Date of Birth: January 14, 1996 Died: September 12, 2064."

and when I read it, I was stuned for a second and I looked to the person who was in front of me.

"While the Clouds are still orange, I am with you." He smiled "Thank you for waiting Dameun."

The end. Fin.


Yay! Another story was finished! I really like writing story. Sorry if I make you cried again. Hihi Anyways, this story, I was inspired by watching Tomorrow in Netflix. Because the Grim repears there was so cool and I like to make Dameun as one Too because of the wish of Sky to her before she died that she should wait him to arrived to the after life.

I hope that you liked it? To new users, please remember to read the first and second part of this Story! Thank you for reading!


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It is more of a true life that happened you putting those characters and bringing those characters to live for a moment I thought it was not a story and for me the ending part for ok 👌 and I just thought yeah that's an ending I will want to watch in a movie

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yung luha ko my ghaadddddd

ang ganda nang story baby gerl...dati nagalit ako kay sky but when they ended up being together mas pumaibabaw yung iyak at saya huhhhu

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gotta read the first part muna maricake. Happy easter Sunday sayuuuuuu

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Why it has to be end like that? C'mon I don't like to cry again

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