Will you marry me?

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2 years ago
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Rocking back and forth on his chair, the expensive ring be once looked at in awe and admiration now seemed to him like nothing but a rusty old metal resting on a table as he stared at it with a deep frown on his face. His mind flashed back to what happened only three hours ago.

The disgrace and embarrassment Grace put him through suddenly made him furious. If she had said "No" in front of those tens of people, he wouldn't have felt it much. Amidst tens onlookers who were also eating in the restaurant he proposed to her, kneeling while presenting the ring, uttering the all time proposal phrase "will you marry me?" with a near idiotic smile on his face as he presented the ring. He had been in a relationship with Gracey for almost a year now and she's the embodiment of anything he'd ever wanted in a woman : Beauty and Character. They've never for once argued or had any disagreement of some sort and she'd never shown any aversion towards him. He showered Gracey with love, affection and attention and what did she pay him back with?

Upon his proposal, Gracey face immediately went blank and her eyes widened. She stood from her seat without uttering a single word, stormed out of the restaurant as she turned deaf ears to calls of George as he called after her. He was so embarrassed that he he hadn't the courage to go after her. All he could do was call and stare. The applause from the already forming small crowd slowly ceased as they stared from George to Gracey in bewilderment. On his way home after getting hold of himself, he tried calling her several times but she didn't pick and here he in his house with several doubtful thoughts flashing in his head?

"Have I done something wrong?"

"Has she been playing me? "

"Doesn't she love me? "

"Doesn't she think me worthy of her?"

"Isn't she ready for marriage?".. "perhaps she was joking when she had said she doesn't see herself getting married to anyone else if not me", George thought to himself, "what other explanation could there be for why what happened today happened!".

Beginning to get more furious and tired from his own thoughts, George decides to have an early night. He checked his phone for text messages from her, found none, went to his bedroom, changed and headed to the bathroom for a shower. He had his phone ringing just when he got himself covered in lather. He rinsed immediately, dashes out of the bathroom into the bedroom. With water still dripping from his body and hands he picked up his phone and saw it was James, his friend who called. With a disappointed look on his face and a deep sigh, he answered the call:

George: Hello James, do I owe you money?

James: Come on buddy! It's just me showing some lurrrv! Can't a homie call to check up on his fellow home again?

From he sound of his voice, George concluded James was drunk and he cut the call, besides he couldn't here him clearly as he seems to be clubbing. He wasn't in the mood for small talks this night. He just wanted to sleep and forget about everything.

"Good God", he muttered after keeping the phone on the drawer, the time was 9:26pm, "I need to talk to Gracey tomorrow". He yawned and and crashed on his king-size bed.

To be continued..

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That's why I can never propose to a girl in the public . Scared of the embarrassment

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2 years ago

Yeah I can imagine.πŸ˜€ it can be very risky

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2 years ago

Interesting story. I understand Gracey. Maybe she is not ready for that important moment in her life or maybe she felt uncomfortable in public place. That is personal and I don't like when people do that in public places. It would be more romantic if they were alone. But there is also possibility that Gracey has another guy😊

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2 years ago

These are all possibilites and could be any. I don't like it too when guys do that. It can be very risky.

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2 years ago

I don't know if how am I gonna express my feelings when someone also propose me in public. I don't know if am i going to say yes just to save the ego of the guy or should I just walk out like gracey did. Sometimes it is also not a good idea, specially if you still don't know the real personality of the person you like. Maybe gracey don't like public proposal.. i will wait for the second part of this story.

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2 years ago

I think it's not a better idea to propose in public. First, we should understand the chemistry of a girl. And then act accordingly. Looking forward to the next part.

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2 years ago

Yes Niazi. Some of us don't just like the publicity. Glad you liked the story.

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2 years ago

I came here to confirm if it's truly a proposal to Great man as they said on the groupπŸ˜‚. looking forward to the continuation

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2 years ago

We don't have much details now to know that. We shall know in the continuations.πŸ€­πŸ˜‚

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2 years ago

I can't wait to see how this ends, this is a trending topic these days

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2 years ago

Yeah. Proposal Palava everywhere.

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2 years ago

At first in shocked and then realised. A story indeed. Reading the title I was going to answer πŸ˜‹

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2 years ago

Hahaha. Can't risk that. You might treat me the way Goeorge treated Gracey.πŸ˜‚

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2 years ago

I would never. Lucifer never disrespected a woman.

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2 years ago

That thing dey pain oooo but I would love to see why she turned him down, looking forward to the next episode.

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2 years ago

No be small oo. As in not all ladies like dat kine thing sha and women don't just have intentions for marrying a person sometimes so one just end up embarrassing himself. Grace had more reasons to that. We'll keep ya posted.😊

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2 years ago

Hello friend. Good morning, I'm just agreeing with the comments of your post .

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2 years ago

Good morning LovelyFaith. Thank for the comments.

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2 years ago

I don't know why ladies are usually talked of negatively when they reject a public proposal. If a guy wants to propose publicly he should be ready for rejection too. Can't wait to see how this goes

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2 years ago

Yes it isn't their fault. Some of us do not just like it. As a man you should know the type of woman you're dating.. besides you can't always be sure if she's really ready to marry you.

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2 years ago

Hmmmmm i agree friend

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2 years ago

If I ever have to kneel down for someone, I'll do it in a secluded place as much as possible, haha.

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2 years ago

Haha. It can be really embarrassing. Not all Ladies even like that even if they love you.

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2 years ago

Haha right! Me too if ever

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