Talk about Alcohol..

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4 years ago
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Hello everyone, it's Dangerous_Fly once again on this .. My FreeWritimg challenge .. Second entry.

Prompts used : perplex, support,charming, ashes, release,

Prompt missed: worm.

  • Prompt information added after time out as well as introduction. THANK YOU

Let's dive in..

Mostly I go to the bar with my friends to play snooker. At such places you will see a lot of people trying to prove their worth by taking in alcohol to show they are the men.

I took a chance to ask one of them about it and he told me he always has a perplex feeling whenever he takes it. He continued to brag about it's importance when I tried convincing him. Although it has importance, this shouldn't be something people should be in support of. Some say it has a charming power that moves them on but it actually causes them the harm of shattering and burning their future into ashes ..

They have to realize this early to release them from future troubles and suffering. This was what I told him.

Thank you.

Note : It is completely fiction.

Device used: Mobile

Timer used : Mom's phone

Start : 18:02 GMT

End : 18:12 GMT

Translation :No

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Nice one

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User's avatar Danny2000
4 years ago

I though this will be a long article coming from @Dangerous_Fly and I was wrong though it worth to read. Such a short time and he manage to make a good article. 👏👏👏👏 Let's see the third article.

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User's avatar salma24
4 years ago

This is a competition and it doesn't require writing it down but you think while writing, this makes it difficult to write more and also you have to make use of the prompts

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

she said people and perplexed are not prompts... im confused

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User's avatar Jdine
4 years ago

I know . I feel you. Kaya mo yan . Di ka nag iisa. Pag ikaw nanalo huwag ka sanang makakalimot suportahan daka dear 😘😘

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User's avatar salma24
4 years ago

haha kaloka ka sis ahahahaha

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User's avatar Jdine
4 years ago

Ok but always put it in English. I had to translate it

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

Upon further notice it is part. She says I is rather perplex but grammarly changes it to people

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

This is what she commented on my article: "People is not a prompt you can remove it we have 6 prompts only. Be aware Grammarly changes perplex into people!" Then I asked: Thanks!! so perplex and people is not prompts? She answered: Exactly! 🍀

Here's my article so you can see the comment. https://read.cash/@Jdine/how-drunk-people-act-1st-entry-fe3f53b7

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User's avatar Jdine
4 years ago

Your writing skill is awasome. I have a lot to learn from you. Thank you again for this article.

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User's avatar Saha99saha
4 years ago

You can ask me for help of you need some . I am forever available

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

Wow available forever hahaha I wish I can be available forever too

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User's avatar KiriyaOkazaki56
4 years ago

Not like that but for now I am always available it is when I leave for school that I won't be available. Dm and let's talk privately

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

It came out short for you as well

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User's avatar Hanzell
4 years ago

Oh my. You just made it easy!

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User's avatar bbhoho44
4 years ago

Very nice article. ..😊

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User's avatar Mykee
4 years ago

Alcacol is good, Hi help to relax. But if drink to much, that is Shit, 👍

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User's avatar Mila
4 years ago

Your article sounds like youre African😂😂 Snooker is my sport Man but too many influence around crowd

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User's avatar Jesus
4 years ago

I am indeed an African but the article is fiction. It just came up

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

Ohh you good at this.. I almost felt like we had the same parents😂😂😂

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User's avatar Jesus
4 years ago

you have good knowledge on writing. You prove that again. I like your article all the time.

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User's avatar aminul
4 years ago

Thank you for that

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User's avatar Dangerous_Fly
4 years ago

Fi tion or not it sounds very realistic to me which is great. The one asked already lost his vision to reality or is a narcissist (he most likely is and you better keep him out of your life).

🍀

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago
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