@DanLawan
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Poem: Me and my Thoughts Me and My thoughts Best friends in the cold My dripping tears froze My pain grows old Me and my thoughts Alone in the cold Waiting for our fall Hiding our shameful flaws Me and my thoughts Prisoners in the dark Scared like little rats So hard we fought Me and my thoughts Soldiers with no arms Deadlier than the wolf Powerful brothers in arms Me and my thoughts Sharper than a blade Our scars never fade Heart blaze with rage Me and my thoughts Hard witted to overcome Too diverse to fathom Visions beyond the horizon Me and my thoughts Fatigue comes our efforts Weak as dying leaves Who would have thought Me and my thoughts Hopeful studs we were Now hopeless we fare Flawlessly lost our touch Me and my thoughts hard we fall under Hearts broke and shudder Heard my thoughts lost Me and my thoughts Back we stand stronger Refused be called losers In hope we waft Fallen was my thoughts Even stronger we assembled The fallen returns unjust We rise, devils trembled. *Good day fellas, it is such a refreshing day and I am here alone with my thoughts thinking about life and discussing all possibilities. Sometimes in this world the only best friend we can have is a stable calm mind with good thoughts.* Have a nice day fellas. ****Sun, June 19, 2022.**** Introducing new community for poetry, click to join> Wings Of A Poet (17ea) https://read.cash/c/wings-of-a-poet-17ea **Thanks you for reading.**
16 comments
Let's choose to fill our minds with positive thoughts. Remember, what we feed our mind will manifest in the reality.
Indeed, so let's keep our mind healthy and stronger. Though overthinking is inevitable, but I know we are capable of doing anything. Stay positive always!
Yes indeed, over thinking is inevitable, we just have learn to think positively. Thank you.
Sitting to meditate for even 15 minutes will stop overthinking in its tracks. Meditation is like a mirror that lets you look deep into who you are and how things are going on.
I love this poem Dan, it's actually awesome. I've joined the lovely community. Our thoughts is the school or place that births all forms of creativity.
Thank you Ella, I appreciate it. And thank you so much for joining the community.
I love poetries. I love how you made up a poem about your thoughts connected with life.
Thank you my dear friend, I am glad you like it. Please do us the honour of joining our community and share beautiful poems.
Thank you for sharing such beautiful poems as well 💖
I enjoyed this and I am glad to see a poet also on this lovely site. This is a poem of emotions just the way I like it. A lot goes through our thoughts and the one about waiting for the fall just to hide the flaws got me the most. Well done.
Thank you Sir Olasquare, I am honoured.
Deeply appreciated.
It is indeed an amazing poem to read . Such a relaxing feeling with your thoughts . Hi! This is RosesLetters_08 a newbie 🙂
Much appreciated, welcome to this beautiful platform RosesLetters.
I like how this flows. You should join hive and post your poems in communities there about poems.
Okay ARTicLEE, I highly appreciate it. And I will make sure I join hive as soon as possible. Thank you for the advice.