Still

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4 years ago

Before the cruel, penetrating eyes

I stand, frozen ;

Fearful of how one mistake

Could be the death of mine.

Barely moving, I lower my eyes

From their piercing gaze.

Almost certain that I

Will not live to see this

End,

From even now,

I am still.

Inspired by dear @Dolores .

Thanks alot for the poem writting contest.

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nice one..recently i learned about Found poetry..i have to pick some words from a poem and make a new meaningful poem..i wish to make one using yours..

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4 years ago

Wow.. that's a good initiative. Go ahead love 😘 It's much more better than doing that boring classes πŸ˜‰

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4 years ago

hi @girlnextdoor, hi@Cutie_Angel_MuktaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† it’s surgery tymπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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4 years ago

πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–

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4 years ago

🀫🀫

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4 years ago

Best of luck dear for your beautiful poem and also for the beautiful poem contest which is announced by @Dolores. Thanks a lot @Dolores for your great initiative dear.

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4 years ago

Thank you dear ❀️❀️❀️

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4 years ago

beautifully depicted 😊 actually this happens to me when i stand in front of my daddy..πŸ˜…

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4 years ago

😁😁😁

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4 years ago

The feelings...

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4 years ago

😌😌

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4 years ago

You're good in expressing yourself

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4 years ago

Hope so πŸ˜›

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4 years ago

Very nice, keep posting friend.

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4 years ago