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4 years ago
In community: SYT: Poems(bd19)

Eyes are often closed.

Left in history of thoughts,

Half of me is lost.

Gun shots I still hear,

Continuos feeling of fear,

Thinking you are near.

Shout for liberty,

Independence now we see,

But noise won't leave me.

Thank you for reading❤

Writing a Haiku is idea of @CrazyInsane , you can also share yours, let's us write more poems❤

I'm not that confident with this one but I hope I did it right this time😅 it's been a long time since I wrote a Haiku🤧

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You can check profile of @glossyberrycraze , though she's busy because of some worksheets I know she'll get back in track. She published her first article and it's good❤

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Thank for accepting the challenge 💝 let's spread the love for poetry and relive our poetic persona 💝

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User's avatar CrazyInsane
4 years ago

Thank you for creating the challenge. It helps me try another type of poem, maybe next time we can try Tanka?😁

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Yeah sure 👍💝

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User's avatar CrazyInsane
4 years ago

Beautiful bro

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User's avatar kFatema
4 years ago

Wow😍 deep and meaningful

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User's avatar Yayaya13
4 years ago

Thank you for reading it😊

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Really very beautiful 🥰keep it up.

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User's avatar EYERISH687
4 years ago

Thank youu

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

You're welcome dear 🥰

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User's avatar EYERISH687
4 years ago

Great Poem

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User's avatar mooontivated
4 years ago

Thank youuu

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

The moment before the war that leaves traumatic memories and the loss of someone dear because of the war.

I have not read a haiku for a while and this is the feeling of reading one. Nice 👍

I will have a look at the account that you suggested.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Thank very much, appreciating it means a lot to me🤗

Thank you for checking her profile, she's new but i see her articles as short but full of feelings and creativity❤

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

I prefer her to write like the first article she wrote. The poems are too short, shorter than a haiku.

The layout of her current articles is filled with italic words and hard to read for me.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

I guess the short ones pop out of the feelings it is more like a quotation but i feel the emotions but yeah we have different styles and as a reader we have diff perspective, thank for reading her article.

She's still new in the platform i think she can do about the italicized words if she want. @glossyberrycraze you can read his/her opinion i know you're welcome of suggestions❤

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

I like her writing. She needs to write like her first article in my opinion, to differentiate her from scammers.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

hello, thank you for sharing your thoughts. 😊 i'm still new to this platform so allow me to be better 🤗

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User's avatar glossyberrycraze
4 years ago

No problem at all. Your writing is good. I like your first one.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago
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