The Day You Said GoodBye

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I stir my smiling coffe, I add a bit Creamer I look at its you that I see.

It's noon and I see the grinning sun. I remember your burns; So as the memories and i still remember the fun.

The innocent apple reminds me of you How you throw your silly jokes; How your laughter irritates me. And how I wanted to give you a hoo!

But the clouds sometimes are mean, cups are brittle, apples will not last forever, and no shadows of you can be seen. That the day when you said good bye.

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Naks lakas tama ha haha ha . Tittle palang petmalu na. Mi hugot ba ere. I just remembered day I didn't say Goodbye. I just leave like a bubble in the air.

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4 years ago

Hahahha dapat ganun noh wala ng Good bye good bye..para di mashakit hahahahahahah..walang hugot yan talagang nangyayari sa mga buhay nila.🤣🤣🤣

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4 years ago

well I like the sunset view it's relaxing anyway my point of view on this article is no perfect relationship it will become bitter or sweet the way you handle it .

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4 years ago

Thanks you for having critics of my articles..

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4 years ago

Your article is very charming. This picture is very good. Your message is very well. Thanks a lot.

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4 years ago

Thank you so much you give me reasons to keep going..i am much motivated to write more.. thanks to you..

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4 years ago

Great article, nice one and is very interesting, I really love this article there are different ways of saying good bye.

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4 years ago

Yes that right CuteEmpress what we need to do is we just be ready those time, cause you know a bit hurt..but we should be strong cause everything happen for a reasons..Thank you for reading this.. you're comments serves me as my motivation to keep going.

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4 years ago

Aww memory to remember nakaka kilig ka naman po

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4 years ago

Thank you Monskins, you motivate me to write more♥️♥️♥️

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4 years ago

Goodbyes only means to a start a new life. Pa subscribed back po, thank you!

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4 years ago

Yes indeed ching..good bye is not the end theres a lot more..

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4 years ago

Yes, po. In order to love others, you need to love yourself first because if you are self sufficient, you're already contented for what you have and would not rely to others for what you are lacking. Sometimes, it is one of the reason why the relationship is being ruined, because we continue to look in them what we are lacking in ourselves.

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4 years ago

Very well said, so must keep moving whatever circumstances we experienced. We just trust our God Almighty to guide us All through the way.

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4 years ago

Yes, dear. That's it. God bless us always.

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4 years ago

That sweet and a bit sad. Good byes are not at all means an end it could mean start for another chapter of your life without the person who left. Sometimes losing someone is the best for us. if you believe in God, you would know that God knows all the best for us. Though it hurts but it could be a part of His plan. God loves us and He wants us to live a happy life in accordance to His plans for us. Who knows, someone's coming is the right one. ❤️

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4 years ago

Thanks for that wonderful advice , yes the show must go on even if they already said good bye..Thank you so much..in such way our heart will be calm. Stand up wipe your tears and walk confidently beautiful with a ❤️♥️♥️

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4 years ago

Why is this so painful omg I didnt signed up for this :((( but its so good. I can feel the emotions of the writer while reading it, Kudos!! Youre awesome

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4 years ago

Thank you so much you keep me motivated to write some more articles

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4 years ago

A very good article.... I can feel the emotion just by reading it👍

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4 years ago

Thank you mazee, we can feel the emotion of a broken vow.🤣🤣✌️✌️

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4 years ago

Good article

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4 years ago

Thank you..

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4 years ago

Good by is the most important word in every body. This article is very interesting to see. Keeping your writing style. Than you.

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4 years ago

Thank you so much ..very much appreciated...please hit like if you love this article..to motivate me more.

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4 years ago

Goodbyes could lead to better hellos.

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4 years ago

Wow...khob sundor likhecen aponi.sotti sometimes it's means that we never meet again and sometimes it's means that we will.

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4 years ago

It os made just to give us another opportunity to fonder. We should take into positive way.

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4 years ago

Everyone has a terrible day in their life. Everyone wants to say goodbye to that day. Such a day that never comes in his life

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4 years ago

Yeah it is better to experienced it than nothing. So it means they give us another opportunity to go through thats why take it as a positive way.

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4 years ago

i do not understand this article properly.i also cannot match any between heading and article.

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4 years ago

Try to understand and i am much appreciate your comment as a positive way.

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4 years ago

Good bye its the mixture of two words. Sometimes it's means that we never meet again and sometimes it's means that we will meet again another morning. Sometimes it's brings happiness and sometimes sorrow for the people.

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4 years ago

Thats right only God knows what comes next. So what should we going to do is just take it as a positive way. Good bue is not the end, its just finding another good opportunity.

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4 years ago

Oshadharon. Article ti khub e sundor hoyese. Article er topic ta khub e guruttopurno. Ei story theke onek kichu jante parlam, bujhte parlam ebong shikhte parlam.

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4 years ago