Pure Feelings

I can't talk to you without feeling honor. I can't see you without feeling wonder. I can't touch you without feeling pure. I can't feel you without wanting more I can't kiss you without feeling a great level of unimaginative compassion I can't hold you without feeling this sleek wave of affection In my deepest thoughts, Something whispers in my ear asking me to come and hold you in my arms, I can hear your prayers Your burdens I will bear, but first I need your hand Then forever can begin

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@Salamy posted 4 years ago

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I would prefer if this is written in an article format instead of short post.

This sounds more like a letter to someone than a poem to me.

I will let the other reader to share their opinion first before I choose to accept or reject this for a SYT: Poems.

@wakeupkitty @marblely @gertu13 @ozzyy @Charlotte @jane @xeon @hanzell

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4 years ago

It would have been a lot better as an article with more content in it.

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4 years ago

Thank you.

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3 years ago

This would be better if he/she will make it longer 😁 i actually like it..

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4 years ago

Thank you for your response. I hope the author read.

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4 years ago