@z_graeden
Mother
A baby was born by her. He suckled the milk and nourish by her His cries at night,his days fright Ssshh baby,leave you I can not. Every pain she takes it all To her child she must stand tall; When child on the ground he falls Carefully, mother teach and help not all Let him learn from and take the toll. You are this world's mother Nothing you want but better Time we hold not kids due time will tie the knot. Grey hair,wrinkles all over, Frail and body's weaker Leave her not behind. Child,take her hand She does gone blind. thanks to miss @Dolores who is facilitating this giveaway.. If interested to join,check this link below for mechanics https://read.cash/@Dolores/my-first-ever-giveaway-join-earn-and-improve-879c7319
30 comments
it made me feel and i have been emotional... it.remind me of my beautiful childhood holding my mother's hand...and made me sad by remembering that one day my mother will become old...i can't take this...
I was emotional too while writing it.when they get old,we have to embrace the truth that in this world we no longer depend on them but the other way round
yes dear...i often think about it.. how things changes as the time passes...when they will be in their second childhood we should always be there for them
right coz if we are kids,we are modeling them on how they should also treat us when we're old
yes dear..absolutely... 💗💗💗
Im not close to my mother coz im a papas girl.. But i love the message of the poem. It touches the heart.
I do understand..yet I know you would still be there for them when time comes coz as an anak you have the heart to care and love unconditionally
Yah its true....
Your poem is one of a kind. I really love it. The words are inspiring and the whole message is very convincing. Congrats for making a wonderful entry.
thank you miss @Dolores..would love to make some more when you got someone to motivate you
This is a good poem how a mother love and take care of her child all her life and hope that the child will do the same when the time comes😍
main point...😍
very nice :) Keep it up
thank you for reading
you're welcome :)
This is a very beautiful piece ..mmothers are the best
Great article...
thank you for ur compliment.pls like😊
It's very nice. Keep writing and keep sharing 💕
This heartwarming. It makes me remember my mother..
Mother no one can replace no matter what happened she still there.
Wow amazing article about mother.....Mother always support us in our critical situations of life...I love my mother also....she is really all rounder....
Mother is not only a word. It's everything for a child's life. Mother sacrifices everything only for her child. You described it very nicely dear.❤
you write so well brother. Go ahead
thank you for reading
Nice poem I love the rhymes 😍
yhup thanks and I hope you got the meaning of it
Sure! Why not
Congratulations ❤️
yayy thanks much... Godbless