Prince charming

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4 years ago

Had he been charming at all?
She tried to remember the first time they met. It was at a dancing school in the city. Not a place she liked to be but it was her sister who dragged her along, forced her to join. It was not about dancing but boys. While her sister had what she wanted, she had to keep the friend company, cover her up. The sneaky meetings escape to places she was not invited to.

Did she make a mistake?
For sure she had by sticking around, by betting on the wrong horse. It took a bit longer to find out there were two. Perplex she had stared at the siblings, siblings who turned out to be twins. The serious, more intelligent one she had to hang out with, while the fun part went his own way in shirt, shorts, and slippers not caring about the protocols starting with wearing a suit and decent shoes.
At first, she truly believed he supported her. He called several times a day to inform, stayed for dinner, let pamper himself, and... ruled. He ruled while the high intake of alcohol ruled him.

It was hard to think clearly while the worm slowly ate her and the only thing dare to her was the twin brother. An alcoholic too but so much more charming.
As she closed the door behind her to start a new life, to release herself from the burden, she didn't know about the dark cloud above her head but the first step to freedom was set.



Device: mobile phone
Egg timer: set at 10 minutes
Prompts: written in bold

#kittywu #alcoholeffects #story #freewriting

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Those twin brothers are never been her supporter, good thing she made a right choice on making a brand new start for her life. Those bold letters were the choosen words on your previous contest. Isn't it?

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4 years ago

No, they never were if it came to it. The question is what made her think he would support her. Men with the bottle...

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4 years ago

You can never trust men with alcohol. There is always an intention for that. I guess

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4 years ago

They know which type of people they can manipulate and abuse in the name of love or who knows what the girl likes to hear most. 🤔

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4 years ago

Did the other sister get what she wanted? Situations that I will never forget if it happens to me. I am happy to see that she decided to go on her own road and hopefully a better one.

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4 years ago

The other sister. Who knows but not with the one she needed her for at that moment. She went for the fun.

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4 years ago

Fun is good but too much also men troubles. I miss having fun not by drinking though.

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4 years ago

We need a good laugh. An escape way out of here. We can watch Blackadder or Keeping up appearances 😁

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4 years ago

Yes, we do need a good laugh that will not be stopped by any problems especially financing.

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4 years ago

Nice story . My one also used to call me 'prince charming' in the beginning of our relationship. So I was wondering what you wrote in your story. But your story is totally different as it would be. Well done.

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4 years ago

It's unsure if he was a prince charming. Most likely people see what they like to see or try to paint a better picture of reality. He was no prince charming for sure.

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4 years ago

Yes, but the interesting thing was your title. It reminded me about something and someone , who was too close to me. 🙁

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4 years ago

Masterpiece

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