Peace of mind - 6

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After five years, he just happened to be walking down her street. He hadn't seen the old woman since. Suddenly he remembered there was a legend about the well in the garden. As a little boy, his idea of heaven was the place the legend taled about and he had even tried to enter it by jumping into the well while screaming out Hella's name. Was the well-meant for girls only too?

Outside the cabin, the wind howled through the trees, while inside, the old woman's fire was nearly out. The older she got, the less sure she was about anything.
He opened the door to find her standing there, crying.

"I have to find the necklace, before..."

He knew he had to keep quiet while she searched just like he did during those days long ago. He waited out of habit and studied the pictures placed on the mantelpiece. The old photos made him conscious of his age, of how much time had passed - and of what an "interesting" life he'd had. He wanted to tell her how much he loved her but he couldn't. Would she even remember him? As she finally looked at him a spark of recognition flared up in her eyes. It was enough to act. He sat her down and held her close before telling her the terrible news.

"You know... his solution to the problem of having two children to care for was to find another woman to do the job..." She stammered with her eyes wide open out of fear.

"You knew the moment would come, someone would end the story, close this book forever."

She nodded and as he closed the door behind him all she could do is waiting for the fire getting closer and turn into ashes what life had destroyed.

Part 7

This part starts where part 2 ends I guess. It is a coincidence

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Comments

Wow it's so exciting! a son returns and is not expected!

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4 years ago

Really I got some infotmative lines from your articles.

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4 years ago

Like what for example? I am curious to hear more about it.

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4 years ago

Ñice. I'm happy the bits and pieces are coming together

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4 years ago

I hope to write the last part now but I am not sure if that will finish this story. 🤔

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4 years ago

Waiting next period

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4 years ago

The next one is just published. I wonder why you wait. 🤔

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4 years ago

I very much love your article, hope to read mo soon, keep posting stay safe

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4 years ago

I posted two more. How come you never read them?

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4 years ago

Peace Of mind

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4 years ago

❤️A very beautiful story. All in all, the story has been great. There was a request to share more such stories. ❤️Thank you❤️

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4 years ago

The more is just published but to be honest I am not so sure if it was a honest request or just a comment.

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4 years ago

nice story dear. keep it up

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