Away from that door

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"Move away from the door and let me ."

He pulled her by her hair backwards, not cared about her screaming, she was hurt. He held his breath while pressing his ear against the door.

"What's that sound?" he hissed.

"Bugs, I think the room is.." she cried.

"Bugs? Stop that nonsense woman!"

As if bugs make such a sound. His entire life he observed them, already as a toddler started his collection. A loud crash came from inside, the door moved. What was that terrible smell?



"He did it again!"

"Be glad you have a job, stop the whining. You big baby!"

Surrounded by bottles he hung in his chair and waved at her. His way to make clear the discussion was closed and she should leave. The drama on television was more important than his daughter's complaints about her employer, his old friend, and once a colleague.


Since his former assistant agreed to take part in the experiment the professor lost all reason. The rats, test rabbits, dogs, and even the monkey, they all died. What happened to the assistant? Did he really leave? She only peeped through the keyhole to be sure no one was inside. The noises coming from that particular room made her feel uncomfortable. Something was wrong. Bugs crawled underneath the door and for a second an eye stared at her. At that same moment, the professor had... The eye!


Only 10 bugs to eat were left in the container with the warning. The food he no longer needed. Why not set them free? They ran in a straight line to the door and found their way out. No option for him, not with his seize. The lightning through the keyhole was gone. He crawled closer to have a look. His body hurt after all the changes just his brain seemed to remain the same. He could think.
Triggered by the scream and familiar voice he ran into the door. High time to end the experiment.



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Nice

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4 years ago

There is something in your article. It's somehow deep that you may think beyond the box.

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4 years ago

Perhaps because it's a story with an open-end or with weird prompts (sentences) given? Although, if it comes to it all my stories end in the same way. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. 💕

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4 years ago

Its nice and deep. I think I'll try out the site for myself.

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4 years ago

Nice n deep n now, can't wait for your next article, miss wakeupkitty :)

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4 years ago

How about you giving it a try? Use the prompt generator link and characters, storyline, etc

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4 years ago

I will try, hope it will turn out as good as yours

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4 years ago

Just follow your mind, feelings, don't think too deep about it. 🍀💕

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4 years ago

Thanks, miss wakeupkitty n that's what i am doing when i am writing an article here

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4 years ago

So nicee!

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4 years ago

Nice article with deep meaning. 💞

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4 years ago

Thank you for reading dear. I appreciate it. Perhaps you like to give it a try to with the prompt generator I mentioned? 💕

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