@vanya_29
Her #2
She always looks in the mirror She thinks that there's something more No! It is not beauty But the love she wants from everybody All around us in this world, we are mocked by own reflections That only shows the things we hate and show our imperfections But when you look a little deep, there is so nuch that you hide That you don't need to be holding in and bottling up inside There are so many special things about her She just needs to appreciate and embrace it too Living in this cruel world is such a struggle But remember, don't surrender and win the battle.
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Very nice work. Using mirrors and reflections is a great way to show your point. Good job 😊
Yeeeyyy thanks for appreciating ❤ That's my old poem that I've wrote 2 years ago hahaha
It's actually pretty good. It's a nice piece.
Thank you 😇
By the way, I published one about writing poems, did you read it yet?
Yep.
Very nice dear❤ we must all fight and win every battle!
Ow Hellow @vanya_29. Never surrender.
Hello MisterWrite. Yah you're right. Never surrender.
Yes @vanya_29. I am write.
You write haha
"But remember, don't surrender and win the battle." Never quit. Walang bayaw na quitter!!
Bayaw baya. Laban lang ❤