The taste of spring then becomes different

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3 years ago
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There is a tree of life in the world

A separate story in each branch

Sees a spring and an autumn

In essence, she loves spring but

He doesn't want to be unfair to autumn

I am the tree of life after all

Let it be in autumn, what is it?

If the tree of life is a person in trouble

A person does not hear this, he does not fit, he makes up

If it fits, it has to change because

Creates a living space for itself

What do you do with human nature?

Mankind is in

Want to understand presence

Even if he doesn't understand then he defines

Because this is what he needs

Can't live without identification

That's why stories are formed

Yesterday's tricks come true today

Man believes in his own lie

It takes shape according to its needs continuously

Mankind comes from the concrete and goes to the abstract

He knows he needs it

Under consciousness lies this truth

It stays that way as long as it does not surface

Humans love the unknown

Even if he tried to mate it

Even if we break up, we are together account

That cannot be separated from the unknown

His existence is unknown because

And if he knew what the magic would remain, wouldn't it?

The tree of life is a magical scene

Man uses his creativity

Not seeing the skill in yourself

On the stage where he performed his play

Mankind is less and less self

Few aspects hardly get the essence

Likes to create without being creative

Being created is more attractive

She sews clothes on the tree of life and reaps

Each branch becomes a separate planet

Each leaf is a different story

Man does not like what comes out of man

Like he himself came out of something else

Their beliefs and ideologies constantly clash

Creates value, devalues ​​itself

Does this while wanting to be valued

Humankind is a wretched and miserable creature

Although it is scary to give an example of this

It just stays that way, it realizes itself

Mankind has created everything

There is no person that is a decision, only one

Human beings are history of contradictions

All of their mythologies clash with each other

Greek mythology is written

There poseidon god of the seas earthquake

Roman mythology came on tour

There the poseidon passes as neptune

Everyone says my faith is right

While being unfair to the other

Their nationalism is selfish

Their religion is hope that does not exist in this world

Keep it for the other side

It's always a bad check

Incomprehensible until it is exchanged

In the end it becomes human again.

It's too late, it doesn't matter anymore

Man cannot decide on anything

He calls the union to the directive, then in his own way

Mankind is a burden to the tree of life

Not a good fruit after all

He can't reach his own self

Its element remains a word in the world it is

Likes to see it as sacred

She just can't sanctify herself

That's why he breaks down as an idol

Equivalent to one with fruit again

The tree of life that cannot be absorbed

They say the fruit tree is stoned

Because mankind stoned the tree of life

It falls out of its own branch in no time

Man tears people off from life

He doesn't know that he doesn't want to know

It prides itself on bringing people to the world

While his arrival is not in his own hands

He sells a lot with what he brings

Ali stones the tree of life, ahmet falls

Buse, the stones fall down the tree of life

You say the world is almost hollow

Human is dropping people into

It means that I did not drop it, I lifted it.

The tree of life is not a stone of patience, let it crack

One day it will bear its last fruit of course

Then what a tree to be stoned

Nor a person who would want to stone

Undermining the tree of life is suicide

Who wants to commit suicide get a little further

This is the tree of life, not the narrow tree

Uses the tree of life as a narrow tree

Humans who don't know how to swing

That's why he lives incompletely his childhood

Then he longs for his childhood

You have to water the tree of life and keep it alive

He's already alive even though we don't kill

Humans go to extremes in everything

He suffocates his beloved when he says to love

Everything is good by its measure so

Whoever looks good has to take care of it

To be happy and worth it to the heart

The tree of life bears fruit and becomes alive

Gives live fruit, the tree of life dies

If you had the opportunity, if your life

Would the fruit of the tree be human?

Even the tree doesn't want the rotten fruit

Being in the branch is seen as an insult to him

The word of the tree of life is an essence alive

If you want to be alive, don't break the union

This is an absolute beautiful dream for everyone

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Is this a translation or?

@heartbeat1515? Your opinion please moderate.

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3 years ago

I'm waiting for you too. I have read this twice but I cannot figure it out. I tried translating it to Malay and Indonesian too but it still doesn't make sense to me. Perhaps Spanish?

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@ heartbeat1515 @wakeupkitty I'm sorry for making you this hard. I wrote in an original way. I wrote a mixture of lyrical and didactic. I will try to write more clearly.

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It's no problem if the reader has to think or can interpret it in a different way but it would be good if we make poetry understandable for everyone. Btw there's no need to stick to certain old ways of poetry. We live in 2021 and time has changed and so does literature, the way of writing and the readers.

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Thank you. You can separate these two types of poetry and focus on delivering your message more clearly.

Poetry can help us to deliver messages. If the can get your messages, then your poetry is a success.

We are doing curation dua week 1 now for the community SYT: poems. Feel free to join in.

You can find out more about it from these article we wrote.

https://read.cash/@heartbeat1515/curation-duo-week-one-through-the-screen-2cdb3217

https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/embrace-df20d115

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