Is there justice for Mark? (Freewriting)

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Mark was eating on the street when there's a sudden commotion.

Mark is an outstanding student in his class. He's always in the rankings. He never failed to make his parents proud.

Mark is aware of their current social status. To help his parents, he doesn't ask for money when he needs allowance. Instead, he is taking some sideline jobs to earn income. He does this to help his parents and not to feel burdened to them.

Mark was on his way home when he felt the growling to his tummy. He decided to eat some street foods on the side of the street. Due to school expenses, this is the only food that he can afford. He's also saving his money for the next day. He was about to finish what he was eating when suddenly police started to shout at him saying to get on the ground. He froze in fear and confusion. Later on, police decided to push him on the ground, putting his hand at the back, cuffing them. Due to his fear of what these police officers may do to him, he tries to escape and fight back. Unfortunately, the police shot him immediately.

Police officers explained that Mark was on the drugs watchlist and was killed when tried to escape and fight back.

The mother can't believe what happen to her son. She knows to herself that Mark is a good person and can't do such things. She was left in dark embracing the cold body of her son.

Is there justice for mark?


I wrote it on my native language first before translating it to English. I tend to think faster in my first language. Thanks to the help of google translate for making it possible to share it with you.

Time: 10 minutes
Translator: Google translate
A device used: Smartphone.
Editing: Grammarly
Prompt: Random scenario

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πŸ˜₯ sad. A situation that happen in reality.

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3 years ago

My heart is on total sadness when I heard something like this happened.

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3 years ago

Yeah, you can't help but be sad. If something this happen really.

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3 years ago

Nice story, I'll try the link, then get a scenario to write a short story later

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3 years ago

You should try it. You will be forced to think out the box. Also, that website help the writers to prevent writer's block :)

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3 years ago

it is a very sad but true to life scenario of what we call war on drugs that our president want to continue,they just give power to the authorities with out legal and human rights actions.

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3 years ago

This is a good example of a freewrite!

As I understand Mark is a boy which means you need to use the word "he". Unfortunately, Google translate messed it up. In your story Mark sometimes is a she (girl). I haven't figured out yet how to avoid a wrong translation. The only way now is to use different sentences and avoid using these words. πŸ‘πŸ€πŸ’•

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Thank you for correcting me, I appreciate it. I should proofread it before posting. Lesson learned πŸ‘β€

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