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A poem for the community
Haiku Listen to the sound The melody of the train Calling out to me. Look at the grey cloud Bringing smiles to a farmer Water to his crops. Read more about haiku. https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/style-and-usage/rules-for-writing-haiku.html Narrative As I walk down the road, The sun is bright and the heat melts my soul, "Mommy," said a little voice by my side, "I'm thirsty." I held your hand tight and we walk some more, To a lemon juice stall and your eyes shines brighter than the sun. Up and down you skip by my side, For a glass of lemon had quench your thirst. Read more about narrative poetry https://www.masterclass.com/articles/what-is-a-narrative-poem-3-different-types-of-narrative-poems-with-poetry-examples#what-is-a-narrative-poem Above is two examples of poems that I am expecting for the community SYT: Poems. https://read.cash/c/syt-poems-bd19 There are more but this is the two that I like most. I also entered this article for a contest held by @Ebuzzydagr8 Here is the link to the announcement. https://read.cash/@Ebuzzydagr8/writing-contest-poems-d96cb0ca#comment-45c2e6bc
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Nice poem though i liked 2nd one most😍
Thank you.
The first are Haiku. It is more like a description...you say something in a certain way and mean something else. It is an interesting way of poetry.
Yh it is but 2nd one is so understandable..thats why😊
Because it is a narrative kind of poem, it suppose to be easier to understand. The first one is just as @wakeupkitty describe.
Makes me thirsty. That phrase of "heat melts my soul."
😁😁 I hope you already got a drink to quench your thirst.
A good glass of cold water, and I have already quenched my thirst, hehehe
That is great. I like cold water especially after I ate something that is too spicy and it is the perfect drink to quench my thirst on a hot day.
Cold water is my drink of choice. I don't drink canned soft drinks, I prefer very cold water.
I like Haiku too and the second one brings light plus it will be understandable to everyone.
Thank you. I need something to write and I guess I will try submitting this one to @ebuzzydagr8 contest.
I think you need to change the community. It's a good entry and two ideas for those who are not into Haiku. You could add an explanation somehow so those interested know what to do.
Sure. Let me edit this some more.