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hahahaha try ko gawan to ng part 2 😂

Sigeeee usto ko🤧🤧

thank you, i appreciate it! ❤️

hahahaha sori pu 🤧

"I counted when you said yes to me" it's in the pov of the man, the girl is the one that leave him.

I think I better read the whole poetry or perhaps this poetry should be written in whole instead of pet one and part two. It gave me a different view from the original one.

This is the original one, that's why it's part 1. I wrote this first before I came up with the second part. Thanks 🙂

I have read part two. Just my opinion, because you repeat the counting it made the two poems doesn't connect. It would sound much better if you can do something to make it connect next time. Thank you for giving me a reply.

Also, check it's part 2, the girl doesn't leave because she want to, she's in heaven, a kind of lost that's totally devastating.

Alright. I search whole the whole poem.

She has written a better one. Perhaps she wrote this one in a hurry because this too simple as what she always wrote.

Number two, the follow up is even cheaper/worse. Perhaps it is a joke although I don't see the fun part of it. I don't know but poetry is a certain way of writing and most of what I read here is no poetry.

I have seen a few good ones but my reading time is not as much as you.

I doubt it is the reading time. Can be we follow different people or have a different idea if it comes to poetry?

Perhaps we have different ideas but that is not bad. We have a lot of angles of views.