The perfect crime.

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4 years ago

Elha was 19 years old, she was a happy girl. Thanks to a car accident her way of reasoning didn't match her age, she was basically like a 13-year-old girl. But she made a mistake, she was in love with me, she didn't take the right precautions and she got pregnant. Since then I began to study my situation in this “secret” relationship.

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Her mother offered support and asked her to come home to take care of her and the baby, but Elha refused. In her mind she had made up a fantasy where I would agree to live with her at some point.

She was excited about her pregnancy. I don't know how she could accept living alone with an unplanned pregnancy and especially without my support. I don't want to take responsibility for a son, much less with a woman like that. Her mother doesn’t know that I’m the father of that baby her daughter is carrying and she will, probably, never know but her daughter is hopeful about me.

But something happened.

Margaret, her mother, hasn't seen her daughter for 3 days. Generally, Elha calls her whenever she wants, if two days go by without calling one calls the other, and whenever Margaret senses that something is wrong she goes to Elha's house and rings her door several times.

This time no one answers. Elha doesn't answer either her phone or the door, so her mother calls the police and asks them to open the door of the house because she was afraid that something would happen to her daughter, since she didn’t answer. After explaining everything that normally happened between her and her daughter, as well has her daughters situation, the police agreed and opened the door. They let Margaret pass and they stayed downstairs while she went up the stairs, calling for her daughter.

 Suddenly they hear the mother's cry. They run upstairs to see Margaret, looking at a body in a room, with its head covered and a rope around its neck.

Elha had committed suicide. There was a suicide letter in the room as well. Elha wrote that she didn't want to have a fatherless child, that she felt very lonely and no one could understand her, which is why she makes the decision to leave this world.

The investigators tell Margaret that everything indicates that her daughter simply committed suicide, but the mother tells them no. There was no way her daughter would commit suicide because she was so excited about her pregnancy.

No, Elha would never.

 Investigators and the coroner conclude that it was a suicide. She arranged her own death and the case was about to be closed.

But Margaret's insistence leads investigators to find pieces that don't match. Elha had several chores to do over the next few weeks. She paid in advance for things for the baby and for someone to fix a room at her house, presumably the baby’s. If she thought about committing suicide why waste money for something like that? The investigation continues.

And that's when they hit me, the interrogation cornered me and I confessed because of the pressure. I told them everything. Everything about how I made her do everything, so that I could set it up as if she committed suicide.

Elha believed in me. She always did. I asked her to play a game where I told her to write a suicide letter. At first she was nervous but I eventually convinced her to do it, she believed in me after all. After doing and writing in the letter what I asked, I told her to put a pillowcase on her head… And then the rest came faster. Once I had managed to immobilize her I put a rope around her neck from behind and she couldn't do anything.

…Once she stopped moving, I cleaned everything up and left.

It was my perfect crime, I just didn't count on Margaret's stubbornness in insisting that her daughter would not commit suicide and Elha not referring to me about the things she would do at home for her son's arrival.

…Perhaps, in the end, she didn’t trust me that much.

 

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The best way to commit a perfect crime is actually to go with what looks accidental. To me, those are harder to trace as long as you keep your work clean and even when the victim had plans agead because "accidents happen" this was a really cool story btw, never expected a first person approach from you though

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4 years ago

The one who related the murder was the murderer. He confesses to his murder because he was harassed by investigators. Even so, the investigators did not believe that there was really a murderer but that it was suicide. They did not want to reveal that they were wrong and that a mother encouraged them to keep finding out. It is a story told by his own murderer thinking about his "perfect crime" because even the investigators did not believe him when he confessed. Until he himself related things that no one else knew.

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4 years ago

Ahhh the cases where the crime was too perfect that he had wanted to get investigated by the end of it. Then ehy did he not chose to kill her himself if he had wanted an investigation. Wuite unusual if you ask me but i guess he may have anticipated the nature of the mother

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4 years ago

A murderer is a psychopath if you ask me. Although they seem to have a behavior that we call "normal" they are always deranged, people who want to attract attention, antisocial misfits. That is why there are many murderers who leave clues to be discovered and even so the investigators do not find them. It seems that the criminal must yell at the investigators' faces so that they will finally discover and arrest him.

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4 years ago

Well there are those cases where even with evidence, the felon isn't convicted but then that's because of that stereotype in the head that criminals usually have this kind of image like tattoos and a psychological record of sorts but those that seemed normal really don't even get suspicions at all so they can get away with it

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4 years ago

It is so. That's why investigators get stuck in solving crimes. They look for those with antecedents and they become engrossed in them and do not admit new psychopaths in their inquiries.

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4 years ago

You love crime so much. You've discussed the use of mucus in this way. Eleven have tried....

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4 years ago

You don't understand it from your point of view but you have to understand it from the other side. You have to take it with the person you are not talking about.

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4 years ago

good job bro keep it up

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4 years ago

There's no such thing as the perfect crime - there must always be a missing link or something. It might take years, decades maybe, but one day, the truth will come out.

Too bad for Elha.

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4 years ago

That's a relative truth I guess. I think that a crime that goes 30 years or 50 years without being discovered, is not close to perfection? In other words, if the criminal person does not confess or say where a corpse is, is that not a perfect crime? I'm starting to doubt that the perfect crime doesn't exist.

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4 years ago

I admit that many crimes have gone unsolved for decades, but technoligy and nee evidence has proved to solve many of them in the long run. Apparently, laws now state that the body must not be found to prove guilt, but sufficient evidence can do the trick.

No matter how haard a criminal tries, there must always be a weak link

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4 years ago

It's not that I don't agree with you. forence science is evolving thanks to the evolution of crime. There may be a link that is found one hundred years after committing the crime. Well, the original idea is that there is justice even if the hundred years pass. But my point is that neither the criminal nor the law could find anything in all that time. There was no human justice in a short time. While the criminal enjoyed his crime thinking that they never did. He did not find out that after a hundred years they discovered him.

I believe that the investigation is the most important thing to find a crime and not get carried away by what they see at first sight.

In this case, it was thanks to the persistent insistence of Elha's mother in telling them that her daughter would never commit suicide that the detectives continued investigating and found the culprit.

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4 years ago

I understand, even though justice is served, those who lost won't be satisfied to know that whoever did it suffered.

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4 years ago

I have noticed that the relatives of the victims say that their murdered relatives will not return but that they feel a great relief when they learn that the assailants were found and prosecuted. In these unsolved murder cases, family members do not close the cycle. And they never found out that after 50 more years, they would find a serial killer or another killer.

Well let the criminal investigation continue

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4 years ago

Yes, when the offender is prosecuted, it helps them rest assured that the person will never harm someone else.

It also brings closure to the whole case and ensures that people can move on from the loss

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4 years ago

I like it when the killer is discovered in the movies. Also when the investigator is accusatory.

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4 years ago

Nice story, you really got my attention...🤗

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4 years ago

Nothing perfect about this crime! Only lazy investigation will look only at the obvious. Elha was unfortunate to have met such a man.

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4 years ago

The investigation only looked at the obvious and failed to look for clues to the opposite of a suicide. Elha was very unlucky.

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4 years ago

Nice story. Read more to sharpen your writing skills

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4 years ago

🥺🥺😔😔 actually heart touching story ... I pray for all that no one face this type of accident

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4 years ago

The storrry thoughhhh! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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4 years ago

this story is soo heart touching.. 💖💖 this is happen so many time with many girls but they have no support and boys also left

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4 years ago

That story which is written in the article is horrible.

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4 years ago

Omg! That's so heart touching also horrible. Crime is always forbidden, how can anyone do that!

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4 years ago

That's so disgusting, he did the first mistake that is make the girl unplanned pregnant, 2nd ridiculous thing not to care about her and her baby! 😑 and the rest of.........

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4 years ago

They do not discover him because of his mistakes but because he wanted to confess to his murder. Apparently he made no mistakes.

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4 years ago

Young loves are very emotional, and they make a lot of mistakes out of emotion, the cost of which is lifelong.

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4 years ago

When a girl is pregnant, she will always want her husband by her side. Because girls are in a difficult situation then and it is very important to be by their husband's side to give them courage. It is really a big crime.

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4 years ago

Not so perfect.. The story is good but something is missing.. I just cant tell what it is

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4 years ago

Many details of how the crime occurred are missing. I did not want to elaborate on the part of the details that convinced the investigators that it was a suicide. I just wanted to make the point that the investigative part when you pigeonhole the obvious, circle it, it's very difficult to get them out of there. That is why many crimes pass as suicides.

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4 years ago

Well you have a point. .maybe next time you put a bug twist in your story 😊😊 but it's good 👍👍

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4 years ago

Thanks for your comment. I will try to make a crime with many details so that you can enjoy looking for the aggressor. You think? hahaha

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4 years ago

😅😅 it's up to you.m but why do you like crime stories?

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4 years ago

I like to write about many subjects. I like how crime works to solve crime. Crime today is too evolved and it seems to me that ordinary people are lagging behind. Trusting as if the world remains the same. Without caring when leaving. Arriving as late at night as I can. Allowing strangers at home to fix things ... and stop counting. We do not evolve along with organized crime.

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4 years ago

Yeah in some cases it is like that.. People become comfortable in this world.. That's why crimes are everywhere

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4 years ago

It's really a perfect crime. Who is this man anyway? What's his relationhip to the family? Why does Elha fall love in Love with a son of gun man, poor her. She just love him but 😒

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4 years ago

She just falls in love. She wants to be an independent woman. But her inability to analyze a pathological behavior in the man did not allow her to see that this man only manipulated her at his convenience. To the point of leading her to death. It happens in many couples, in many marriages. It happened to Elha.

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4 years ago

It sad but that's happen in reality yeah. The irony.

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4 years ago

Yes, there are many things that we imagine and do not know that happen in real life.

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4 years ago

I read your story and realized who it was. Then you should be by his side all the time. You don't understand

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4 years ago

The crime was perfect but the criminal doesn't. A mothers instict is stronger you can't defeat.

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4 years ago

mothers know their children better than anyone. They know what their children can and cannot do. as long as they have had a lot of connection with them.

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4 years ago

Yes, thats the essence of bonding...

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