"The Chocolate"

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Her heart is pounding loudly, "would I be caught?" she asked herself. Great fear swept her sanity. The feeling of a 10- year old girl is somewhat overwhelming. She just picked 3 chocolate bars in one of the shelves inside a big department store and secretly slid it in her skirts' pocket. She has been doing it numerous times already and she didn't fail to come out being uncaught. But this time is different, she has no company. Oftentimes she joins her classmates during lunchbreak inside that big store and busy looking for some goods displayed and picked everything they like.

Many times also they bought something for her and paid it by themselves. But those many times made her feel pitiful. She is a product of a poor family. A penny given by her mother the only one staying in her pocket is intended for a ride fare going home. No allowance. No sandwiches or a biscuit for a snack. Only rice and a single boiled-egg for lunch in her lunchbox, but it's ok at least there is something for her tummy to feed on. Her dad was just a poor labourer who feeds them enough.

This time, she wanted something more, she envied those girls who have money to buy themselves those expensive snacks and junkies they want. But she only fit herself in feasting her eyes with those colourful displays on the shelves of that store and gets lucky if they bought her something too.

Whenever they come out of school every day, she goes out with them. But now she wanted to be different. She doesn't want to look pathetic and looks like a dog always following her owner. She wanted these girls to treat her as if she is also something. The first attempt she did it was a successful one thought she thought she'll get caught. Followed by another attempt, third, fourth, she can't count.

Now she is alone, she was late in consuming her lunch because she has to Finnish a task given by her adviser. So after securing her lunch box in her bag and leave it in their classroom, she hurriedly goes out from their school and walked swiftly towards the road directing to the department store which is just a few blocks away from the public school she is studying. She is hoping she can catch with the girls. It is better to be with them because she won't be noticed by the other costumers if she has company.

She's late, the girls already left the store as she can't find them in every lane inside when she arrived. But like a routine, and maybe an addiction she was led by her feet to the specific shelf she used to stand and feast her eyes every time they entered the store. She discreetly picked 3 bars of KitKat and swiftly slid it inside her pocket with her eyes cautiously side glancing without turning her head.

She decided to go out and imagining herself bragging her bars with the girls when she gets back to their school. She will be lauded for having a generous "uncle" who always gives her expensive chocolates. She is approaching 10 steps from the exit, 9... 8.. 7... she met the guard's eyes she always does and continued her steps. She's near from grasping her victory, 6...5... She raised her eyes again. 4...3 there's something from the security guards eyes that looks different. He never left his eyes on her. "Did he saw me?" she asked herself. "But NO he can't see me because he never left his post near the exit/entrance wide door. It's his job."Confidently the girl marched her feet for the remaining steps 2...1 !! A hand just grabbed her collar in the back. Her body became stiff. She has no guts to turn around to find out who is holding her collar behind. By firmly holding her hand, she can barely notice the noddings and small talks between the guard and the stranger. Now the stranger is pulling her and guiding her towards the stairs leading up to the second floor. Her legs are shaking with her hands sweating. She can't swallow the lump that is about to form in her throat. As they ascend the stairs, her mind is floating. Images in her mind, girls laughing and the boys sneering at a poor girl with a handcuff in her hand. Her mom beating her so terribly. Her dad looking at her with a solemn face. Now all are playing in her mind over and over...

The end.

If you want to know the outcome you can comment to me directly. It would be very long to include the whole scenario here.πŸ˜…

I just edited the article. I added the link of its continuation. 

HUMILIATION

This is a true story of a girl close to me who experience lots of ups and downs in her life. One experience she can't ever forget because of poverty. She's a grown woman now living happily with her family and loving husband.

This is my very first entry to @Dangerous_Fly giveaway contest " a moment to remember. I was supposed to publish this earlier but I was disturbed by home tasks😁. Hope this will pass through our host's judgement. Thank you for the opportunity.

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You should have ended this story. I can't wait to read the remaining part of it. Great work .πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Oh i did but its the second part.. πŸ˜… Its quite long i dont think i can't finnish it on time. So i just submitted the second one in the community but i did not comment the link in your give away post.

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4 years ago

there.... I can relate with this but the other way round, my husband used to give money as my eldest's baon which I strongly opposed because the child would only buy junks that's why its better for me to buy choco milk for his drinks and biscuits. his father justifies that growing an orphan, he always envied his classmates who have baon that's why he doesn't want his child feel the same way. we always argued on this matter,coz what's my preparing him healthy food for?till my kid started to take coins I left on the table because I really opposed his father when he gives him money unless I haven't bought anything or cook for his baon. Thats another problem I have dealt with, glad I was able to cut it and now I don't worry anymore if I have forgotten to keep any coins away from his eyes

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4 years ago

That is a responsible parent should do as a counterpart for his/her child's growth and in their school. I'm glad you were able to surpass that problem about your son's provision. At least you find ways to substitute money for something you prepared.😊 They are more healthy than any junk foods your kids might buy with the money.

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Oh come on it's better to complete this why do you have to stop here.

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Oops sorry. I just focused on the experience of the main one of fear😊. Anyway, I am into it. I hope you still follow.😊

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Well I would let's see .

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4 years ago

Thank you 😊

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4 years ago

Nice

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4 years ago

It's better if you can drop a relevant comment about the article and not just a "nice " word.

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4 years ago

Whoever grabbed her, I wish it was his Knight in Shining Armor, but not because she's a damsel in distress, but because what she's doing is bad and it's need to stop, someone who will stop her from doing it again, someone who will save her.

Anyway, what if the one who grab her is her the one 🀭 it's one of her classmates, that classmate of her is a snob, a top student in their school, a popular one, a good looking fellas 🀩. And then he will help her, and then getting to know each other, they will have a relationship and then they live happily ever afte 🀩

Sorry na po, wapa lang talagang limit ang imagination koww 🀭

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You have a wild imagination. Yeah she should be stopped before it will stick to her and becomes maniac of stealing. But sorry none of the above 😁. I was also hoping for the good ending in that situation but unfortunately it's not .πŸ€ͺ Well, not in that day😊

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4 years ago

Hahaha, I love to imagine talaga, especially if the story I read has a bitter ending, I will modify it and end in my mind, with a happy ever after. πŸ˜‚

None of the above, okay, I will wait for the next chapter nalang 🀩 waitingggg...... 🀩

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4 years ago

Likewise here... I don't like sad endings.. It affects my mood 🀣🀣🀣 like @Charlotte s' rain and cloud😁

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4 years ago

Hahaha, when did she Published that story? I think I haven't check that yet. I like her new story, still ongoing, "Hear the sound of Silence"

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I will wait till the ending for that new one... Check on her profile. 😁

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