I wonder how it feels to be one...

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4 years ago
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I wonder how It feels to be a raindrop

Dropping from the mother clouds with the thunderclaps

Shooting in unison with your fellow droplets

and plunge to the roofs of establishments and houses.

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I wonder how to it feels to be one of those wild flowers

No one sowed and seeded but still it grows.

Watered and cared by no one's hands

Yet it exists and even blooms with arrogance.

Clipart from pixabay

I wondered how it would be like to be a stream,

that flows and leave it's home with a new dream

to reach a different goal and destination

from calm waters, running rivers to the waves of the ocean.

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Ocean waves from pixabay

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I love how you wonder through the point of view of nature❤ and like the other reader the underlined poem quite bothered us while reading but like I said it's a personal style so i guess it's okay😁 as a whole you wrote a good one❤

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Thank you, i decided to edit it, as i look at it the third time, i realize its bothersome😅

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

I am summoned by @wakeupkitty. The poem is an expression of the poet if he is part of nature. I like the poem but the bold and underline does not make it look like a poem. @charlotte is this a new way of writing a poem? A lot do this. All written in bold letter.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Sorry i just stopped by.. Such a full day busy with tutorial on kids, i can't grasp time to peek on my phone since the modular studies started. Well, i don't ussually apply the bolds and underlined words, i just tried it for experiment.

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

No worries. I can understand that. At least your reply. I see. Well, it does not give a nice reading features if it is al in bold. It is like forcing the eyes to look at each word. Usually bold is use for highlighted sentences or words. As charlotte said it could be a new style for writing. I don't think it is comfortable to look at all bold text on a screen. It is just my opinion.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

It's a personal style or choice I think, sometime bold words are used when we use prompts in making our poem to give emphasis to the word, but making it bold all throughout the sentences is a personal choice of the poet.

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User's avatar Charlotte
4 years ago

Wala yan, trip lang. Thanks anyway. 😉

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

I see. In my opinion, the bold letter is only used for words that we wanted to highlight, as you said prompt, instead of the whole poem. Thank you for stopping by.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Yeah, i agree. Thanks for being here.

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

You edited. Now it looks nicer for me. Thank you.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

I can't help but wonder too but I understand how they feel because I'm almost just like them.... it's hard being the only one....too deep a poetry

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User's avatar Ericmannie
4 years ago

I'm glad you feel the message. Thanks for stopping by.

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

I can only wonder with you😅

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User's avatar z_graeden
4 years ago

🤣🤣🤣

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

This is a hard read for me with all the bold and lines underneath. I wonder why, what exactly it adds to the words written. Perhaps @heartbeat1515 can appreciate it.

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

it lessens the boring font

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

I wonder how it's like to become the meiosis cell division. Breaking those couple of alleles apart😅😅😅

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

interesting🤣🤔 you keep me wondering about it also.though I'm no longer familiar with science😭

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

😓😓😓😓just enjoy the vibe then😓😓😓

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

I'm enjoying 😅. Do you want to spread your genes? 😁

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

Nahh, want to take care of genes that need care😉😉

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Can you take care of my genes then. They are exclusive and with high class😅.

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

Easy. collect rasin from tree....preserve you hair or nail..or a small part of your body. It will be preserved for thousands of year😉😉

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Lol. I would become mummified. 🤣

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

Yeah...your DNA will be.. Easiest way to preserve DNA with natural substance

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

But i dont want to see my body full of wrinkles all over my body when i get my second life back.

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User's avatar Xzeon
4 years ago

Nah.. Your whole body can be designed with synthetic Biotechnology. You will be good as new

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago
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