Feeling Free

Insects , stream sounds and

Green mountains peak views abide,

Make us free alive.

-rena-

Hi,this is my first entry for Haiku Poem Contest for @Dolores .

Actually this is my unforgettable poem I made during my high school life. Unfortunately it was not following the rules or the formula, 5-7-5 syllables. So I add more word(s) to make it real Haiku poem. I never mind the formula before as long as I had one to pass😁. Now I know and remember about it. Allow me to post here the original one whom I thought was The good Haiku poem. Here is it👇.

Insects sound and (lack one syllable)

Mountains views abide (2 syllables more)

Make us free alive. (right )

So I hope, you like my haiku poem, the words stated above..... I really dont know what is the best title suited in my poem. And it comes to my senses about feeling free, so that's it.

Please let us all join for the Haiku Poem contest, here is the link for more info. https://read.cash/@Dolores/haiku-writing-event-bring-your-best-7d8184b3