"I am finally free. "
**She was a stranger in a very strange land.** No one knew who she was or what she had done. Luna is eighteen years old, young, and innocent, or is she? She used to have a family that she thought would protect her from this cruel world. But that's not the case. She was abused by her father, and when she told her mom, she did not believe her. Her mother even told her that she was just making things to tarnish her father's reputation. Everyone respects her father because he is a good pastor in everyone's eyes, but not in hers. Every night, when everyone seemed to be getting their sleep, her father would sneak into her room and do something to her that even her young mind could not understand. *Why would he do that to me? He is my father, the person that I thought would protect me.* Every night, Luna had to endure everything. He was forcing her to do unimaginable things, and she felt helpless. And her mother doesn't even care. She was so blindly in love with her husband that she believed everything he told her. Luna tried to ask for help from her friends, but she was caught by her father while she was on her phone trying to call Dino, her best friend. And her father told her that he would kill Dino if she told everyone. She got scared. She couldn't do that to Dino. But this has to stop. She can no longer take it. She felt so dirty and disgusted that she had to scrub her body so hard that it would get bruised every time she took a bath. She had to do something. She heard the doorknob twist that night. She knew that it was her father. So she gets herself ready for what could happen tonight. *"Are you awake?"* Her father asked, but she kept lying still and pretended to be asleep. Then she heard him unzipping his jeans. She was nervous, but she had to keep herself calm. Her father slowly sat by her side while caressing her skin. *"You're so beautiful. Tonight, you'll be mine again."* While he was slowly removing her clothes, Luna quickly grabbed the knife she had kept hidden under her pillow, and, as hard as she could, she stabbed him right through his heart. He was surprised and could not defend himself. Luna stabbed him over and over again. Blood was all over her face, and she was showing no remorse for what she had done. She was smiling and crying at the same time while she was looking at her father, lifeless. *"I am now free!"* These were the words that she uttered when, suddenly, the door opened and it was her mom. She saw her running towards her father's lifeless body. But she did not expect what she did next. *"Runaway, Luna."* Her mother grabbed the knife from her hand while holding her face, crying. "*My poor child, I am so sorry for not being able to protect you. Now, run. Go to a place where no one can recognize you. Live a new life. Now go ahead, run along, child. "I love you mom,"* she said as she hugged her goodbye. That was all in the past; now she had to start anew. To have a new chance at a better life. Hello, lovelies! Another article from the TMDWA for today. I am just inspired to do another story using the prompt generator. And I hope you like how the story goes. Things like this happen in real life. Sad but true. The family we thought would protect us and provide us with a good future are the ones who will ruin it. The best thing to do to avoid this happening to our family is to keep an open line of communication with them and check your children now and then. I just don't understand why there are people who could do such evil things to their own flesh and blood, so disgusting. Anyway, I'll end it here because my blood is boiling na. I don't know why I get emotional while writing this. Maybe it is because I am a mother. -- Date Published: April 4, 2022
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I had goosebumps while reading sis. Kahit fiction lang siya, may mga nangyayari rin na ganito sa totoong buhay. Nakakalungkot lang isipin no na may mga magulang na kayang pagsamantalahan ang anak.
Wala sa matinong pag iisip na yun sis, ugaling demonyo na mga ganun.. Dapat sa kanila eh sinusunog ng buhay s impyerno
True sis. Di na yata sila tao.
Sinabi mo pa sis
Subukan ko nga rin dyan sumulat ate
Oo beh, for sure kayang kaya mo yan..
Ang galing mag sulat ng fictional story. Clap clap!
Hehe, thank you sis!
Nakakalungkot naman yan sis. Hays galing namsn magisip. May tagalog version pbs niyang generator na yan.😁😁
Wala sis eh, pero subukan mo lang..
Hehe nagtry ako sis natural yung naisulat ko haha hindi kas natuloy tuloy sa pagsusulat
Oo sis, mabubura kasi agad kapag natigil ka lang sglit eh
Kaya nga sis.. Kaya ayun sabi ko hindi siya para sakin.
I have published also fictional story but it take me a day before I finished the whole story. Hehe, d madaling mag isip, Lalo na kapag gusto mung gumawa ng magandang story.
Tama ka jan, actually may tagalog fictional story din ako lero di ko pa nadugtungan, gang chapter 4 pa lang
Sucks, this time parang story ko naman sinulat mo HAHAHA wala nga lang bloody happenings since God did not allow it to happen ❤️
Hahaha, oi, what a coincidence ha, hehehe..
So, nagbulag bulagan lang ba talaga non ang Nanay nya to protect her or wala talaga syang pake. I mean, mas maigi pa nga atang mamatay kesa paulit ulit na lapastanganin ng sariling ama 🙄. Galit ako madams naku, kakainis. I love you my ass!
Narealize na lang nya bandang huli na nanay sya madams, hehe
Traumatize talaga to sa mga batang babae na nakaranas nito. I just couldn't imagine her life now. Hayyst sana wala nang makakaranas ng ganito.
Nakakalungkot na may mga ganitong angyayare pa din sis kasi yun mga victim eh takot magsumbong and they feel so helpless..
Wow galing Naman mommy. Kainggit mga story nyo. Haha ndi ako makaisip ng ganyang story haha
Kahapon eh wala ako maisip kaya inopen ko yan site, hahaha..
May nabasa akong story somewhat ganito din ang takbo ng storya ndi ko maalala kung sino writer. Pero ang ganda madam
Salamat madam..
Nlungkot naman ako momshie, ito tlga pinakahate ko na crime eh yung mga rapist na tatay. Ewan ko pero kumukulo agad dugo ko at di ko masikmura panu ba nila nagagawa . Hayss. Ang ganda ng story mo momshie, fictional yet makatotohanan . ☺
Tama ka momshie, mga demonyo yun mga ganyan klaseng tao eh..
Hello ate :) Nice to meet you here. What a great article, i agree with you. Sometimes, we thought our loved ones/family will always be there to help and protect us but it's so sad that this kind of story really happens nowadays. But still, I'm hoping and praying that this kind of abusive thing will be done and no one will experience this thing ever again.
Hi sis, thank you, nasa noise.cash ka din ba? Tama ka, nakakalungkot isipin na gang ngayon eh may mga ganitong pangyayare pa din ang nagaganap.
Poor luna ...So far that kind of scenario happens in real life and what's worst is that it's their own relative who did those bad things ..inflicting a lot of trauma to their minds. and they even ended their life or the life it was formed by those bad deeds.. Hoping that more luna will be free..
Yes, sad but true that until now there are more Luna that were being abused. If there are only ways to prevent this.
Parang same dun sa story na sinulat dati ni Kelzy ata yun.. Galing
di ko pa yata nababasa yun story na yun ni kelzy, hehe
Ganda nung kwento ate. Actually meron akong advocacy project for children with conflict to the law eh. If minor tong si Luna, mas may laban pa sya sa court so she don't need to runaway pa. Hehehe. Thanks for another story ate.
Salamat beh..