Rain

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The sun hides under the blanket

The atmosphere is dimmed

From the ground up and from the heavens down

Gravity is defiled by pieces in the air

Swimming in the flow of the clouds' breath

"Gather round" it seems to say

"Gather round it's still day"

Cool, fresh, bone chilling

Gets under the cloth and kisses the skin

A clap and a tear brings the rain down

The clouds begin to cry as the ground is being flogged

The greens are happy because they laugh in the wind

Dancing to the rythm as the rain drums

Faster! Louder! Harder!

Then quiet

The clouds are drained and they move along

Then as the break of dawn, the sun comes

Awakened from it's short nap

"What happened here? The ground bleeds!"

Hot with anger, the sun questions

Giggle, giggle. Whisper, whisper

The greens keep mute

This poem was dated 7/11/2018 when I went camping to Ibadan for the first time and spent four days there and every afternoon it would rain.

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Wow what a great poet by you keep it up

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4 years ago

Thank you so much ❤️

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4 years ago

You are welcome

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4 years ago

💙

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4 years ago

you are good at literature😑😑don't you♥️♥️?

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4 years ago

I am a science student tho. But I do love literature

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4 years ago

Nice line.....I fall in love with your poem...It is attractive and eye catching poem about rain.Rain has natural power which refresh our mind easily

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4 years ago

It really does. Thank you❤️

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4 years ago

Mind blowing writing.

I have already subscribed to your channel please also you can me

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4 years ago

Done✓

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4 years ago

Thanks

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4 years ago

😉😊

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4 years ago

Beautifully weaved. You own your voice!

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4 years ago

Thank you❤️❤️

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4 years ago

Wonderful! I can imagine the vivid image of the rain you portrayed 💛

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4 years ago

It's just so soothing. I tried picturing it another way tho

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4 years ago

Rain Rain go away, come again another day 😂

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4 years ago

😂😂

Another point: I do love rain💙

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4 years ago

Hope you enjoyed your stay in ibadan and got went sight seeing.

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4 years ago

I enjoyed my stay but didn't really go sight seeing. It was camp

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4 years ago

Okay...hopefully you will get to visit again.

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4 years ago

I really want to💙

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4 years ago

Then it will happen

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4 years ago

☺️

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